Prologue
Journal Entry 1
Hello my name is Jonathan Peoples, I've just recently got a job in a colony on a planet called Servo 9(weird name right?) and it's a really wild jungle planet. I'm going to be a custodian for a research facility, though I'm not sure what exactly they research...is that a good thing? I often wonder to myself if working anywhere away from Earth is a good idea ESPECIALLY after what my good (and only) friend Isaac went through...poor bastard has hallucinations of his dead girlfriend now. Good thing I'm an almost friendless sap that hasn't got any known blood relatives, nobody would miss me. Then again maybe that's not a good thing since when I die my family name dies with me. Then again, who's going to really care?
Jonathan's pen hovered over the paper; his mind swirled with thought as he contemplated what he should wright next. He eventually shrugged and shut his mostly blank journal then carefully set it down on the desk in front of him before yawning and lifting himself up off the chair.
He strode over to the other side of the room and leaned on the window sill, his eyes stared at the starry sky, his mind instantly at ease. He had often dreamed of dancing with a girl, but of course no one wanted anything to do with a "Creep like him" so his dreams where just that, dreams. But he remembered what Isaac had told him before he went away and came back a madman.
"Everybody thinks your creepy because they don't take the time to know you, don't worry someday there will be a nice woman who will take time to communicate with you, and she will turn out to really like you."
"You really think so?"
"I know so. Just wait, you'll see."
And that was the last time he saw him before the trip. Jonathan sighed to himself as he pushed his chest off the sill and plopped himself down on his bed. He had to get some sleep; after all he did have to work tomorrow.
AN: Alright here is what I want, constructive criticism. I want my writing to improve so I would like any of you to analyze my writing and tell me how I can improve. If it's not too much trouble that is. GODSPEED!