Hello everyone this is my first story so please go easy on me. A friend told me the idea o making my original story using three different characters from anime than the ones I had planned and well this is the first one. I hope you can all offer me support and point out anything I can fix or improve on.
"Speaking"
"Thought"
"Demon/God speech"
Techniques
"Phantom talking"
"phantom talking"
Chapter 1: shinobi Trailer
There was only darkness.
Throughout the cavern, until lit by the glow of a lonely lake and luminating moss surrounding it and the ceiling with stalagmites, even further into the cavern. By the lake with his only his legs dangling in the lake was a teen.
The young preteen of twelfth remained silent, not making a single sound nor motion enjoying the silence. His hair was a brilliant shade of gold, as if it had been kissed by the sun itself, with red at the tips giving it an almost fiery appearance. On either cheek, three whisker marks adorned the lightly tanned skin on his face. He was in nothing but a pair of teal colored swim trunks with a purple serpent design. He enjoyed himself with his eyes closed listening to the sound around him as the light reflected off his face, a drop of water falling from one of the stalagmites into the lake, a rippling through it.
"brother? their here. Should we take care of them?" Said in a higher pitched jester like voice from behind the teen. The teen isn't startled or surprised at the voice.
" Their here already?" *Sigh*" ….and I was just starting to enjoy myself." The teen got out of the lake and drying off his legs as he went to change into his clothes." alright then let's go bro"
The teen wore jade green short sleeve shirt with a Chinese leviathan going up the left of his chest, with a purple highlights. He wore over that a three tailed purple sleeveless hoodie like suit jacket with jade highlights. He wore a belt with a gold bucket along with his black anbu pants taped off that heeled with modified boot shinobi sandals with weights. He wore green fingerless gloves with metal plating.
The teen form a single handsign with his left hand, he disappears in a swirl of water.
(east entrance of kohona)
On the road trail towards kohona were merchants and civilians running for their life's. The reason was behind them in the form of six huge bipel bears like creatures chasing them. They were red with specks of black in color of their fur with stone thorns adoring their bodies from the tip o their spines to their chests and claws." Rooooooooooar!" they advanced on the merchants and civilians, in their feral mind that nothing could stop them from their prey…. well almost nothing as a shuriken found itself lodged in one of the bear like creature's skull causing great pain to it.
"oooh that looks like it hurts huh? sooo few Majors huh? Now were did you lot came from" said the very same teen from earlier. He shifted his head at the civilians and merchants "hey you alright? If so, then you should hurry up and leave. "he said as he then turned his sight back to the Majors. "you know… I was enjoying myself until you guys came. And now your gonna pay for it by entertaining me, how's that sounds?" his only replied was a roar of anger. 'I thought as much' he sighs as one of the Majors came at him with a swift of its which he ducked out of the way as he maneuvers around it along with the others who'd join in on trying to hit him. The teen noticed he was boxed in, to which didn't go unnoticed by the Majors as they all attack him at the same time. Only for a whirlpool of water to protect him, knocking the Majors away as the water disperse to show what appears as a large, serpent-like dragon with purple and teal scales and a white underbelly, it has a large curve bladed tail. It had its body curled around the blonde teen protectively with its head right next to him.
"really Naruto you must be more aware of your surroundings next time brother." It said to the now named Naruto who'd looked embarrassed.
" heh heh sorry about that Levi ill be more careful from now on" Naruto chuckled.
"sigh…. oh well. we still have some problems to take care right brother?" Levi asked as he looked at the Majors circling them
"right well time to do our thing bro!" he shouted as he enters a stance with his left hand in a one handed ram seal with his right arm cross over with water covering it. "I offer up my memories. Phantom…" he whispered as water started to swirl around him at his feet.
"…. Stream!" he shouted as he waves his right arm in an arc causing a whirlpool to engulf him. As it consumed him he started to change with the water swirl around his form. Levi himself became like water and he slithered himself into the whirlpool that enveloped Naruto. What emerged was Naruto with a whole new look. He was wearing dark green tabi boots, mask, and shin/forearm guards are reminiscent of an ancient ninja warrior. He wears a violet ninja garb with green highlights, he wears a teal and purple vest over his garb with clawed armoured gauntlets. On his right shoulder is a shoulder guard shape of a leviathan, with a teal mantle over his arm with purple highlight designs. His head was cover in coral in the same likeness of the sanbi Biju with a single blue eye staring right at the growling bear like phantoms beasts.
"welp…. time to go to work." Naruto said as he sunked into the very ground he was standing on like it was water only to appear in front of one other the Majors. He gave it an upward kick to its jaw with great force snapping its neck.
"one down" he then ducked from the swipe of claws from another one, he then slipped through its legs only to then turn and sink his own hands in his its back as they phase right through. He then lifted with his strength the phantom at the one that was charging at him from behind, casing them to ram right into a tree. "well that keeps those two occupied." He said as he heard growling again, he turned around to see the remaining three glaring at him.
Naruto not willing to take any chances he stretches out his hand towards the ground as a pole started to rise up from the ground surface like rippling water. He grabs onto the pole drawing it from the ground as it reveals to be a halberd with the blade being just like Levi's tail. Twirling it in his hand he then stares at the phantoms in a battle ready stance with his halberd, the first one to attack him was then tripped by his halberd as he then impaled it in its unprotected stomach. As it dies he then lifted himself up by his halberd and he spun, moving his body to drop kick another who was near as the first was getting impaled by him. He sinked into the ground, this causing the bear like phantoms to look around.
Naruto's hands rose from the ground underneath the last phantom as he then pulled both of its feet down leaving it stuck to the ground with no way of escape. Naruto sprung from the ground and landed right in front of the immobile phantom, with a flick of his wrist the blade at the end of his halberd shifted to until the the blade of the halberd made it looked a scythe with water emerging, forming the rest of the blade. He then spun around slicing the phantom in half along with the other phantom behind him that he originally he dropped kicked. With that he then turns his sights on the two remaining phantoms that he flung at each other. He then began to walked calmly towards as the area around him enlarge becoming water.
his walk becoming a jog then turns into running as swings his halberd at them upward sending them both flying as it then shifts into its scythe form. Naruto snagging them both on the dull side of the blade and slamming them both back onto the watery surface only for a tail with a bladed tip to ensnared them and dragged them into the abyss of the water. "have a nice swim!" he joked as he knows nothing escapes Levi once he got them like that. Naruto then looks back at the sight of their fight to see the corpses of the phantom Majors are turning into smoke leaving a glowing black core behind. "well that's a good amount for the day. Wouldn't you say so bro?" asked Naruto as he turns his head slightly at Levi who was now right by his side.
"ah quite so brother. I thank you for this meal" he says as he then goes and begins to eat the black cores of the very beast they were fighting earlier. After his meal Naruto walking up to him" yeesh those guys ruined our relaxing time." He says with a tone of disappointment.
" well yes they did bother look on the bright side those innocent people are alright and you got some entertainment out of them at least." Levi said as he looks at his brother with mid amusement.
"okay true that they did. but now I'm kind of hungry since all I've been doing was fighting those guys and seeing you eat does make me in the mood for some dango" he said as he thought of some food in thought. He then realizes that he was in his stream form," Afterstream" he muttered as his form begin to steam off him. He then shakes off the feeling of his previous form as Levi shrinks back to the size of a normal snake and warps himself around Naruto's neck as he begins to walk back into the village and towards getting himself some food.
Well that's it. I hope this was to your liking and if so, look forward towards more. And if anyone was hoping on helping me continue this story. Also if anyone would like to help me write this or be a beta reader for me that be much appreciated.
This speedy24 signing off
