Below are two poems each one are about edward leaving bella the first one is what she feels and the second is what she hears feels and lives like without him , hope they make sense to you guys anyway i will leave you to read :)
The demolished heart :
The hot sand underneath my feet burned
the rays from the sun
made me squint my eyes to see
the fresh hot wind , blowing against my face
making my knees buckle under the heat
crawling along the sand
struggling to breath, gasping for air
then i callopsed
waking up within a small bed
the rails on the side strongly protested my movement
my heart racing
the slow beeping that i could here
then there was a long line the beeping was gone
It was over
i did not have to fight anymore.
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The broken wings :
I am broken
the sad song of eternity fell silent
the curtains closing
leaving me alone
lost and torn
my heart working hard
pumping blood deep within my veins
my head hurting
thinking of memories
trying to find what i was looking for
cole icy arms
strong body
and not a beating heart
everything i wanted
was within my reach
until he doubted himself
and left
my body thinning from not eating
my hands shaking all the time
my letters to alice never ever arriving
when i was with them
i felt like i was flying
now all i have
are broken wings
side-door what do you think okay please review and tell me because it would be nice to know if im good or if i need improvement :)