This is just something I found in my old emails which I had sent to my beta but never posted, it has been edited and I decided to test the waters and see what kind of a response I get.
Looking forwards to hearing your thoughts!
Edward's POV:
A little boy of about twelve years old ran down a paved road. In the distance he saw a girl the same age as him; he stopped short as he took in her appearance. She had long chestnut hair and big brown eyes. She was beautiful. She caught up to him as if she had been chasing him. She leaned into his ear and whispered, "I love you."
The boy couldn't move because he was in shock, she loved him? Who was this girl? Before he could question her further, she faded away. In her place, was the boy's mother.
"Edward, what are you doing, you are suppose to be in bed." She scolds her son.
"Sorry mom," the boy tries to say, but no words came out of his mouth.
I shot up in my bed with a gasp. That was the weirdest dream ever, and who was the girl I was dreaming about? GROSS!
"Edward it's time to get up." I heard mom yell from downstairs. I looked at the clock beside my bed and fell face first into my pillow. It was 8 o'clock on a Saturday! Who wakes up this early on a Saturday?
"Edward," mom opened my bedroom door, "your father is waiting for you. It's going to be too late if you don't get up right now. Breakfast is ready." Then she closed the door.
I smiled into my pillow, remembering what I was doing today. Dad promised me a few days ago if I get 100% on a test, he would take only me fishing for the WHOLE day. And Wednesday we had a math test, I studied really hard for it, and I got 100%. I was so happy!
My twin sister Alice, she only got 97% so she wasn't allowed to go, and besides, she would be afraid of the worms. And my older brother Emmett, he's at his girlfriend's house. Me and Alice are eight, and Emmett is ten and he got a girlfriend already, which I think is gross. I'm never getting married or having a girlfriend because I don't like girls, they got cooties. And all they talk about is make-up and boys; I wouldn't want to listen to that all day.
I jumped out of bed, throwing the bed clothes on the floor and getting dressed quickly. When I got downstairs, mom had four pancakes with a glass of chocolate milk on the table for me. I quickly ate it because I was so excited to go fishing.
Five minutes later, I was done with my pancakes and milk. I gave mom the dishes, thanked her, and ran out the door.
Dad was outside talking to a man. And standing beside the man was a little girl. Well, she wasn't that little, but she was really tiny, probably my age.
"…going fishing in the pond outside of Seattle." My dad said to the man.
"Hi, dad!" I exclaimed causing him to turn around to face me.
"Edward, I didn't hear you come out. I'd like you to meet a good friend of mine. This is Charlie Swan, and this is his daughter Isabella."
The girl, Isabella, was shy because she hid behind her father.
"Charlie, Bella, this is Edward, my youngest son, and Alice's twin. You remember Alice, right Bella?" Dad said.
"Yes sir." She whispered as she peeked around her father's leg.
When I got a good look at her, my eyes widened. I would recognize that voice and name anywhere. Isabella Swan just moved here with her father from Arizona, she's the new girl in my third grade class, and everyone thinks she's weird.
"Daddy, I knows who she is, we go to school together." I looked at her and she blushed.
"That's good son, because Bella and her dad are going fishing with us, Charlie is taking us out in his boat." My jaw dropped and my eyes were wide.
"Daddddddyyyyy," I whined, "noooooo, don't take her. Take Em or Jas or anybody in the world but daddy please don't take the girl!" Dad shook his head.
"Edward, they are going, end of discussion. Now go get your fishing gear." I pouted and walked away with my arms crossed.
I heard footsteps behind me and thought they were my dad's until I heard her voice. "You're being a baby Edward." She said.
I spun around quickly, "Just shut up and leave me alone, this is suppose to be mine and my dad's time, I don't want to share it with a girl, especially you."
She just crossed her arms and held her head high. "Do you really think I want to spend my Saturday with you? This was supposed to be my daddy Bella day, but your dad called my dad and he said he had a surprise for me. I was happy but when I saw you, I didn't want to be here. At least I don't complain and whine like a baby. 'Daddddddyyyyy, noooooo, don't take her.' Really Edweirdo, grow up!" Then she turned and walked away.
Ouch, that hurts, what happened to the shy, innocent little girl that was in my third grade class? This is a new side of Bella, and I smiled as I thought of the way she yelled at me. I think, I think I'm… in…love.
I'm not sure how I feel about this story, but depending on the response, I'll decide if I will finish it or not. Either way, I was surprised when I found it had been edited and sent back to me.
