Broken
Hey im back with another story I thought this would be a funny and cute idea
Eggman had just been defeated and all hope was lost when one last shot hit sonic and made a large crater in the earth. Silence filled the area until Amy took a stand and ran over to the crater.
"HES ALIVE!" yelled Amy.
Everyone ran over to the crater to see sonic slowly get up his right leg bent in weird way. As he got up he fell back down again. "SONIC! Oh my goodness!" yelled Amy as she ran over to help him. "Ow I'm f-f-fine Amy really" said sonic starting to get back up on his right leg this time. He fell back down clutching his leg fighting back tears. "Maybe not…"
"TAILS CALL 911! KNUCKLES MAKE A SPLINT! SHADOW GO INFORM EVERYONE ELSE! ROUGE GO SPOT THE AMBULANCE!" yelled Amy like a general. Tails pulled out his cellphone and started dialing the number, Knuckles gathered some sticks and other things to make a splint, Shadow chaos controlled away, and rouge flew above the trees to spot the ambulance since the road was a few kilometers away. "It's goanna be ok sonic the ambulance is on the way." Said Amy stroking his quills. "Thank you Amy" said sonic forcing a smile.
"Ok I made a splint but in order for it work I'm goanna have to put your leg back in the right position" "J-j-just do it" "ok don't say I didn't warn you" said knuckles and he twisted Sonic's leg back in the right position. "FUGDE" Yelled sonic while knuckles used the splint. "AMBULANCE IS HERE" yelled rouge. "Ok Knuckles you wana help me get him to the ambulance?" "sure" Amy and knuckles both picked up sonic and got him to the ambulance were a blue fox nurse was waiting.
"OH MY SWEET GRAVEY I've seen some pretty bad bone breaks but this has to be one of the worst." She said taking sonic into the ambulance. "B-bye everyone" said sonic in a strained voice as everyone waved him goodbye. "Don't worry everything's going to be just fine." The nurse said reassuringly. Sonic on the other hand wasn't so sure…
End of chapter
So that's the first chapter of my latest fanfic tell me what you think also I think I may have made the pacing a little to fast ill try to fix that… but this is kind of a test chapter so before I get to into it I want to see if it's a likable idea that you would like to see more of thanx for reading bye c; !