This is getting typed on my tablet, so excuse all grammatical and spelling errors in will pop up.

One last thing there are parts of this story that are inspired by other stories I'm not meaning to stealing I just loved your idea and are borrowing and making my own version. I own nothing again other than most off the plot. This is going to be a No-War Story Story.

I present from the slightly twisted mind of DravoLove1242, Divergent: My Version...

Beatrice's POV

The simple wooden chair was cold and hard underneath me while my mom trimmed my light golden brown hair brushing it out with her soft aged hands. When done cutting she tie into a simple Bun in the back center of my head.

She enter in a pass code that I've yet to been told probably for a good reason, and the mirror appeared begin the wooden panel. I snicked a quick look in to to see my reflection, I could see my own loom of disappointment in my eyes. Disappointment of what? After another minute or so I heard my mom say "That's all you get, you know the rules..." Her voice trailed off once she started talking about rules and shit. I didn't care to much for all our rules in Abnegation because there were so many. For a faction that loves to help people they really love to restrict it's members...

Today was the day my brother Caleb and I had our test that decides what faction we go into. Am I kind like the tree huggers of Amity? Am I smart and cocky like the Erudite? Am I truthful like the Candor? Or Brave and kinda crazy like the Dauntless, which my number one choice because I know I'm not selfless like the rest of Abnegation. Every since I was little I never truly under stood why they were so giving. Seriously what's the point? People can't learn to fend for themselves if they just rely on us to do everything for them-

"Beatrice? Are you ready to go?"

I was pulled out of my thoughts by my goody-goody of a brother Caleb.

"Yeah I guess so.." God why do I have to sound so week all the time?

We get to the build we are tested in and Caleb and I stand waiting in line at the Abnegation door when it Jackass from Candor comes over and starts bad- mouthing this girl in our faction. I move to go teach him just how strong we really could be but stopped by Caleb

"You know that's just going to cause things to get worse?" He said in a tone you'd use on a child who did something wrong.

"That doesn't give him the excuse to be ass to everyone!" I raised my voice knowing he would hear it. This was verified when he stopped and turned towards our direction.

" Is their something you want to say to me Baby Stiff?!" He said walking over and looking down the bridge of his nose.

" Y-" Dammit Caleb stop!

"No she doesn't so you should just leave her alone and it won't happen again." Caleb said in a strong but apologetic tone. Which just makes the Candor Ass laugh but walking away to.

" Beatrice you have to be careful with what you say." Caleb scolded me.

Finally after what felt like hours of waiting it was finally my turn to take the test. I walked into a room that had a walls of just big mirrors.

"What is it you you Abnegation and mirrors? Vanity shit or something?" A voice say breaking the silence there is a tall dark skinned woman with a lot of tattoos and piercings and dreadlocks is standing by a metal recliner and a computer and silver tray with a bunch of wires and a small shot glass with this blueish liquid inside.

"Sit. I don't have all day." She said with a hard voice. I followed her orders." My name is Tori I will be administering your test. Most people get the faction of their origin and by the looks of you..." She trailed off. She handed me the small glass. I asked what is was but she answered by saying," Bottoms up."

I drank the liquid and everything went black.

A/N: I'm just skip the dream and stick with what the book/ movie did, mainly because.. Effort(I have none).