kayyy. um this is my first story. so help would be appreciated
i just want to say that all of these characters are from my imagination.
Phantom of the opera is going to be the school play. (none of the movie/book/play characters are in it)
hope you like it :)
Maddie is listening to her iPod as usual, in her room. Painting her fingernails. Tonight she picks a dark blue nail polish. It is not a very common nail color. But she doesn't care. She love's standing out. She loves attention. That's probably why she loves acting so much. Maddie likes to have all eyes on her, and she doesn't really get that too often.
One of her favorite songs by McFly (one of her many favorite bands) comes on her iPod. So she begins to sing softly:
It's all about you
It's all about you baby
It's all about you
It's all about you
Yesterday you asked me something I thought you knew
So I told you with a smile "it's all about you"
Then you whispered in my ear and you told me too
Said you make my life worth wild it's all about you
And I would answer all your wishes if you asked me to
But if you deny me one of your kisses don't know what I'd do
So hold me close and say three words like you used to do
Dancing on the kitchen tiles
It's all about you
Yeah
And I would answer all your wishes
If you asked me to
But if you deny me one of your kisses
Don't know what I'd do
So hold me close….
Maddie realizes she is getting louder, but she also notices something else. Someone, a guy, was singing with her! She pauses her iPod and looks around franticly thinking someone is in her room, but then she remembers she left her window open because she absolutely loves the cool, breeze of the autumn evening. She looks outside, not so jumpy now. (Her house was high off the ground, you couldn't get to her room without a tall ladder.) She sees someone leaning on the huge, old magnolia tree outside.
Maddie tries to see who the stranger is, kneeling up on her bed to see farther out the window. She calls out to him, but it's too late.
He's already sprinting down the street. She watches as he runs under the street light; she sees he has dark hair and he is pretty tall. He turns the corner, disappearing from sight.
Maddie leans against the wall, breathing slowly, trying to calm her quickly beating heart. She turns and closs her window, jamming the lock into place.
Well, that was weird, Maddie thinks, as she climbs back under the covers. She turns her iPod back on and turns out her light.
Then she slowly drifts to sleep.
blehhhhh. please review.
don't hate to bad please.