This is the rewrite of my story Brother of the hero I did not like the old version so let us do this
My name is James and my story begins with a talking shark. Ok let me back up a little bit. The story actually stared when my school took a trip to the Atlanta Aquarium.
To start out letme tell you about myself. I'm 15 years old have a swimmer build am a Greek Mythology nerd and love rock music. Oh and am very ADHD and a little dyslexic So anyway back to the story my school was going to the aquarium for a field trip in biology.
Me and my friends Percy and Grover and we were heading towards the covered conniver belt/moving sidewalk when I heard it 'hello my lords' "What was that" " what was what" Grover asked "I didn't hear anything did you perce" "nope" Percy said a bit to quickly something was not right.
As we continue though the aquarium I thought I saw a large man glaring at us. "Percy something is up" "what's up man" "that man over there he's look at me like I'm lunch. I'm going to go and "talk" to him." "Nah man that is not a good idea" "why" "It just is not" "Ok? Let's go then" "Percy I smell fire" Grover said in a another language "Smell fire? What do you mean?" I respond in the same language unknowingly 'strange did I just speak Greek' 'yes you did young one' 'who are you and what are you doing in my head' 'I am ertanrna one of the great fire birds' 'like a Phoenix' 'yes young one as for why I am here it is because I saved your live long ago' 'how so?'
*Flash back 15 years*
'you were just born when I felt a tie to you. This tie brought me to a near by hospital so I investigated and found you laying near your mother. You were so cute as a babe. Off topic. Sorry but you were. Anyway as soon as I got close to you my energy bound to yours child of the sea.
Done tell me what y'all think stay frosty ;)