Ok... this is my revision of Why are you Here?

I decided to revise the entire thing! Why? I didn't really like it...I couldn't control it! Ok... here it is!

Chapter One

Ia (17) was walking down Arch Street wearing her purple Dragon shirt, her mom's brown boots, and her tan skirt. She also had her blue jacket and her bookbag and winter hat on. The one that looks like a Fireworks explosion on her head. Her older sister hated it with a passion.

Also with her was Skie (18), wearing jeans and her boaring grey sweatshirt since she was being boaring and not dressing up for Extreme Day for Winter Carnival. The ironic thing is that WC is going on during the warmest week in February. Funny, no?

Zac, Carl, and Chey were also there. Chey in this beautiful dress, Zac in his usual artier, Carl too.

"Carl! Go away! Girl talk!" Skie yelled as Ia, Chey and she walked down the sidewalk covered in melting brownish snow.

Carl obeyed and started chasing Zac again with the perfect snowballs. You know? The snow is meltish and is very wet so it sticks better. Better than powder, at least.

"What did he say!" Skie pestered Chey again.

"I'll tell you when we get to the bottom!" Chey said as the passed the small car dealership on the corner of Arch and Teal Lake Avenue.

They crossed at a run trying to do a Carl where you run across the street nearing a car. But no cars were there at the time.

Chey divulged herself to Skie and Ia watched Carl chase Zac with snow again and narrated it like Steve Irwin (RIP).

"There goes the rare Fairy Boy! Only one left in captivity! Being chased by the mortal enemy from the begning of time, The Carl!" she said in a Irwin accent, holding up her hands as if holding a camera. "There are only... bout... three left in the world I assume?" Ia said as Chey and Skie started laughing at either side of her. They could see Zac in the distance. Disgruntled as ever. No sign of Carl.

Chey left to go to Lakeview to catch the bus with her little brothers and Ia and Skie trecked up the hill after saying a good bye to Oni-Chan. The pun is that he's younger than the trio.

Skie and Ia talked about melting snow and the little street rivers that they loved so much.

The went home blah blah blah and Ia turned on the kitchen TV and started eating Cheese Nips.

T-A-K-E-M-E-H-O-M-E-C-O-U-N-T-R-Y-R-O-A-D

She woke the next morning to find that her picture of Sanji had fallen off the wall where it was next to Jack Sparrow. It was him posed just like the Jack Sparrow poster. She smiled and put it back on the wall hoping the tape would stay this time or she would probably shoot somebody.

She put on her rockstar jeans with a kid-like shirt since it was what Chey's cousin would call, Pedofile Day (Dress Like a Kid Day)!

At round 7:05, she finaly got out the door and to go to school.

It was warmish today. She unzipped her jacket and tried to remember if she had all her homework.

"You're disturbed, arn't you."

"What the hell?" Ia said as she turned around to see who said something.

"Uh hm. So true. You need to see them again, don't you."

"Where are you? Who are you? Why are you here?"

"I'm your subconscious. Look up." they yelled.

Ia looked up and saw a small person about the size of her mechanical pencil. She was wearing jeans and a brown shirt and had angle wings on her back.

"What the hell." Ia said as the little person dropped down to eye level.

"Ya. You need them. You need to see them. I can tell!"

"What are you talking about?"

"Mugiwara." she whispered.

"The crew."

"Crew! That's the one! Crew! Come on! I'll help you. Just come down this here alley!"

"NO."

The little person looked very irate. She held up her hand and snapped her fingers.

A red van suddenly veerd up onto the curb and past King Koin Laundromat and blared up to Ia...

E-Y-E-O-F-T-H-E-T-I-G-E-R

Luffy was running down the street, looking for meat (no duh). The middle of the street was pretty clear and Luffy stood in the middle, hoping to see a meat stall when a girl with short black hair appeared in front of him flying through the air and towards Luffy. He caught her before she knocked him over.

"Nani?" he said and looked at the girl with pigtails.

"SANJI! IT'S IA!"

I will update this... soon... I hope... maybe... eh...

2-21-07