Okay everyone, I have fixed the mistakes in this story so that more people will like it, so hope it works.
In my story, I am the little sister of all the vampires, who happens to get into trouble A LOT!
We were all sitting in the lunch room, and Rosalie decided to pick a fight with me again...
"So Selly, is there anything you'd like to tell us?" Rosalie asked. I tried to keep my thoughts blank, but I could feel Edward's suspicious eyes burning a hole through me. I sunk down in my chair and whimpered slightly.
"Carlisle is going to kill you! You got detention again! How many fucking times do I have to tell you not to skip class?" he yelled.
I looked up and smiled as innocently as I could. But, as soon as I did, I immediately regretted it. I felt Edward's strong hand grasp the top of my arm as I was being pulled out into the hallway.
He dragged me into the staircase. "Edward, please, I am so sorry. I promise it will never happen again. Please, I'm begging you, don't tell Carlisle."
"NO! I am tired of you always getting into trouble! You wait until detention is over. Carlisle will be the least of your problems. I'm going to deal with you myself."
"NO! Edward, please, I'm sorry! I will never skip class again, I promise. I'll be there on time, plea-" I was cut off; before I could finish my sentence, I was on the ground. "Ow! Edwa-"
He raised his hand threateningly, and I stopped talking. I was too afraid of getting even more punishment. "If you say one more word, I swear you won't be able to walk back into that cafeteria" he warned.
I nodded apologetically "Yes Sir." We walked back in silence, and he told everyone he would drive me home himself and inform Carlisle later.
I flinched at the thought of this idea. The rest of the day went by quickly... I heard the security guard walking towards me. "Detention is over; you can leave." I lifted my head up and nodded before walking out as slowly as I could.
When I got to the parking lot, he was standing there glaring at me. "Get in" he whispered harshly.
"Yes Sir." I was in the car in less than a second.
I bowed my head low the whole way home, wishing I could curl up on the seat and rest my head on my knees. He dragged me upstairs to our room and threw me against the wall, hard.
"Uhh!" I moaned, but I was too scared to move. Edward shut the door and continued to glare at me. He grabbed me by my neck and squeezed really hard.
Then, he spun me around and held my body bent over with one arm. "Please don't! I'm sorry, please!" I begged. He began hitting me furiously.
SMACK. SMACK. SMACK. "How many times do I have to punish you before you'll learn to obey me?" he asked.
"I'm sorry! Please stop!" He suddenly threw me on the ground.
He started walking toward me. I flinched and tried to protect myself. He grabbed me by my hair, and I scrambled to my feet. "Get my belt" he ordered.
I whimpered and walked over to the bed, which was there just for show. He was by me in less than a second after I picked it up. He grabbed my arm and threw me on the bed. I laid there for a second, quivering.
Then he rolled me over on my stomach and began again. This time much harder and more painful than before!
"PLEASE STOP!" I cried. Smack. I AM. Smack. SORRY. Smack. I SWEAR, I WILL NEVER DISOBEY YOU AGAIN!"Smack, smack, smack. "It was a mistake, please!" His painful, stinging blows went on harder and harder.
Edward continued relentlessly. "It's a mistake. It was an accident. It wasn't my fault. I promise I'll never disobey you again. That's all you ever say, Selena!"
Smack. Smack. "OW! Please Edward!" I tried. It didn't work. He kept hitting me. Smack, smack, smack, smack. Finally, he stopped a couple minutes later. He looked at me, and I could tell he was still angry.
He dragged me to Emmett and Rosalie's room. "I have to go talk to Carlisle. Watch her for me."
TO BE CONTINUED...
So, I hope you liked the fixed version better. I am going to fix the rest of them too.
My beta luvsanime02 is helping me a lot with it too. Please review.