Hey guys, so I was looking at my old story A Dancer's Romance and I was like, "this had so much potential, and I completely butchered it because of my inability to write good stories in seventh grade." So I was thinking about completely rewriting it, making it better and all that jazz. But I want your opinions so let me know!
In case you didn't read it, here's a summary of what I would be writing now.
"They're not allowed to touch, so it's not that illegal, right?"
Hinamori Amu lives a double life, but not one that any of her peers would suspect. Ever since she was sixteen, she worked as a dancer at a club that was only 21 and older. She has managed to keep her day life and night life completely separate, not letting one interfere with the other. But what happens when a group of friends with a convincing set of fakes walk in and see her on the stage?