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my character.
Tears of Duel Monsters by Yami Kajita
Chapter 1: Innocence Lost
It was a stormy night in the city of Domino. Thunder boomed, lightning cracked and rain totally bombarded the streets. The only soul still on the street was that of a broken one; one that had been shattered out of lust. Slowly and weakly, he limped his way home, the Kame Game Shop. Inside, Yami and the others were watching a football game. It was then that Yami sensed that something was horribly wrong with his aibou, Yugi. Without warning, Yami stood up; a look of pure shock and horror graced his features.
Just as this happened, the door swung open to reveal a truly shocking sight. Standing in the doorway, hunched over, was a very battered Yugi. The sight of the bruises and cut made everyone gasp; Tea nearly fainted. But no one was more horrified than Yami. He used his mind link to scan Yugi's mind. What he saw made him cry out and jump back a foot and a half. While still in Joey's arms, Yugi managed to get one word out before he fainted: "S-Seto." The only one who could even make out the word was Yami, who was furious beyond forgiveness.
Everyone turned to see Yami who was raged anger. "Yami, what happened to Yugi?" asked Joey, still holding Yugi. Yami settled himself down and fell to the floor, one hand covering his face. He was still trying to contain himself as he laid out the malicious event. "Yugi's innocence is.lost. He was .attacked.on his way home from school." Everyone could tell that recalling that attack was excruciating for Yami. What he told them next felt like knives in their souls. Yugi was taken to the school locker room, blindfolded, and raped for two hours. Yami hadn't sensed this because Yugi was so shocked and scared that he couldn't speak and he didn't have the Millennium Puzzle with him. Yami didn't see the rest because the latter event was already more than he could bear. Yami turned to leave when a hand rested on his shoulder. "I think we should get Yugi to the hospital quick!!" said a much shaken Tea. Everyone, including Yami and Grandpa, nodded in agreement.
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Tears of Duel Monsters by Yami Kajita
Chapter 1: Innocence Lost
It was a stormy night in the city of Domino. Thunder boomed, lightning cracked and rain totally bombarded the streets. The only soul still on the street was that of a broken one; one that had been shattered out of lust. Slowly and weakly, he limped his way home, the Kame Game Shop. Inside, Yami and the others were watching a football game. It was then that Yami sensed that something was horribly wrong with his aibou, Yugi. Without warning, Yami stood up; a look of pure shock and horror graced his features.
Just as this happened, the door swung open to reveal a truly shocking sight. Standing in the doorway, hunched over, was a very battered Yugi. The sight of the bruises and cut made everyone gasp; Tea nearly fainted. But no one was more horrified than Yami. He used his mind link to scan Yugi's mind. What he saw made him cry out and jump back a foot and a half. While still in Joey's arms, Yugi managed to get one word out before he fainted: "S-Seto." The only one who could even make out the word was Yami, who was furious beyond forgiveness.
Everyone turned to see Yami who was raged anger. "Yami, what happened to Yugi?" asked Joey, still holding Yugi. Yami settled himself down and fell to the floor, one hand covering his face. He was still trying to contain himself as he laid out the malicious event. "Yugi's innocence is.lost. He was .attacked.on his way home from school." Everyone could tell that recalling that attack was excruciating for Yami. What he told them next felt like knives in their souls. Yugi was taken to the school locker room, blindfolded, and raped for two hours. Yami hadn't sensed this because Yugi was so shocked and scared that he couldn't speak and he didn't have the Millennium Puzzle with him. Yami didn't see the rest because the latter event was already more than he could bear. Yami turned to leave when a hand rested on his shoulder. "I think we should get Yugi to the hospital quick!!" said a much shaken Tea. Everyone, including Yami and Grandpa, nodded in agreement.
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