Ok this is Death's Door. I got bored one day in class and wrote this.
Jena
Hello Present Danny's thoughts.
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Death's Door
I looked at the empty lab before me my friends close behind me. I feel their breath on my neck.
"Okay guys. There it is." I say looking at the tunnel in the wall.
"Doesn't look like much Danny." A girl with black hair says. Her name Samatha Manson. An Ecto-goth. Meaning she is an ultra-recylced- vegeatharin. She always wears a black shirt and white and black skirt. She is Sam or you'll regret it.
"What is it suppossed to look like? My parents say it doesn't work." I said.
"Well maybe you could fix it." A dark colored boy said. His name Tucker Foley. He wears a red hat I don't know the name off and an orange sweatshirt. Along with a pair of dark jeans and his glasses. He is a techno geek.
"I don't know tucker." I said uneasily.
"Come on Danny a Ghost zone. Can you imagain it." Sam said.
"It could be pretty cool." I said.
If only I knew.
I headed over to a closet taking out a white hazmat suit my parents made for me. It had a black collar, with black gloves, belt, and boots.
"Dude what's that?" Tucker asked looking at it.
"My parents made me and Jazz hazmat suits this is mine." I said slipping it on.
"Werid." Tucker said as I zipped it up.
"Wait a second. You shouldn't walk around with that on your chest." Sam said taking off the sticker with my dad's face off.
"Okay now go." Sam said.
I breathed in and went into the tunnel. The doorway to Death. To beyond Death. I touched the cool metallic side and pushed something in.
My life was never the same after that.
The portal lit up with electrity. I was blinded before the pain came. So much green swirling. I was standing in Death's door about to go in. So much paun. I was so numb... so cold... so suddenly weghtless... Darkness took me into it's sweet embrace...
I woke up in the green swirling and weakly crawled out of the glowing portal. My white gloves hit the floor. I looked up. Still numb and cold as ice. Sam and Tucker were staring at me wide eyed with worry and... fear?
I tried to stand just to fall again. Sam came forward and helped me up.
"Danny?" Sam asked.
"What happened Sam?" I asked.
I really had no idea.
"You went into the portal and turned it on and well..." Sam said unable to finish. Tucker grabbed a mirror off the wall and gave it to me.
I looked down at it. Glowing green eyes stared back at me. I blinked. It was real those were my eyes. My hair was white and I was pale, paler then normal.
I had become a half-ghost.
I closed my eyes and wished I was normal. I felt a sudden warmth come over me. I opened my eyes to find the normal ice blue eyes staring back at me alond with my black hair.
"Dude, that was werid." Tucker said. Sam nodded. I looked at them before falling backwords into darkness again.
I didn't wake for three days. What do you expect? I walked through Death's Door only to come back out and be trapped in the middle.
I am forever standing in Death's Door till it is my time to finally step through competly. To the ever filling void on the other side.
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Okay Finished what you think a little to gothy.
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