Ok guys this is my first real attempt at a Percy Jackson story so please be nice. Also be honest. And remember guests can review. Everyone please review

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Percy was having an all around bad day. First his girlfriend dumps him. Then his best friend Nico goes on an amazing quest with his girlfriend Thalia. Witch he probably wont return from for a few years. Last but certainly not the least, Poseidon decided percy didn't need to come back to the palace for training anymore because he was already good enough. He felt like everyone he cared about was abandoning him. He wanted to leave, but he couldn't he still had people that he cared about. His sister Alayna or Ally was still here. He had to teach her how to use her powers so leaving was not an option.

Percy thought about this while he was eating his dinner in the dining pavilion. With his sister Ally. "Hey Perce whatcha thinking about." Percy looked at his half sister. "I've just been having a rough day. You know. First think in the morning Annabeth dumps me. Then Nico and Thalia leave. Then to top it all off Poseidon kicks me out of the castle."

"I'm sorry Perce. You don't have to do practice today if you don't want to." Ally looked sadly at Percy. "No, i`m not going to let my bad day ruin practice. In fact I think practice will cheer me up." Percy smiled a bit

A/N am I doing the whole dialog thing right. If not please say rather you would rather have each piece of dialog on every line. Or keep it like it is. Thanks. Out

"Come on lets go to the secluded beach area." Percy picked up his plated and put it on top of the trashcan. Ally followed suit and soon the pair was headed to the beach. "Man I love the beach. I don't know why it's just so calming and refreshing. I guess it's a child of Poseidon thing. Right." Percy looked at Ally "yah I guess it is. I don't really." Percy got an angry look on his face. "If only Poseidon didn't kick me I could ask him for you." Percy balled his fist remembering all the things that had happened. He wasn't paying much attention as they walked there.

"Hey Perce can we take the shortcut through the forest." Percy grinned. "Race you." Percy took off running towards the beach spot they use. "You dirty rascal". Ally ran with all her might and started catching up to Percy. When ally and Percy were neck and neck Ally looked at Percy and stuck her tongue out. Ally pulled ahead and broke through the tree line. "Oh my god."

"What. What is it Ally."

"Percy don't you dare come through those trees."

"Oh ally what are you doing here."

"Ally was that Annabeths voice." Percy went onto the beach. Mark the son of Zues was hurriedly putting on clothes and Annabeth was doing the same. "WHAT THE HELL ANNABETH. YOU LEFT ME FOR HIM." Percy was furious. The sky immediately darkened and a giant wave pounded the shore.

"Percy calm down." Ally was trying her best to calm the waters both physically and emotionally. "Percy its not what it looks like." Annabeth said as she buttoned up her shirt. "Not what it looks like. Of course its what it looks like. Just tell me one thing how long have you been seeing him." Percy said in barley a whisper. "We have been together for 8 months. Stupid Jackson, Annabeth never loved you." Percy swept mark out to sea with a wave and then stuck him in a riptide.

"Annabeth is this true." You could barley hear Percy. "I thought there was still a chance for us. I bought you a ring." Annabeth gasped "Percy I had no idea. Its just that you didn't want to have sex before marriage and… well I wanted to have sex." Tears began to stream down percys face. "Practice is cancelled. Permanently." Percy summoned a vortex of water and flew into the air. "Annabeth you stupid mutt. Cant you see how much he cared for you. You RUINED his life." Ally stormed off. Annabeth began to sob. "I'm so sorry." She whispered over and over again.

Mark washed up on the shore and walked over to Annabeth. "Its ok babe you still got me." Annabeth looked at mark. "GO AWAY. You ruined everything. I don't even know why I listened to you in the first place. I hate you." Mark looked surprised "you're going to regret this. Ill give you one last chance." Annabeth screamed "GO AWAY." Mark stormed off the same way as percy.

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Percy's POV

I can't believe that just happened. I've lost everything. Now all ive got is my sister. I probably even lost her to. Poseidon's is going to recruit her to go train at the castle. I knew exactly why he wanted me gone. So he can replace me with Ally. Now im in this dirty Alley With no were to go. I guess I have no obligations now I can go anywhere I want.

I jump at a small cracking noise and look to my left. There is a man sitting there. He's wearing a suit but it's like no suit ive ever seen before. There are planets and stars that swirl around on it. Like the planetarium my mom once took me to. Its too bad she moved to California to get that script-writing job. The man speaks. "Percy. I take it you've had a pretty rough day. Judging by your tearstained face and slumping in an alley." I snorted, " you don't say." "Well how would you like a new beginning." I looked curiously at the man. "What do you mean and what is your name."?

"My name is chaos, creator of the universe." I immediately got on my knees and bowed. "Get up get up. No need for any of those shenanigans."

"Sir what do you mean by new beginning."

"Ill take you to my palace and give you my blessing. Something ive done to only 1 other person in my lifetime. That was the first primordial. Also I want you to lead my army. I want you to hand pick all of the soldiers of said army"

I thought about it for a second. "Ill do it." My own life sucked so badly right now. I needed the fresh start. "Can I recruit my sister and some friends from camp." Clarisse and her boy friend Chris were the only friends left. Although they were not enough to keep me there. I still wanted to bring them along. They had been having a rough time at camp too most of the older campers were leaving due to being unwanted at camp. Some go to camp Jupiter some go to start their own lives.

The ones that stay at camp are not very popular and looked down upon. All except Annabeth, and that's probably because she designed the new Olympus. Well its not new anymore, its been finished for about three years now. The old campers didn't want glory or quests anymore. So most people just think they get in the way.

"Sure Percy. If you think they would be good soldiers then recruit them. Take my hand let us go to my palace." I took Chaos` hand and we were instantly teleported to the palace. It was awe-inspiring. We were in some kind of throne room. The ceiling must be at least 100 feet tall, with massive wide Columns on the side that are about 20 feet wide. The room itself was about 200 feet wide. The pathway leading to the main throne was pure amethyst and about 20 feet wide. There were too smaller thrones; one was made completely off sapphire with a sapphire path. The other was emerald and also very beautiful.

All I could say was "wow". Chaos chuckled.

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Gods POV in the throne room.

The gods had watched Percy's fight with Annabeth in Hestia's fire. They were now all yelling and shouting at each other. Percy was their favorite hero. They all cared about him well except for Artemis she cared for no man, but if there were a man she cared about it would be Percy. Zeus yelled at Poseidon. "How could you do that to him. Why couldn't you continue his training."

"Because I have to train my daughter as well and I cant train them both at the same time. I need to devote all my attention to one at a time."

"Well look what you did Poseidon now the boy left camp."

"Well it was YOUR son that stole annabeth away. So its your fault too."

"That boy will have consequences. Sever consequences. ATHENA it's your daughter. How could she do something like this? Simply because Percy wouldn't have sex before marriage."

Hera piped up. "I admire him for that."

Aphrodite sighed, "well I guess that ruins my chances."

Hera scoffed "you never had any chance with that boy. He's too attached with Annabeth. And Athena you need to teach your daughter a thing or to about the right way to do things. You should not have sex before marriage."

Athena scowled "shut up Zeus and Poseidon." They were still arguing. "I had no idea this was going on. When were done here I'm going to teach her a thing or two about relationships."

Aphrodite stomped her foot. "and im going to help. He's so romantic. To think, he was going to propose."

Artemis rolled her eyes at Aphrodite's shenanigans.

Hermes spoke up. "Man that dude does not know what he's missing." He high fived Apollo. Artemis smacked Apollo upside the head.

"I respect him immensely for it. If there was ever a man worthy of my respect it is he.

"Quiet all of you look into the fire." Athena shushed everyone and they looked into the fire. A man was speaking to Percy.

"Who is that? Poseidon go retrieve Percy" Zeus said worriedly. Poseidon flashed out, but it was too late Percy and the man had disappeared from the fire. Now all it was was was a fire.

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