Hi again! Before I start, I just want to say that this is a filler story until my laptop is fixed, and I get my files to the other stories back! I won't abandon my other stories, even if it killed me! Here's a trailer to the movie that I'm going to write now. So...R and R to tell me what you think!
Disclaimer: Three words. Don't. Own. It. :cries:
Okay, the italics are actions, the bold is that movie voiceover thing, and the regular is dialogue.
The Elevator
"Sometimes getting off on the wrong floor is inevitable."
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Ryan, Sharpay, Troy, Gabriella, Chad, and Taylor exit the airport, dragging luggage behind them, talking and laughing.
"It started as a class trip like all others…"
Troy: Darbus actually picked us for the trip to New York!
Gabbi: Yeah, for a whole week.
Sharpay: (To Darbus) But I've seen Phantom of the Opera eight times already!
"To these unsuspecting teens it seemed like they would have the time of their lives."
The gang is sitting in a café outside of the hotel.
Taylor: Ah…the sweet smell of NYC.
Shows them in front of the hotel, gazing at the whole thing.
Ryan: This is like, the best hotel here!
"Why wouldn't they?"
Chad: (While helping check in) Hey, I've heard rumors that this place is haunted.
Sharpay, Gabbi, and Taylor look scared.
Troy: Yeah, it has this headless girl that hunts down helpless, weak, and helpless teenage girls. (Laughs)
Sharpay: (Hitting him on the arm) That wasn't funny!
"But as they arrived, a new nightmare was unleashed…"
Shows gang in front of elevator number 6. They enter it.
Ryan: Look, the number buttons are all…scratched and cracked…
Shows the scratched and cracked buttons. Flashes to next scene.
Elevator is undergoing violent turbulence.
Gabbi: (Hysterically) What's going on!
The lights in the elevator go out, leaving them in the pitch black darkness.
Sharpay: (Whimpering) Oh my god, oh my god.
The elevator screen is flashing and is extremely static. It flashes 'DEATH'
Taylor: Oh god, we're gonna die.
Suddenly the elevator 'ding's and the doors burst open.
"The elevator…"
Shows a blank screen.
Suddenly flashes to a dead woman's ghost with hollow eye sockets.
"They were oblivious to the fear and the history that haunted them."
Shows a porcelain plate flying and colliding into the wall, shattering into a million pieces.
Shows the gang hiding in a closet.
Gabbi: The ghost...she wants something.
"Friendship is tested."
Chad: (Angrily) But what the hell is it?
"Unwillingly…"
Shows a bloody knife clattering to the floor.
Flashes to Troy, Gabbi, Ryan, and Sharpay running through a graveyard, ghastly figures following them.
Troy: Where are Chad and Taylor?
Shows two figures in the darkness, hanged by their necks on a tree branch.
Someone screams.
"Sacrifice…"
Ghost woman: (Yells) I want…my son!
Shows Troy, Gabbi, Ryan, and Sharpay panting behind an old cabin.
Troy: Her son died…the only person who she truly loved! She…
Gabbi: …wants him back.
"The sacrifice of love and life…"
Back at the hotel, Tory finds a portrait of the ghost woman's son.
Troy: (Whispers) No…
Ghost woman comes up from behind him.
Ghost woman: (In motherly voice) Jacob, come on. Violin lessons are at six.
Troy: But I'm not Jacob…
"May be the only thing that will keep them all alive."
Shows somebody face-down, in a puddle of their own blood.
Shows blank screen again.
"C.A. Pictures presents…"
Camera zooms in, focusing on the doors of elevator 6.
"An unknown fate…"
Elevator doors open, revealing just an empty shaft.
"The Elevator." Pauses.
"Coming July 21, 2006."
Kay, what do you think so far?