Disclaimer: I do not own naruto...Masashi Kishimoto san does.
Hey guys my first fic here, in this universe the hyuuga clan is not a part of konoha they are just something else..read ahead to find out and also since Hinata can't be part of team 8 in this universe i have replaced her with Yakumo Kurama, you know the Genjutsu Girl. After she is saved she becomes a shinobi who only trains her genjutsu, almost like lee, who trains only taijutsu. OH yeah I almost forgot Hinata's mom is alive. Whenever i type Hinata my pc auto corrects it to Pinata Ha Ha. please review.
The plot might seem unclear at first but stick around, I promise it gets better.
Chapter 1: Kidnapped.
It was a bright but fairly cloudy day in Konoha. Two figures could be seen slowly walking towards the wide and ever open gates. One with blonde hair as bright as the very sun and blue eyes as deep as the ocean. he was none other than the future hokage and the number one unpredictable ninja of the leaf, Naruto Uzumaki. the other man with him was around his fifties, with white flowing hair up to his hip. He was the legendary toad sage and perver..sorry SUPER pervert Jiraya of mount myoboku. They had been away from konoha for three years.
"Feels great to be back huh ero sensei?" Naruto said with a bright smile. "Naruto stop calling me that, and yes it is great to be back" Jiraya replied, frowning a bit at his nick name Naruto came up with three years ago. As they entered the gates Jiraya spoke "hey Naruto why don't you go ahead and report to Tsunade, I need to umm.. check something".
Naruto frowned as he brought his palm to his face "you just want to go and do more of your research" Naruto complained . Jiraya sweat-dropped, he brought his palms together and gently rubbed them against each other "well i can't just keep my fans waiting, i need inspiration to write my stuff" Jiraya replied smiling perversely.
Naruto mumbled something about his senseis all being perverts "FINE . I don't want any pervert germs on me." Naruto replied and took to the rooftops, as Jiraya walked away giggling like a six year old.
Naruto climbed up a post and looked at his home which he missed for so long. "Wow! look at baa chan's face on the rock" Naruto said smiling. He pictured his face next to the godaime hokage's face. The thought turned his smile into a grin. His eyes scanned over the village, it hadn't changed much except for a few houses and shops here and there. " time to meet my old friends" naruto grinned and jumped down.
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A pink haired girl was walking through the streets with a list in one hand and a basket full of various herbs and animal parts in the other. She was running errands for Tsunade her mentor. 'Got the deer antlers, iguana's tail, falcon's beak, what's next' Sakura was interrupted from her thoughts when she heard her name being called by an unfamiliar voice.
"Sakura? hey Sakura-chan" Naruto ran towards her calling out her name. She turned her head toward the him and her eyes widened, "Naruto? oh my god! is that really you? you are back!" she said, a smiled. She had missed him even if he was the most annoying person she had met. Truth be said he was almost like her little brother now. "In the flesh" Naruto replied bringing a fist to his chest.
" You have grown a lot Naruto, I almost didn't recognize your voice and look at you, you have grown taller than me" Sakura said comparing their height with her hand, suddenly she brought her hands behind her back and posed "hey Naruto ... am i more womanly now?" she asked smiling. Naruto smiled back at her, he game her a thumbs up and said " of course not Sakura-chan, you are just the same as i remember".
Sakura sweat dropped, looking a little dejected, Naruto will always be Naruto. " Hey Sakura-chan i am going to give my report to baa chan you should come too since we are a team and all " Naruto said , Sakura just nodded still looking dejected.
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meanwhile
Two figures jumped through the trees from branch to branch and an alarmingly high speed, too fast to be human... They both had pale pupil less eyes. One of them was a male, his eyes were full of experience and maturity, like that of a true leader. The other was a female, her eyes had a slight shade of lavender unlike the man's, she had a small smile on her face.
"Tomorrow our daughter gets her present, oh how long has she waited for this" she said to nobody in particular. "Yes Hitomi, she has been waiting for a long time, never has she asked for anything, there is nothing I can do but fulfill her desires no matter how absurd they sound" Hiashi said with a neutral expression. His face not revealing his doubts and concerns about this so called ...present.
"I always knew you were a big softie inside, that why i married you Hi-chaaan" Hitomi teased him giggling a bit. Hiashi's mask broke for an instant as he could be seen blushing at the nick name but he quickly regained his composure.
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At the training grounds
It was a little after noon when team Kakashi , Jiraya, Tsunade, Shizune and ton-ton gathered at training grounds nine "Alright, so you can't leave the training grounds or use the kyuubi's chakra" Naruto asked. He was fairly exited, after he gave his report, Tsunade told him that he and Sakura are going to have a test, to test how much they have improved after training for three whole years.
Kakashi smiled "Precisely Naruto, now if you'll excuse me i am going to enjoy the lovely book you gave me today" Kakashi replied. Jiraya smiled, while Tsunade frowned and Shizune just looked nervous. They were all standing at a distance spectating the match which was about to start.
"Hey Tsunade hime" Jiraya tried to get Tsunade's attention, he brought out his purse and started counting his money "How long do you think the brat would take?" he asked. Tsunade looked at Jiraya then at his purse and understood what he meant, he wanted to bet "Hmm... knowing him and your training I would say an hour or two" Tsunade replied. "I will say ... lets see, five minutes at most. wanna bet?" Jiraya asked smiling. Tsunade smiled too, "sure" she replied.
"Kakashi sensei are you ready?" Naruto asked smiling deviously, which worried Sakura, 'what are you up to now' she thought. Kakashi didn't even look up from his book, instead he just gave a thumbs up "of course, remember; come at me with the intent to kill" he said. Naruto's smile widened, he pulled back his left sleeve to reveal a plain wooden bracelet with some intricate ink patterns on it.
With a single single-handed sign the patterns disappeared and with a pop a scroll appeared in his left hand and an ink brush in his right. He spread the scroll open in front of him, almost throwing it and his right hand blurred over the scroll. The scroll was still in mid air and Naruto was drawing something really fast on it. Sakura mouth dropped, 'He learned Fuinjutsu? how and when? and how is doing it so smoothly and accurately?' Sakura was surprised by his talent.
Even Kakashi looked up from his book to see what was going on and was shocked to see the blonde's work. Jiraya and Tsunade both smiled 'so you finally taught him what made their clan one of the most powerful among all huh Jiraya' Tsunade thought, she was genuinely impressed by him.
Naruto finished before the scroll hit the ground. He placed his left palm on the scroll and immediately the entire sealing matrix started to recede into his palm, compressing into a single kanji for 'ground' with an intricate ring surrounding it. Naruto shook his left hand, and the scroll and brush disappeared back into the seal on his bracelet. He smiled, "fuin: Hell's grounds " he shouted and slammed his palm into the ground. From his palm erupted a seal which started to expand all over the training field.
Jiraya stared with horror "WE HAVE TO RUN!" he screamed but it was too late. Suddenly every one except Naruto dropped to the ground unable to move, they struggled but found it excessively difficult."What's hap..pening" Kakashi said, he found it difficult to inhale or exhale. Naruto quickly ran over to Kakashi and picked up both the bells from his jacket. Just as Naruto picked up the bells, the seal on the ground disappeared, and they all took a deep breath and stood up. Naruto was smiling as he won in less than ten seconds, that's when he felt a fist crash into his head.
"WHAT THE HELL NARUTO WERE YOU TRYING TO KILL US ALL?" Sakura shouted, she was furious. "ow I am really sorry guys" Naruto said rubbing his head sheepishly. Jiraya sighed " I told you not to use that jutsu of yours when your comrades are nearby."Jiraya spoke clearly not mad at him since he won the bet.
"Naruto ... what really was that?" Tsunade asked , she was curious about the jutsu that naruto of all people had invented. It could take down a whole army in an instant. "Well the jutsu works by increasing the gravity by an uncertain amount, larger the radius and duration weaker is the force and vice versa" Naruto grinned proudly at his invention.
"I still have to figure out how to prevent my friends from being trapped in the jutsu too." He said. Tsunade smiled as she heard him brag about his jutsu, clearly not at all disappointed by her loss in the bet, well she was the legendary sucker after all and nothing could change that.
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meanwhile
"He is not here" Hitomi said, scanning for chakra traces but finding none. She and Hiashi infiltrated konoha fairly easily, as their kind was proficient in genjutsu and all. They were now at naruto's apartment . "Guess we will wait" Hiashi said casting a few hand signs, and the couple shimmered away.
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Naruto's apartment
Naruto was home. He just stood outside his apartment that the third hokage gave him, when he was four years old after he was kicked out of the orphanage. He smiled as he stared at his home, surprisingly it looked untouched by the forces of nature, after such a long duration he had expected at least some signs of deterioration.
"Well why am I worrying so much, time to get some rest " . He opened the door and removed his ninja sandals and walked forward, what he saw shocked him. His house was squeaky clean not a single spec of dust at all. It looked as if it was cleaned recently. His bed was made, his books was neatly stacked, his plants were growing well, his tablecloth was washed..."tablecloth? when did I get a tablecloth?" Naruto frowned, someone was definitely here.
He expanded his senses and sensed two people, 'crap!' he cursed as he barely managed to dodge a two fingered strike from a man who just appeared out of no where into his room. "What the hell?Who are you" Naruto asked clearly annoyed that somebody had broken into his apartment. He frowned when he saw another person materialize into his house.
"Come on Hiashi that is very rude of you" Hitomi said frowning at him, she turned toward Naruto and her expression softened, she smiled at him and said "I am really sorry, you see my husband had a really rough day today, so he just a bit frustrated".
Now Naruto was confused, not did they just break in but they even attacked him without any provocation. "Hey boy all we want is for you to quietly come with us" Hiashi said with a neutral expression." No way in hell I am gonna come with you" Naruto said taking a defensive stance.
"Fine, if that's the way you want" Hiashi said and lunged forward, "Air palm" he shouted and thrust an open palm forward, Naruto brought both his arms forward in cross shaped block, but it was useless. He felt a huge burst of air, which pushed him back through the wall and into the open ground behind his apartment. Naruto groaned as he stood up, his opponent was tough, he needed assistance.
He brought his fingers into the infamous T shape "Shadow clone jutsu" he shouted and immediately three clones popped into existence. But before any of them could figure out what was happening Hiashi was inside his guard. With three simple pokes all of is clones vanished into smoke, he then attacked Naruto at his thigh. Naruto felt his entire leg go numb, his eyes widened as he dropped to his knee. "Go to sleep" Hiashi said and tapped Naruto's forehead, and he fainted.
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An indigo haired girl quickly made her way towards Naruto's apartment. She had a wide smile on her face and she was blushing a little. ' Today is the day my Naruto kun comes back' she thought to herself, 'how much have you grown Naruto kun? how much stronger are you? I have grown too...' she blushed at the thought of Naruto staring at her scanning her womanly curves, her face reddened and she shook her head to keep the lewd thoughts away. 'No... he probably doesn't remember me anymore, it been so long...' she thought sadly. She reached his apartment and looked at happily, she stood outside for a minute, remembering the first time she came here
flashback
"Naruto kun I am back." Hinata said smiling as she knocked on his door. She was a bit early, the sun hadn't risen yet. When she got no response she worried a little 'Is he sleeping?' she thought. She touched the lock and forced a bit of her chakra through it, the door slowly opened, she stepped inside gently trying to be as quiet as possible, "Naruto kun?" she entered his bed room and found it empty. Everything was gone, his clothes, most of his stuff, Hinata frowned 'is he out on a mission' she thought.
She jumped out the window and leaped onto the rooftops. She stopped when she heard his name being spoken. It was two girls taking to each other, both of them looked around his age,"So he is really gone huh,... for three whole years" the blonde haired one said. "yeah Ino... I hate to admit it but I will miss Naruto" the pink haired girl replied. Hinata was shocked, three more years? she hadn't seen him for almost six years, now she had to wait three more. "no" Hinata said sadly, a lone tear falling down her cheek.
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Hinata was outside his door,she had heard the hokage speak to the woman called Shizune, that Naruto would be coming today. She was about to knock on the door, but hesitated. 'what if he doesn't recognize me, what if hates me for leaving without any warning for six years, what if...he already has a girlfriend' she gasped at the final thought. No, no matter what, she has to see him, she had to. She had missed him for nine years, she imagined a taller and more muscular naruto and sighed blushing again. She finally knocked the door.
Just as she touched the door it creaked open, 'why is the door open?' she thought as she entered. "Naruto kun?" she called out gently, she saw his sandals at the door step and grinned, her Naruto was home. She walked further inside, her jaw dropped when he saw the large gaping hole on the side of his apartment. She was shocked, did somebody attack him, was he hurt.
Many thoughts ran through her mind. She had to save him, she decided and she made a single hand sign and said "demonic arts:Whisper of life ". Her senses expanded she could see even the tiniest trace of chakra that was left by all living things. She sensed four different chakra traces,one of them was her own, one warmed her heart 'Naruto' she thought , but when she sensed the other two she paled.
"F-Father and mother?" she stuttered, had they found out,...about her secret? Naruto was in danger.
So there you go, end of chapter one phew!. I know you have many questions, but don't worry, they all will be answered in chapter 2. I will try to update as soon as possible. it really is difficult to write a fanfic, i salute you all authors out there. I really thought it would be easy. And please tell me about how i can improve. your praises are what keeps us going. Ta
Whisper of life: allows the user to detect minute chakra signatures left by all living creatures.
oh yeah i was wondering if it is legal to take any picture from the internet as the cover page