I decided to go more indept on ZIM and Tak's past at Irken training school, so I wrote a fic all about their past.
The bell rang, which indicated lunch. Lunch was zim's least favorite part of the day. Only because of...recess.
Tak glared at him from across the room. Zim hated Tak. He hated recess because every day the same thing would happend. He would convince himself that he could beat Tak in squazoogle but he never did.
"that zim" Tak muttered, she then sat down at the most crowded table. Everyone always awaited her.
"hi Tak" Phelpha said, she was proud to be Tak's best friend.
"hi Phelpha" Tak began to eat her lunch, then she worked on her game plan. She always had a game plan, it helped her win.
"don't worry about Tak" Seef, zim's best friend, said," I'm sure you'll win today"
"right" zim agreed,"I'll dominate the puss-filed worm"
The teachers dismissed everyone, the students gathered onto the playground, some chose to swing or play sports with each other. Most chose to watch a revolutionary battle-the squazoogle game between Tak and ZIM.
Tak took her stance. She bounced the ball and was prepared. ZIM had moved to their town 2 years ago. he'd never been able to beat Tak at squazoogle. He played her on his first day and lost ever since.
ZIM took his stance. They glared each other in the eye. The battle began.
As the champion Tak took the first throw. The rules of squazoogle were simple, two Irkens started: the winner through the ball to start the game, the ball wasn't normal though. It was an Irken gel ball. If you failed to catch it then it would erupt into pieces of goo. If you failed to catch it, you also lost.
ZIM grabbed the ball. It almost slipped but he held on. he had worked on a throw last afternoon, it would soar right above Tak's antenea and then fall to the ground. he then used his tactic.
Tak barely grabbed the ball. when she saw the throw she recognized it, she immediatley jumped and grabbed the ball.
"nice try zim" she said,"but I remain undefeated" She hurtled a light speed throw at zim, just off to his left.
Zim reached out to get it, but it was just beyond his reach. the ball fell to the ground and he got covered in goo, again.
Tak laughed victoriously. "you pathetic invader, you'll never be part of the great assigning. NEVER!" she strutted off the black top followed by many other young Irkens.
Zim just stayed there, covered in goo. Some kicked dirt at him, others laughed and picked on him. He hated Tak even more.
"don't worry zim, she probably cheated" Seef said, helping him whipe off the goo.
"yeah" zim said, though he doubted it.
"you're ten times the invader she'll ever be, she's just jealous" Seef said
"right...jealous" zim muttered, he highly doubted that too.
"stupid zim" Phelpha said,"he thinks he's so tall"
"yeah, what kind of pathetic invader is he?" Tak agreed
"yeah" Phelpha muttered, she looked at zim. He was tall. She tried as hard as she could to hate him, but she couldn't get the slightest irritation.
"I'll be the greatest invader some day, that'll show him" Tak bounced a goo ball against the wall and caught it immediately. She was the greatest squazoogle player ever.
"you sure will" Phelpha said
the next day in xarfology (similair to astrology) the teacher announced a planet fair (ya see, they have planet fairs on Irk, instead of science fairs) and whoever won would get a year of conquering lessons.
It was Tak's dream to get conquering lessons, she listened intently to find out the rules
"the rules for this planet fair are." the teacher started," 1. you must pick a planet of the known solar system and write a 1000 word paper on how you would conquer this planet. number 2!
you must also construct a model of this planet and it has to be at the 100 miles=1 inch scale. NUMBER 3!
you also have to type out a 3 page list of facts on this planet in paragraph form. and lastly
you need to give a 3-5 minute speech on this planet and your conquering reasons in front of a crowd." their teacher wrote this on the board.
Tak copied the notes swiftly. and discussed her plans with Phelpha at lunch.
"that sounds great!" Phelpha said, she then whispered,"I heard zim was entering"
Tak raised her wonderfully Irken eyebrows,"big deal, i've got his ass kicked for sure"
"yeah" Phelpha murmured
"what planet is he doing?" tak queried.
"I'm not sure"
"no matter, I'll beat him"
"are you entering the planet fair?" zim asked Seef
"nah, I couldn't possibly do all that work" Seef said
"I'm entering"
"what planet did you pick?"
"I don't know yet"
"I think Tak is entering"
"no matter, I'll beat her for sure."
woo! that's chapter one, I really want to do the next chapter (honest! ^^;) but I need some things...
I need two names for girl Irkens, and two names for boy irkens. and two names for planets. I will give you credit if you think of these names and I use them. If you have some then email them to me at: carreerules@aol.com or my AIM name is carreerules, kudos to all you who said my first couple of fics were good, you made my day ^.~
The bell rang, which indicated lunch. Lunch was zim's least favorite part of the day. Only because of...recess.
Tak glared at him from across the room. Zim hated Tak. He hated recess because every day the same thing would happend. He would convince himself that he could beat Tak in squazoogle but he never did.
"that zim" Tak muttered, she then sat down at the most crowded table. Everyone always awaited her.
"hi Tak" Phelpha said, she was proud to be Tak's best friend.
"hi Phelpha" Tak began to eat her lunch, then she worked on her game plan. She always had a game plan, it helped her win.
"don't worry about Tak" Seef, zim's best friend, said," I'm sure you'll win today"
"right" zim agreed,"I'll dominate the puss-filed worm"
The teachers dismissed everyone, the students gathered onto the playground, some chose to swing or play sports with each other. Most chose to watch a revolutionary battle-the squazoogle game between Tak and ZIM.
Tak took her stance. She bounced the ball and was prepared. ZIM had moved to their town 2 years ago. he'd never been able to beat Tak at squazoogle. He played her on his first day and lost ever since.
ZIM took his stance. They glared each other in the eye. The battle began.
As the champion Tak took the first throw. The rules of squazoogle were simple, two Irkens started: the winner through the ball to start the game, the ball wasn't normal though. It was an Irken gel ball. If you failed to catch it then it would erupt into pieces of goo. If you failed to catch it, you also lost.
ZIM grabbed the ball. It almost slipped but he held on. he had worked on a throw last afternoon, it would soar right above Tak's antenea and then fall to the ground. he then used his tactic.
Tak barely grabbed the ball. when she saw the throw she recognized it, she immediatley jumped and grabbed the ball.
"nice try zim" she said,"but I remain undefeated" She hurtled a light speed throw at zim, just off to his left.
Zim reached out to get it, but it was just beyond his reach. the ball fell to the ground and he got covered in goo, again.
Tak laughed victoriously. "you pathetic invader, you'll never be part of the great assigning. NEVER!" she strutted off the black top followed by many other young Irkens.
Zim just stayed there, covered in goo. Some kicked dirt at him, others laughed and picked on him. He hated Tak even more.
"don't worry zim, she probably cheated" Seef said, helping him whipe off the goo.
"yeah" zim said, though he doubted it.
"you're ten times the invader she'll ever be, she's just jealous" Seef said
"right...jealous" zim muttered, he highly doubted that too.
"stupid zim" Phelpha said,"he thinks he's so tall"
"yeah, what kind of pathetic invader is he?" Tak agreed
"yeah" Phelpha muttered, she looked at zim. He was tall. She tried as hard as she could to hate him, but she couldn't get the slightest irritation.
"I'll be the greatest invader some day, that'll show him" Tak bounced a goo ball against the wall and caught it immediately. She was the greatest squazoogle player ever.
"you sure will" Phelpha said
the next day in xarfology (similair to astrology) the teacher announced a planet fair (ya see, they have planet fairs on Irk, instead of science fairs) and whoever won would get a year of conquering lessons.
It was Tak's dream to get conquering lessons, she listened intently to find out the rules
"the rules for this planet fair are." the teacher started," 1. you must pick a planet of the known solar system and write a 1000 word paper on how you would conquer this planet. number 2!
you must also construct a model of this planet and it has to be at the 100 miles=1 inch scale. NUMBER 3!
you also have to type out a 3 page list of facts on this planet in paragraph form. and lastly
you need to give a 3-5 minute speech on this planet and your conquering reasons in front of a crowd." their teacher wrote this on the board.
Tak copied the notes swiftly. and discussed her plans with Phelpha at lunch.
"that sounds great!" Phelpha said, she then whispered,"I heard zim was entering"
Tak raised her wonderfully Irken eyebrows,"big deal, i've got his ass kicked for sure"
"yeah" Phelpha murmured
"what planet is he doing?" tak queried.
"I'm not sure"
"no matter, I'll beat him"
"are you entering the planet fair?" zim asked Seef
"nah, I couldn't possibly do all that work" Seef said
"I'm entering"
"what planet did you pick?"
"I don't know yet"
"I think Tak is entering"
"no matter, I'll beat her for sure."
woo! that's chapter one, I really want to do the next chapter (honest! ^^;) but I need some things...
I need two names for girl Irkens, and two names for boy irkens. and two names for planets. I will give you credit if you think of these names and I use them. If you have some then email them to me at: carreerules@aol.com or my AIM name is carreerules, kudos to all you who said my first couple of fics were good, you made my day ^.~