Get it? Revamped? Anyway, I always edit the works of others, so why don't I edit terrible yet popular works of others? I didn't modify this into a work of art, but my mere intention was to make it more readable.
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Chapter 1
AN: I give thanks to my friend, Raven, for helping me with the English language in this story. You and Justin rock!
I was born with the name Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way—don't ask. I'm unsure of what my parents were thinking when they begat me. My hair, which flows down to below my breasts, is jet-black and has purple streaks and red tips. My eyes are an icy blue. I am a vampire, but my teeth are straight and white, for no particular reason. Nonetheless, I do have pale skin. Beyond being a vampire, I am also a 17-year-old witch attending the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
I was walking outside school on a cold, dreary day. Some students were staring at my all-black attire, and I shifted uncomfortably. I didn't much like my fashion preference being judged by my peers, but I ignored them and continued on my way down the path, staring at the wet ground.
"Hey, Ebony!" I then heard a voice shout. Looking up, I recognized the speaker as Draco Malfoy. The usual scowl on his face was replaced by a slightly hopeful expression as he walked toward me.
"Hi," I said, waving. I smiled at him when he paused in his steps in front of me. "What's up?"
"Clouds," he said flippantly. "Anyway, I've been meaning to talk to—"
"Ebony!"
Draco and I turned around. My friends were waving at me.
"Sorry," I said to the blond sheepishly. "Gotta go; class is about to begin. I'll see you later, okay?"
"Okay," Draco responded, looking slightly disappointed.
Wondering what he had been wanting to say, I walked away, joining my friends.