So I decided to take down the other PMD story because it was quite horribly written and very flame worthy.
I hope this one isn't as bad. Here is the new (and hopefully improved) story.
Bold- AN
Italics- thought
Under Line Italics- Memories.
Bold Italic-Fight.
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? P.O.V
"HELP! HELP ME!" A voice screamed."Give me the mother fucking pendant!" A cold malicious voice demanded. "I can't! It was my mothers!" The voice cried. "Then I'll just-" he was cut off. "Stop right there!"My voice boomed."NOIR!" The malicious voice screeched."Brain, you have gone far enough, you end here. You will no longer terrorize the innocent!" I demanded. "You will not stop me, I will have your blood Noir!" And with that the fight started.
Death and Violence ahead. If you don't like violence skip.
3rd person P.O.V
"Psyshock!" Blue and red orbs floated around the cacturne, but he wasn't worried, he just smirked."COUNTER DAZE!" The psychic orbs turned dark and the flew towards the Alakazam, he couldn't smirk like the cacturne did, he could only brace himself for the inevitable pain. Bang! "Give up, you cannot win." "FOCUS BLAST!" Afterwards there was silence."Drain Needle Arm!" The attack hit directly at the alakazams head, the attack knocked his head clean off. The blood went everywhere.
I knew he was still our last battle. He's finally dead. I've finally won. THE GIRL!
"Hey are you alright!?" "Y-yes I'm fin- JOSHUA!" And she ran to "Joshua" so I followed and we arrived at the scene of a bloody battered monferno, laying in the snow. He looked like crap but he would live. But the girl, a kirlia was scared to death. She most likely thought that he was gonna die. She kept crying muttering things like "Please don't die" or "Wake up, Please." I think I heard her whisper"Please live, I love you..." I told her to let me carry him to the town I was heading to, Forest town. It was a two hour walk she would of teleported us, but she was to tired to do so, and unfortunately it was winter time. I kinda figured out the story. They were walking to a town, likely the same one I am heading for, and then Brain attacked. When we arrived we went to the doctor's, I decided to wait it out with them, but I got bored so I went out side and then I heard someone scream.
? P.O.V
My life is flashing. Am I going to die?
I am six in this memory, still a petilil, I see my dad and mom, and I see a mansion. My dad is a Ludicolo and my mom is a lilligant. We were wealthy, and then next thing I knew my fathers head is taken off from a dragon pulse. Mom screams and we run, tears in our eyes. Then I have another memory when I am twelve, I am alone in my mansion with our butler and maid. Next thing I knew my mother is laying dead on the floor after getting raped. And then my eighteenth birthday were I sell the mansion, take my inheritance and get my sun stone.
"Don't worry little lilligant I'll be gentle, for a little bit, MWAHAHAHAHA!" I am ready to cry, because truly my family is cursed. "NEEDLE KICK!" A voice suddenly yelled. And then the rapist was down on the floor. "Come with me." He ordered and I obeyed. He took me to the doctors and then he went over to talk to a kirlia. She said her name was Anne and he told her his was Noir. They had the same goals as I did to go to the guild and become a rescue team. He said he would have to find a partner. And then I blacked out.
So how did I do? Make sure to review. And send me an OC if you want me to use Him or Her in the story. Make sure to give me some basic info.
Combo Moves
Counter Daze- Counter + Night Daze
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-PokemonChampion