This is my first fanfic okay? Bear with me...

Setting: World That Never Was; Shortly after the events of Kingdom Hearts I

Summary: Soon after the door to Darkness was closed a young girl with crimson, blood-like hair was found wondering the streets of Hollow Bastion. She was welcomed into a group known as Organization XIII. Xemnas, the leader of this mysterious clan immediately was astounded about her knowledge of Darkness and Death. She even has the ability to stop blood from reaching the Heart, therefore killing her victims and enemies immediately…

Rated: T for Mild to Moderate Language, Gory Details, and Suggestive Scenes

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Xemnas was boring her to sleep. Nanax proceeded to gently slam her head on the marble table before her. If it is possible to gently slam your head down on anything marble. She quickly looked up to see how the fellow organization members were holding up…

Axel and Roxas were watching each other with enough intensity that their intentions for after the meeting was obvious. Demyx and Zexion seemed to be having a whispered conversation; Xemnas, of course did not notice…

"And thus concludes the munny portion of this meeting," Xemnas droned on. Could he be anymore boring? Nanax thought to herself. A flicker of motion beside her caught her attention. She turned her head and instantly she regretted the glance… Marluxia and Larxene were passionately kissing each other.

Ugh… That has to be the grossest thing since Xaldin hit on me…

Upon entering Organization XIII as the Bloody Soul, number III grew attached to her in a very personal way... Nanax felt someone stare at her. Turning swiftly, she caught The Whirlwind Lancer's look. Shit! He's going to ask me out again!

Luckily, Xemnas asked for her Heartless report. Nanax rose blood-like crimson hair fell around her face. Clearing her throat she began, "Upon starting experiment 566-78-21 as directed by our Superior, Xemnas," Mansex, she corrected in her head, "I, Nanax, number XIV, have gathered the following information on creatures of Darkness known as the Heartless." I must be boring them, she observed before continuing, "These creatures, though they are created by darken hearts, are also created through prolonged death, such as a fatal wound that kills the victim hours sometimes days after the incident in which the wound was applied…"

Her fellow members straightened up at this, actually paying attention now. Even Marluxia and Larxene had stopped kissing to hear clearly.

Axel stood and slowly asked, "So you're saying that if some poor bastard got stabbed near the heart but didn't die immediately, he could become a Heartless."

Nanax allowed herself a small smile. Small but twisted still. "That number VIII is exactly what I'm saying. While dying, the poor bastard's heart will quickly fill with Darkness because the pain will trigger fear, hate, suicidal thoughts, and helplessness. In fact I believe that's what happened to you, Marluxia, and myself."

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Ashes & Blood