THE ASSASSIN AND THE PRIEST
Running... They were running away together. To escape the yells, protests and prejudicial mobs who were after them. They had each other! That's all that mattered. What they wanted! Not what their families desired.
They ran faster hearing the angry mobs approaching. The yells of their respective clans arguing with each other, blaming each other.
"This is all your fault!" spoke a man in the priests' garb.
"YEAH!!!" came the roar of his supporters.
"This is your fault!" replied an angry man who wore an assassins' garb.
"Yeah! If your clan member wasn't so violent, ours wouldn't be like this!"
"You're one to talk! You're a bunch of killers!"
"Shut Up!!!"
"Make me you murderer!"
This last comment started a big brawl. The assassins and priests were in one giant pile of violence and injury.
Listening to this argument, the hidden woman started to cry. Her sobs muffled by the piece of cloth that covered the lower part of her face. The man turned to the girl and spoke in a soft tone.
"Don't worry. We'll be out of here soon. We'll go somewhere where it won't matter. So don't cry."
His comforting words soothed the girl as she calmed down.
They soon sneaked away from the fight and made camp at a safe distance. They were wary of any monster, but knew if they found one, they couldn't really be hurt.
The woman soon drifted of to sleep. Her last conscious thoughts were the events that had led to this disaster...
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So waddya think? Be honest! This is my first fic so I need the advice. I'll welcome good and bad reviews.
Running... They were running away together. To escape the yells, protests and prejudicial mobs who were after them. They had each other! That's all that mattered. What they wanted! Not what their families desired.
They ran faster hearing the angry mobs approaching. The yells of their respective clans arguing with each other, blaming each other.
"This is all your fault!" spoke a man in the priests' garb.
"YEAH!!!" came the roar of his supporters.
"This is your fault!" replied an angry man who wore an assassins' garb.
"Yeah! If your clan member wasn't so violent, ours wouldn't be like this!"
"You're one to talk! You're a bunch of killers!"
"Shut Up!!!"
"Make me you murderer!"
This last comment started a big brawl. The assassins and priests were in one giant pile of violence and injury.
Listening to this argument, the hidden woman started to cry. Her sobs muffled by the piece of cloth that covered the lower part of her face. The man turned to the girl and spoke in a soft tone.
"Don't worry. We'll be out of here soon. We'll go somewhere where it won't matter. So don't cry."
His comforting words soothed the girl as she calmed down.
They soon sneaked away from the fight and made camp at a safe distance. They were wary of any monster, but knew if they found one, they couldn't really be hurt.
The woman soon drifted of to sleep. Her last conscious thoughts were the events that had led to this disaster...
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So waddya think? Be honest! This is my first fic so I need the advice. I'll welcome good and bad reviews.