A Fruits Basket Poem that I wrote, I still haven't finished the manga and I have seen most of the anime

A Fruits Basket Poem that I wrote, I still haven't finished the manga and I have seen most of the anime. I don't own Fruits Basket and if I did, the anime would go through until the end of the manga series! Review it or flame it if you please but don't be too harsh, it's my first time! LOL. If anything is like wrong or something, just tell me through a review. Thanks! Can someone tell me how to change your bio? Kudos' if you can. I think this is about Yuki. Or anyone else hurt in Furuba.

With these wings I fly

Through the open window.

Chains regain there strength.

Why can't I fly?

My heart longs

For the touch,

Forbidden.

Your love is strong

But he holds me tighter

Than your love can.

When will the hurt

I've been given,

The scares that will always

Remain, heal?

They come when I'm hurt,

Angry or sad but,

Why not when my insides

Are aching?

I cannot hold

I cannot comfort.

When will this hate

End?

Sorry the first bit was long but, please review!