-Disclaimer-
This is my first fic. I had thought about such a scenario happening in the DBZ-world before and thought: 'Why not? Let's attempt a story about it!". It's a what-if story of Bardock surviving the extermination of the Saiyans and being introduced as a Z-Fighter. His POV and the new relationships he encounters begin to flourish for the spikey-haired scientist. However, his presence also changes some moments of the DBZ storyline we all know.
Note: I would note be surprised if a familiar story was created, as it's a pretty obvious plot device. My story will concentrate on Bardock's role in DBZ from the Ginyu saga to the 'time' between the end of DBZ and start of GT. However, this will be cut down to the stories I feel he could play a role in (either fights or filler), so the entire DBZ story will be Kai'd* I suppose.
*Do not use this word.
Bardock Returns
'Ha ha ha! Have you suffered enough yet? How sad...I was starting to have a little fun!' remarks a big, muscular man.
The young boy was coughing up blood. A kick that severe to the stomach is never good. The injured child looks up to the brute. Tears began to fall from the young boy's eyes. 'Unfortunuetly, your time in this dimension is ove...' the man was interrupted by his own senses as a Destructo Disk was coming right behind him. 'Ha ha! A sneaky attack, you're nasty little man'.
Krillin gulped. His best chance to save his friend was easily avoided. The bald-headed man started making backward steps as the brute came slowly towards him.
'Oi, can you get this over with, Recoome? We need to tell the Captain that we need a new member in the force now that Guldo's dead!' screams a white-haired mutant.
'Yessss, and you still owe me a chocolate nut bar! So hurry up and get this over with so we get the Dragon Balls to Lord Frieza!' says a tall blue-skinned creature.
'Awwwww', cries Recoome. 'Well I guess my business with you is over, baldy!' The brute launches a kick to Krillin's groin which causes pain to the Z-warrior. The bald man slowly goes down to the floor, laying severely injured after the blow.
'D-d-d-a-ddy pl-e-a-s-se hel-p us...' cried Gohan before laying unconscious. Vegeta could only look in defeat as Recoome prepared to stomp on Krillin.
'Goodbye!' he said cheerfully. However, he was interrupted, as well as his fellow Force colleagues and the Saiyan Prince about a strong ki approaching.
'N-ooo...it couldn't be Kakarot! There's no way he could gain that immense power in such a short ammount of time!', The Prince's eyes widden in shock of the energy he's sensing. 'But it cannot be Frieza either. His power is much greater than that!'. Vegeta looks down in disbelief. 'Who...could it be?'
'Mmm, it looks like we have a stronger foe coming to us', remarks Burter. Jeice and Recoome nod in agreement. 'Maybe he'll be a better challenge than those weaklings!', says Jeice in reference to our fallen heroes (and Vegeta).
'I can't...can't believe it! The power is there for them to tremble in fear in but yet...they brush it off! as if it was nothing Fools! They'll be sorry...'. The Prince looks at his fallen 'comrades' 'Hmmph, I suppose they need their usual saviour to rescue their weak hides...'.
The power was getting closer to the battlefield every passing second. The Ginyu Force wait in anticipation of a challenge. Gohan and Krillin could only lay down on the ground in hope Goku is the massive power level coming to their aid.
'Huh, it looks like it might take longer than we...' started Burter before being interrupted by a man's sudden arrival.
'Hey...hey! That's the ki we were sensing!' says Jeice. 'It looks like another one of these monkeys!' comments Burter.
Vegeta looks up and is phased by what he sees. What? No way...! Wasn't...wasn't he killed during our planet's explosion? How can...he be here?' The saiyan gets up holding his broken arm, grunting due to the injuries he obtained against Recoome.
'So...it's you...The Ginyu Force, I take it? Hmmph, you seem rather weak for me!'
'Ha! Big talk for someone who's about to become leftovers!' the saiyan smirks at his foe's 'threat'.
'Oh yeah...how about I give you the first shot then?' The brute was more than happy to grant his request. Recoome flies over to Bardock, charging a punch. The mysterious saiyan stood there waiting for his enemy to attack him. 'Now, time to say goodbye!' declares Recoome. The brute was ready to land his punch when his target dissapeared into thin air. 'Huuuh...where did he go?, as he looked around for the man, a blue energy wave comes flying down up him. Recoome easily dodges and looks up: 'Ha! Is that the best you ca- Oooopmh'. The man appeared infront of the careless brute. Recoome is in total pain, Vegeta is instantly surprised as he sees the man who gave him no mercy fall to the floor after one single punch to the stomach.
'A good tactician has more than one weapon in his arsenal...if you know what I mean'. The man crosses his arms infront of the damaged Recoome, smirking. 'So...who's next?' as he looks towards the remaining Ginyu Force members.
-End of Chapter 1 disclaimer-
So...chapter one is over. I know it's a little short but it's more of a setting chapter rather than action. The later chapters will be longer.
Any thoughts on the story so far? How could I approve the story a little more? I'm hoping to see some reviews to encourage me to continue this story.
-Cheers.
