hello everyone, I have a new story based on Raven, I have recently made a story of Raven months ago but deleted it because of losing interest, but I got the interest back and have decided to make a quest story of this, I was planning on making this story the for months and now here it is. enjoy.
in the land of Raven things have been alright, the land was safe and happiness was brought back again, but the happiness was taken away as Nevar a powerful Demon has returned after the quest of the Dragons eye. and now he has brought terror back to this land.
" welcome to the land of Raven", said a man transformed from a Raven.
" my name is Raven, and as you can see my land has been once again terrorised by my arch enemy Nevar, this time he has made four demons more powerful than any other, they are the element Demons, Water, Fire, Earth and Air, they have taken over this land as the demons have went their separate ways and have made my land a curse.
The only way to break the curse is to destroy the Demons, but I can't do it alone, luckily a prophecy has been spoken that six warriors will come down from their home Earth, down to my land. but it said that the six of them will be doing this quest, their names are Quinton, Rebecca, Samantha, Troy, Ursula and Vincent.
my senses are telling me right now they are on the bus stop on a Monday morning waiting for the bus that will take them to school, I must get their before the bus does, gives them some time off school", he said as he transformed into a bird and flew away from his land, he then flew to earth and arrived to the bus stop where the six warriors are on a Monday morning, in the year 2011. he then bowed at the six as they looked at them.
" welcome brave warriors", he said as he transformed into a man. " a prophecy has been spoken that six warriors will bring my land to piece, all six of them have been chosen to compete in a very difficult quest, those six are you, the quest is to destroy the element demons, we are going to destroy our first demon Earth but first each of you has a symbol, that symbol can help you win", he then grabbed a bag of his cloak.
" I have six handkerchiefs, each with a different colour Red, Blue, Green, Yellow, Beige and Grey, the colours represent your symbols, Sun, Wave, Tree, Mountain, Cloud, and Moon, the colour handkerchief you get is the symbol you will have for the rest of the week", said Raven. the six each picked up a hanky.
" Quinton you have yellow so may you stand high on the highest mountain, Rebecca you have Beige so may you be up and beyond to the clouds, Samantha you have got Blue so as you make your way to victory, let the waves push you further, Troy you have got Grey so may the moon light your way through the darkest path, Ursula you have got Green so may you grow high, strong and fresh as the mighty oak from a mighty tree, and Vincent you have got red so may you rise as bright as you can like the sun", said Raven revealing the warriors. then he created a portal.
" once you enter this portal your quest begins, we will destroy a demon every day and we will be able to return here on our fifth day, we must destroy our first demon earth, he is hidden in the forest which is now dark thanks to the curse, now as the follow me our quest begins", said Raven. as he entered the portal followed by the six. Quinton entered with a yellow robe with the mountain symbol, Rebecca entered with a Beige Robe with the cloud symbol, Samantha entered with a Blue robe and the wave symbol, Troy entered with a grey robe and the moon symbol, Ursula entered with a green robe and the tree symbol, and Vincent entered with a red robe and the sun symbol.
they arrived at the dark forest and the front of the forest takes place their first challenge.
" now warriors", said Raven, " there is an important reason why we will be destroying the earth demon first is not only it is the easiest one to start with, but there are stuff in there that will help you with this quest, they are you standards, you need them to make sure you succeed in this quest, so without them you will not compete in this quest.
in this challenge you will enter the dark forest and stick to a path where you can find our standards, the six standards are somewhere in the forest and I will go in there immediately so you will know if you have made it, if you lose the path then you may face some demons that are in there, lose the path and you will pay the penalty.
however there are some rewards I have for those who succeeded, but I will only give the rewards to the first three that make it there now the challenge will now begin", said Raven. then the six warriors have entered the forest. on different trees they will spot there symbols in a different colour, if they see bronze then they are far from their standards, if they see silver then they are halfway through there journey, if they see gold then they are very close.
basically all but Vincent has reached the bronze symbol, the six went there separate ways, Rebecca and Troy have only got bronze, while Ursula and Samantha got the silver, Quinton has found the gold symbol and was on his way to Raven.
" Quinton, congratulations on being the first to reach here, I will give you the reward as promised but right now we must wait until the other five have arrived", said Raven.
Vincent has now found his bronze sun and is back on track. Samantha is getting close to the gold wave, Troy has found the silver moon, with Rebecca finding the silver cloud, but after Ursula has found the silver tree she can't seem to find the gold one. she has feared she has lost the path.
Raven heard a rustling as if another warrior is coming. he turned around to see Troy as he was running through the forest.
" you didn't need to run Troy, but you did so but I am not mad at you, as you have made it second place, if the others don't get here by noon then they have failed speaking of which another warrior is coming", said Raven. as he heard the rustling. he saw Samantha come.
" Samantha you have made it third so just like Troy and Quinton you get the reward as well, now the others won't be getting any rewards but if they make it here quick enough nothing will happen", said Raven.
Ursula was like walking backwards, she was heading back to the entrance, and Vincent feels like he is on his way right now and Rebecca feels like she has lost the path.
Raven waited a few more minutes and has now thought that they have lost the path.
" okay I am going after them you three wait here", said Raven as he went into the forest.
he first spotted Ursula blocked by a demon, before it was about to get her, Raven used his staff and flashed it at the demon making it vanish.
" are you okay Ursula", said Raven.
" yeah", said Ursula.
" now we need to find Vince and Becca", said Raven as she followed him to find the other two.
Vincent saw a demon coming at him then he heard someone shout.
" back off, or I'll use it", he turned around to see Raven pointing his staff at the demon, the demon then ran off leaving Vincent alone.
" okay Rebecca is still out there so let's go and find her, wait that's her over there", said Raven as he went to Rebecca.
" Rebecca did you lose the path", said Raven.
" yes", said Rebecca.
" don't worry, you're safe, all of you are", said Raven as he then lead the three to meet the others safe and sound.
" now let it teach you three a lesson, let it be a lesson to you three as well Sammy, Quin and Troy, on your standards are nine silver feathers, these feathers represent your lives in this quest, so for ever challenge you fail will cost you a life, if you lose all nine then you are instantly eliminated from the quest, now that rule cannot be set aside, so Ursula, Rebecca and Vincent since you three fail this first challenge you must pay the penalty. a loss of a life", and as he said that he used his staff to make one feather from each standard vanish, now Ursula, Rebecca and Vincent continue the quest with 8 lives.
" now as I said and promised there are rewards for those who make it here, treasure rings, the more challenges you succeed the more rings you get, if you get nine rings then a precious life will be returned on your standard, so it can make up with the mistakes you have done, so Quinton you have made it here first so you get three gold rings, Troy you made second so two gold rings, and Samantha you have reached third so one gold ring", said Raven and once he gave the rings to the warriors, they placed them on their standards.
" now don't worry, as we continue our way in the forest our next challenge awaits", said Raven.
he then lead Quinton, Troy, Samantha, Ursula, Rebecca and Vincent followed Raven to challenge number two in the forest.
Vincent: I was going up to a bad start, a life already lost, but at least I wasn't the only one to fail this challenge.
Quinton: an amazing start for me, I am the leader out of the six of us.
Rebecca: even though I wasn't starting out good in this quest I just hope I do good in the future.
Ursula: man I thought I was going to make it, I was so close.
Samantha: it was great I managed to make it through and got a ring, I just hope I keep the nine lives for the rest of today.
Troy: when my symbol was the moon, I thought I was going to be unlucky, but I guess I was wrong and am in second place.
they arrived at the challenge.
" now warriors as we are walking right now we can get to the earth demon, but he has made something that is blocking us from getting closer to him, the thrall threads, as you six can see you are from one side of the threads, you must work your way through the threads without ringing the bells attached to them, that would wake up the six demons in this challenge that are asleep right now, if a warrior triggers off a bell, then a demon will wake up and vanish but will take a warrior with it, the warrior it takes will be the warrior who wakes it up, now at the other side are precious gold rings, if you make it across then those gold rings are yours, if you get caught by a demon then you will lose a life, let the challenge begin", said Raven.
the six then entered the threads while the demons are still asleep, Vincent went in first, Samantha went in after, Troy followed in quietly, Ursula was as careful as she was and went in followed by Rebecca and Quinton.
so far they are all doing good, Ursula went past and reached halfway, Troy caught up and became followed by Vincent, Rebecca came halfway as well and so did Quinton, and Samantha almost triggered off a bell but she didn't and all six warriors have made it halfway.
Ursula was getting closer to the other side and so was Samantha as she got her pace back after that almost elimination, Quinton caught up as well but Rebecca wasn't that lucky, she trigger one of the bells ringing it causing a Demon to wake up and vanish taking her with it, Luckily Troy made it with the others and so did Vincent, so now the five remaining warriors needed to get past the last set of threads in order to complete the challenge.
Ursula made it safely out of the threads and grabbed a ring, Vincent did the same thing as Troy, Quinton almost triggered off a bell but he made it, so Samantha was still in the threads, she was as careful as she was and grabbed a ring.
" warriors, congratulations on making it past the threads, for that you are rewarded a gold ring, you may place them on your standards", said Raven. and they did so, now the scores are Quinton has 9 lives and 4 rings, Troy has 9 lives and 3 rings, Samantha has 9 lives and 2 rings, Ursula and Vincent are both tied with 8 lives and 1 ring. Raven then used his staff to bring Rebecca back.
" Rebecca, I am pleased that you are near to the end, but sadly you didn't make it across so you must lose a life", said Raven. and with a flash of his staff, a feather on Rebecca's cloud standard Vanished so now she has 7 lives left and no rings.
" don't worry Rebecca there are still more challenges up ahead and no one will be eliminated today, the earth demon didn't just use the thrall threads to block our path, the demon used something else, as you follow me, we are going to reach that door", said Raven. he lead Quinton, Troy, Samantha, Ursula, Vincent and Rebecca to the next challenge.
Vincent: I may have done bad in the last challenge but at least I was alright in this one.
Quinton: I almost lost this challenge, but at least I made it and a still the leader.
Rebecca: two challenges failed in a row, if I lose another challenge then this might not be my day. but at least I won't be eliminated today.
Ursula: it's great that this challenge made up for what happened in the last one.
Samantha: I managed to complete two challenges in a row, if I keep it up I could be the leader.
Troy: wow, still in second place, two challenges completed, I know there is a chance I won't win the next one.
" now warriors, in some challenges you will compete against each other, this is one of them, welcome to the battering ram, there are two doors that are both locked, and two battering rams, those rams can help destroy the doors, now there are rings up for grabs as well, so the first team to knock the door down shall have the rings they collected, the losing team will lose a life each, now the are ring hanging on the racks so you can use the rams to get them, the last ring is in the door, we will divide you into two teams, Quinton Troy and Samantha you will form one team, Vincent, Ursula and Rebecca you will form another, let the challenge begin", said Raven.
the two teams both went to their rams, their are rolling logs used for transport so they can move their rams, they started to work together to move there rams to the racks where the rings are.
" I'll get the first one", said Rebecca. as she grabbed the first ring for her team.
" I got this one", said Samantha, now both teams are tied.
they both moved their rams as they reached the second pair of rings.
" I got it", said Troy as he grabbed his ring, now his team needs to break down his door to get the last ring for Quinton.
" let me take this one", said Ursula grabbing the second ring for her team, and now her team needs to get the last ring for Vincent.
both teams are tied as they reached the doors and destroyed them, they rammed into the doors, trying to destroy them, both teams managed to break their doors down and both Quinton and Vincent went in to grab the last ring.
and in the end Vincent has got it.
" Vincent, Rebecca, Ursula, you have won for your team, and has each earned a ring, you may now place them on your standards", said Raven now the scores are Vincent and Ursula are tied with 8 lives and 2 rings, and Rebecca has 7 lives and 1 ring.
" Quinton, Samantha and Troy, I do congratulate you three for also breaking the door down but you didn't reach the third ring, so you lost the rings you collect in this challenge and also a life", said Raven. now their scores are Quinton has 8 lives and 4 rings, Troy has 8 lives and 3 rings, and Samantha is tied with Vincent and Ursula with 8 lives and 2 rings.
" now I am pleased that everyone now has rings, and we are also close to the earth demon, we have to cross a bridge to reach the demon, the bridge is up ahead", said Raven.
Vincent: I am starting to back on track.
Quinton: I thought I was going to win this challenge. but I guess I had to I guess I had to lose sometime.
Rebecca: finally, I won a challenge.
Ursula: my team did really great at this.
Samantha: shame I lost my first challenge, at least things can change in my next one.
Troy: if Quinton wasn't on my team then I would have been the leader.
Raven lead Quinton, Troy, Samantha, Vincent, Ursula and Rebecca to the last challenge before the war of the earth demon. the riddle bridge.
" now warriors, this is the riddle bridge, if you make it across then we can face the earth demon, the book will show you a riddle, step on the letter tiles that spell out the riddle, if the answer is correct you can get across and get the rings on the other side, Quinton since you are the leader you will go first and cross the bridge, Troy you are in second place and will lead him across, get the riddle right and the rings are yours, get it wrong and two of the remaining warriors will have the chance to get the rings and you two will lose a life", said Raven. and the challenge began.
Quinton entered at the bridge and Troy reached the book. and read it.
it said.
I can be Red, Yellow and Green, Purple too, and also orange and Blue.
they thought for a moment and said.
" step on R first", said Troy, Quinton did so.
then there are three vowels A, I and U.
Quinton stepped on A but accidently stepped on W which is not the next letter so he vanished taking Troy with him.
Quinton: I knew what the answer was, I just wished I didn't step on that other tile accidently, then I would have got the rings.
Troy: I thought I was going to lead but instead I have moved back.
" Samantha even though you are tied, you had more previously so you will cross the bridge next, Ursula and Vincent, one of you will join her, we will draw straws and the shortest will join her", said Raven. the two drew and Ursula got the smallest.
" Vincent you will join Rebecca if Ursula and Samantha fail, Ursula and Samantha, you two are up next, let the challenge begin.
Ursula memorised the riddle and said to Samantha.
" I think Rainbow is the answer", Samantha stepped on the letter and W. Samantha has got the correct answer and has made it across and has got the four rings for each to have two.
Samantha: after Quinton and Troy vanished I knew what the answer was, I think the boys did to.
Ursula: after seeing the colours in the riddle I was expecting the answer was RAINBOW.
the rest of the warriors and raven made it across the bridge.
" now Samantha and Ursula congratulations on getting the riddle correct, so for completing the challenge you get to keep the rings, you may now place them on your standards", said Raven. now Samantha has 8 lives and 4 rings, and Vincent has 8 lives and 4 rings.
" Vincent and Rebecca since you didn't compete in this challenge nothing will happen and you will keep your score as it is, as for Troy and Quinton, we must bring them back", said Raven and with his staff he made Troy and Quinton reappear.
" Quinton, Troy you have both failed this challenge, so the pair of you must lose a life", said Raven now Quinton has 7 lives and 4 rings, and Troy has 7 lives and 3 rings.
" now as you all follow me, it is time we face the earth demon", said Raven as he lead the six to the final challenge of the day.
they arrived at the darkest part of the forest. the lair of the earth demon. where they spotted a green cloaked figure it was the earth demon.
" warriors, we are hear to defeat our first demon, this is the lair of the Earth Demon. as long as these demons are around Never is safe because he may believe that you won't stand a chance against them.
there is an obstacle you must get across without touching the ground, from right now, we must have at least one warrior complete the obstacle to defeat the demon, we will take it in turns one at a time to see who can destroy the demon, any warrior that fails will lose a life, now have six cards, five are white and one is red, the warrior that gets the red card will go first", said Raven.
Vincent drew a card first and it was the red card.
" Vincent you will go first, fail this task and you will lose a life and one of the others will take over, may the luck of the Raven's eye be with you, let the challenge begin", said Raven.
Vincent started with the balancing log, in this obstacle he must not touch the ground, he made it across the log, next is the rope swing using vines for rope, he swung across it, thirdly is the stepping stones, he made it across that stone by stone, he went to the forth part of the obstacle, the tree branch monkey bars, even though his hands were a bit sweaty he made it across them, now there is only one more part of the obstacle and that is the rope bridge, if he gets across then he destroys the demon, he managed to do so and as he placed his hand on the green hooded figure, the demon vanished.
Raven used his staff to bring Vincent back with the others.
" I do congratulate you Vincent, you have destroyed the earth Demon, now all of the forests in this land is back to normal and all the animals are safe, however there are still three demons left, the Fire, Water and Air Demon. the day is about to end and the forest is safe so you six find a place to sleep, and tomorrow we will destroy a different demon, so for now have a good rest", said Raven. then the six warriors went off in the forest to find a place to rest.
" the first day is gone and we still have our six, but tomorrow we might lose people, come join us next time as the warriors set off the Air demon", said Raven as he transformed into a bird and flew off.
well how was that, the first day of the quest and the six warriors are still in the game the scores are.
1st: (tied) Samantha and Ursula 8 lives and 4 rings each.
2nd: Vincent 8 lives and 2 rings.
3rd: Quinton 7 lives and 4 rings.
4th: Troy 7 lives and 3 rings.
5th: Rebecca 7 lives and 1 ring.
now come and join me next time as the warriors do the second day of the quest, will they still have all six or will they lose somebody. all will be revealed next time.
