Okay this is my first story so be kind. NO FLAMES!! I will accept critique about my mistakes though. Review if you like it!!
It was a normal day in Konoha until to strangers came dressed in black cloaks with a past that won't leave them alone. What perils will these to put all the ninja around them through? Why are they so cold to everyone ... and WHY THE FRICK DO THEY HAVE ANIMAL EARS AND TAILS!?/ read to find out naruhina ococ sausaku others too ooc Naruto strongnaruto demonnaruto nice kyuubi
Rated T for blood gore angst and colorful language. Mostly safety too.
SAKURA BASHING BE WARNED!! I've decided to make Sasuke be mostly good with some bad traits and plain torture him throughout the story.
I AM DICLAIMING THE OWNER SHIP OF NARUTO IF I OWNED IT NARUTO WOULD NEVER WEAR A JUMPSUITE HINATA AND HE WOULD BE TOGHETHER AND SASGAY WOULD BE DEAD OR UNDER AREST!!
Demon speak
Demon think
Human speak
Human think
Jutsu
Chapter one:
"Dear kami I hate guard duty nothing EVER happens" "yeah yeah I know I hate it too. But we don't have much of a choice no do we?"
These two unlucky guards in their self pity failed to notice the two small figures coming down the road towards the gate of Konoha. The first one was shorter than his or her companion but only by an inch or two. He was dressed in a long black cloak so you couldn't see his face or clothing but you could see to triangles of something on top of his head under the hood and is black ninja shoes and ... Claws? On his toes. Is Companion the taller of the two was clearly feminine in her stride and her figure under her cloak of the same midnight black. She also had the unexplained points on her head and had dark grey shinobi shoes on her feet and claws on her toes.
As the duo made it to the guard stand the guards looked up in surprise
"Who are you and what business do you have in Konoha!"
The shorter one spoke "My sister and I are here to see the hokage and ask permission to become shinobi of leaf and live here." his voice though young was as cold as a certain older uchiha devoid of life and feeling. A voice that never should belong to someone so young
"As to who we are well I'm not sure you want to know that." the second stranger spoke apparently the first ones sister with the same emotionless tone as her brother but with a bit of ... Maliciousness? It sent shivers down each of the guards' spines. They had a strange feeling it would be best to just let them see the hokage and whatever they do DONT PISS THESE TWO OFF!!
" o-o-kay y-y-you m-may go i-in. A-A-Anbu-s-san p-please escorts them w-would you??"
Just then in a swirl of leaves an ANBU black-ops agent appeared and nodded to the two guards. He turned his head to the travelers and looked at them from behind his cat mask. Well they look like they rent very tough and shouldn't pose a threat to me or the village. "Strangers-san would you please come with me?"
"Yes" they spoke in unison.
The Anbu led them to the Hokage tower silently. Villagers stopped to stare at the new comers a sense of dread fell over them though they didn't know why. But they were all afraid. One man even pissed himself.
Dear kami these ningen need to learn some decency The taller one straightened her stance "you can stop staring now Where going inside. And the person who peed himself changes your pants you stink."
And lo and behold they were at the at the hokage tower. The anbu slightly freaked out by them left saying the receptionist would help them.
The two walked inside passing the receptionist "DO YOU TWO HAVE AN APPOINTMENT??"
"Yes we do."
"Oh ok then"
The two walked down the hallway with no further interruption and opened the door to the hokage's office and found...
The hokage asleep at his desk.
Sweatdrop "hokage-sama time too wake up we need to talk to you" the sister said loudly as she shook his shoulder.
"WHO WHAT WHERE DID THE GIANT PICKLE GO!! NOOOOOOOOO WE NEED YOU TO STOP THE EVIL COTTENCANDY MEN!!"
The siblings by this point almost face faulted ALMOST. "Um ... sir? We need to talk to you and ... Mr. Pickle??" the brother finally spoke.
The hokage in surprise turned to the siblings. "Huh? Who are you?"
"You don't know us but you knew our parents" the second one explained coolly
"And they where?"
"Take a wild guess." the brother said as they took of their cloaks reveling who they were.
The Sister looked about 12. She had long silver hair that reached her mid back. She wore a black long sleeve shirt with a silver kimono style top that went down to her knees and was spilt at the sides and held together by a black obi that dint have any ties or bows for some reason. She was wearing black baggy capris that dint have any pockets and seemed to be made of cotton. On her feet where two dark grey that matched her whole outfit. As for weapons she had two short swords at either oh her hips with black handless and seethes with weird swirling designs in green, she also had a kunai pouch on her mid thigh. But that wasn't the strangest thing. She had deadly claws on her hands and toes. On top of her head were to silver ookami ears, and behind her where 3 swaying ookami tails. Then lastly there where her eyes they seemed normal enough but they where a haunting deep blue, devoid of any life or emotion they seemed almost.. Dead.
Her brother seemed about 11. He had spiky blond hair that fell to his mid neck. He wore a deep reddish orange shirt with black coat on top. He had black long pants with pockets on his shins and where normal pant pockets are usually placed. He had the same shinobi sandals as his sister only in black. He had a long sword on his left hip with a deep orange handle and a black sheath that had swirls of orange on it. And like his sister only a bit shorter thanes hers he had deadly claws on his hands and toes. In the way of abnormalities, perched on his head where Red and black tipped kitsune ears, and he had 3 red kitsune tails with black tips. His eyes where exactly like his older, most likely, sister's haunting, deep blue, and devoid of life. Their eyes where the only way you could tell they where related.
The hokage nearly had a heart attack "YOUR YOUR!! YOU TWO ARE SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD AND THE TAILS and THE EARS AND THE THE!! That it no more prunes before bed."
"Well at least you recognized who we were after what 11 years for me and 12 for my sister." the boy said.
"How could I not your parents where heroes here and m close friends. The resemblance between you and them though faint is hard to miss especially your eyes." the hokage sighed. "Why did you come back here then after all these years? Why did you leave? And what happened to you??"
The girl explained this time "in order. It should be obvious as to why we came back. We didn't want to leave or rather we were taken away from here and well" the girl went over to the old man and whispered something in his ear (AN: HAHAHA NOPE NOT GIVEN ANYTHING AWAY YET SUCKAS :P and if you haven't figured out who the boy is smack yourself. the girl is my oc and I can excuse if you don't know who she is. BACK TO THE STORY)
The hokage's eyes widened " dear god you to had to go through that?? Who sent you there??" he asked angrily
"Where not sure yet but we have 3 suspects the council, (AN: the gay old farts who should just drop dead already!) The villagers and Orochimaru." the boy said.
"Well I'll do anything I can to find out who and punish them immediately."
The girl let out a small lifeless laugh that was obviously forced "don't worry we can handle it over time we have gotten ... cennections you could say."
"Alright then. So I suppose you want to stay here and become shinobi?"
The boy answered him "Yes yes we do"
"Well I suppose I could find you an apartment by the end of the day. But I can't make you shinobi yet, Threes a class at the academy that is your age group and they are graduating next year. You could head over today even. Class will be starting in 10 minutes that should be enough time to make the paperwork to give to the teacher and get you over there on time."
The siblings looked at each other
In a whisper "well who were looking for are all around our age. And if we managed to evade detection from our enemies and get here maybe one of them could skim by here." the brother offered.
"Hmmm I guess your right and what's a year before we can start our search. We in a way have all the time in the world."
The boy nodded "Alright Hokage-sama well go to the academy."
The hokage smiled warmly at the two and stood up with some papers in his hand "good I thought would so I pulled up the paper work while you were talking. You are now officially residents of Konoha and shinobi in traning! Now take these and head west you can't miss the academy there's a big sign in the front that says SHINOBI ACADAMY, ill pick you up personally after school and I promise you well have a apartment for you charge free!!" the hokage gave the paper work to the two, and showed them to the exit of the building. He said good bye to the two and accepted their thank you saying it was no problem. As he watched them leave he thought sadly those two have been through so much I can't blame them for being so cold and untrusting of the village that helped forsake them I only hope they can learn that this village has some good in it. Only time will tell. When the hokage got back to his office he was met with the of paper that had appeared while he was gone "oh shit"
Outside the academy the students returning to school from summer break where met with a surprise or two.
"SASUKES MINE INO PIG!!"
"NO WAY HES MINE FORHEAD GIRL!!"
"Hn"
"OH SASUKE-KUN!!" fangirl squelles
"Oh sasuke-ku ... whoa who are they?"
Sasuke wanting to see and thank whatever or whoever managed to shut the pinkhaired banshee up looked towards the school and was as surprised as said banshee was.
Leaning against a light post as a strange boy with spiky blond hair red and black tipped fox ears and 3 tails he seemed bored and distant he was staring at the sky. Then sitting on the edge of the top of the 5 story academy was a girl with silver hair and wolf ears and 3 tails. She also looked bored and distant staring at the ground.
Sasuke could honestly say he was curious about these strange new comers though he would never admit it. Keeping up the cold facade he walked over to the boy. "Who are you?" he asked calmly
"Why does it matter to you?" the boy answered equally calmly with a hint of 'leave me alone now or you don't want to know what'
"It's not every day two people with animal ears and tails show up outside your school." Sasuke was getting annoyed at this point why wouldn't this guy just tell him who he was didn't he know that he was the last uchiha? And that HE needed to know everything in order to beat him
"Yeah well you'll know soon enough ... uchiha-san" the boy said with fake respect in that cold dead voice of his.
Sasuke was about to attack him when the girl suddenly appeared next to the boy. She spoke calmly with a void voice just like the boys and now that Sasuke got a closer look at her and him they had the same eyes. "Nii-san it's time to go inside leave the prick alone we don't need any fires on the first day now do we?"
Her apparently brother snorted "yeah yeah I know we also don't need any massacres but there's gunna be plenty of each now isn't there onee-chan?"
All faint laugh escaped her lips a dead laugh but a laugh all the same "damn straight." she said as they walked past the fuming uchiha survivor into the school.
"Grrrrrrrr" Sasuke growled sakura tentavly went up to him "...sasuke-kun?" she asked sweetly
"Get away from me your annoying" he spat out as he stormed angrily into the building with his legion of fangirls and the other students trailing behind.
In class 289
"ALRIGHT CLASS WE HAVE TWO NEW STUDENTS WHO HAVE RECENTLY MOVED TO KONOHA TREAT THEM WITH RESPECT!" the teacher, Iruka, shouted.
All students "Hai sensei"
The sliding door openly quietly and the siblings from outside the school came in, much to Sasuke's disdain.
Iruka ushered them to the front of the class. "Okay please introduce yourselves!"
the boy and the girl sent cold dead and calculating glances over the class that sent shivers down all the students spine even Shino's.
The boy spoke first "My name is Naruto Uzumaki" "and my name is Mika Uzumaki"
End chapter 1
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WHAT YA' THINK!! PLEASE REVIEW NEXT TIME IS THE GRADUATION!! Or team 7 and 6 combined I haven't picked yet --'
Mika: you do know your insane right??
HEY YOU ARE TOO!! And yes I do know
Mika: --' ok ok I know I know
Good
Translations:
Ookami: wolf
Kitsune: fox
San: an honorific used to show someone's senior or a stranger respect not as much as
Sama: used to show great respect
Onee-chan: honorific for someone's sister usually if there older
Nii-san: used for brothers usually older
Kun: honorific for someone close a boy
Chan: same as Kun only for girls and little boys
Hokage: Fire Shadow
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