Chapter 1: Pilot
This story may get a bit melodramatic, so if that is any sort of turnoff for you, I suggest not reading it.
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"I'd like to say it was a hard decision," Chris said, as the two teams were seated on logs next to him, watching him with wary eyes. "But... let's keep it real. Team Pimâpotew Kinosewak wins the challenge!" At these words, said team began to cheer (aside from Max), as Chris began to explain the rewards.
Once he was done shamelessly promoting, Chris walked over to the other team. "Team Waneyihtam Maskwak! Please go vote! One member of your team is heading home today." He only grinned as the team gave audible groans of protest.
All of sudden, someone yelled. "Alright! That's it. Cut or whatever." The cameras that were pointing at the teens and the host, were pointed downwards as the crew began to fiddle with their equipment.
Chris let out a sigh and glared at the two teams. "You guys are welcome to do anything you want until the elimination ceremony," he told them, before starting to smooth out his hair. "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going clean up." He walked off with Chef and the rest of the crew following him.
Once he had left, Dave let his head fall into his lap. "This couldn't have gone worse," he groaned.
Sky patted him on the back, awkwardly. "There, there," she tried to console. "We'll get them next time."
Dave just gave her a look. "Do you really believe that?"
Sky looked around at their team. Beardo was beat boxing again with Ella singing to it, making a musical concoction that made her ears bleed. Leonard was near his collapsed "wizard's tower," shouting a bunch of gibberish at it, while Shawn watched on, slurping noisily from his soup can. "Maybe?" She said, with a shaky smile.
Dave simply groaned again, before glaring at a particular person. "I know who I'm voting for…" he muttered.
Meanwhile with the Kinosewaks, were having their own problems. "Sidekick!" Max demanding glaring at Scarlett. "Do you mind complimenting me on my evil during this challenge?"
Scarlett audibly groaned, something that Max didn't catch, as he continued to blather on without a care in the world.
"Please!" Topher said in response to Max. "I was clearly the star of the show." He frowned. "I wonder if the camera captured the perfect side of my face…?" he wondered aloud.
"At least you weren't like Samey," Amy scoffed. "She was practically useless!"
"No, I wasn't-!" She started to protest.
Topher cut her off. "Yeah, you're right." He paused, before posing, making gun hands towards Samey. "Better try harder next Samey. Or else your team will give you... the old boot!" He grinned. "How was that?"
Rodney frowned. "What was it?"
Topher groaned. "My Chris impression! Duh!"
"Alright!" Jasmine suddenly stood up from her eat and clapped her hands together, catching the attention of everyone. "Let's all head to the beach! I'm sure we could all use some relaxation after being thrown out of a falling plane."
"We don't have swimsuits," Scarlett pointed out.
"I agree," Sky said, flashing a smile at her teammates. "We just need some rest and relaxation for now. We could all use it."
Everyone seemed to hesitate and a moment of silence passed between them all.
Surprisingly, it was Dave who broke it. "Sure," he said with a shrug. "What could possibly go wrong?"
"Famous last words," Shawn muttered.
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"This does not suit my evil intentions," Max grumbled, unhappily, sitting on a small rock. He glanced at his "sidekick," who was observing a sandcastle that Ella and Rodney were building. Most of the others were either doing the same or wading the shallow water. He repositioned himself in an effort to be more comfortable. "This sucks."
"Are you kidding, man?" Shawn hissed, keeping lookout on a large boulder. "This is the perfect chance for zombie to get us! It happened every time we let our guard down."
Dave frowned, pausing his construction of a small castle to stare at the two. "You know I can't tell who's the stranger out of the two of you."
"Alright, I'm done!" Sugar said cheerfully, proudly displaying her own sandcastle, which was hastily made with practically the entire castle ready to collapse under its own weight. "Now let's get the judges to vote on the best! Even though we know who clearly won." She sniggered.
"This was a contest?" Rodney asked, clearly confused.
Ella skipped towards Sugar's castle, with beaming smile. "Oh, it looks wonderful!" she complimented. "I would definitely love to live there."
"No one asked you," Sugar growled.
"O-Kay...?" Ella blinked.
Jasmine, followed by Sky, wandered back from the water. Looking up at the sky, she said, "I think we should start heading back. It's starting to turn dark."
Beardo made a sound, that sounded like a vehicle coming to sudden stop. Everyone turned to him. "What?" Dave asked. When he continued to make various noises, Dave said, "Use words, please."
Beardo paused, before sighing. "I heard from one of the interns that Chris has a secret stash of food in a cave near here," he muttered, twiddling his thumbs.
Topher jumped up. "Really?!" He clenched a fist. "We've got to get in there. If they're feeding Chris that, then they have to be feeding me the same thing. I'm his successor!"
Sky frowned. "His successor?"
"Uh...um... I meant his biggest fan!" Topher laughed, nervously. He turned to Beardo. "So where is this cave?"
Beardo pointed to his right, where the narrow strip of beach that they were on, narrowed even further into the rocks, bounding over the corner of a small cliff, disappearing completely.
"Past there?" When Beardo nodded, Topher immediately started to make his way. "Come on! We can't let him get away with this!"
Everyone exchanged a look. "Should we?" Samey asked.
Amy rolled her eyes. "No one asked you," she said harshly, making Samey flinch.
"Maybe there'll be trolls or goblins on which I can cast my spells onto," Leonard said, cheerfully, waving his wand around. "I need the practice."
"I don't think there's any problem," Scarlett added her input, starting to follow Topher. "If we're going to spend more than a week on this island then we might actually need food. I doubt Chris intends to provide us with any."
Jasmine shrugged. "Well, she does have a good point."
Scarlett adjusted her glasses. "I always do," she stated, plainly, turning the bend and disappearing.
Everyone began to follow her, being careful not to get their shoes wet, and when they turned the corner they noticed that Beardo was right. There was a small cave that jutted into the cliffside, its interior completely dark with no sign of light.
Wordlessly they all filled in, with Scarlett and Topher leading the charge. They entered the cave and continued to walk straight forward as the entrance slowly grew smaller behind them, the light from it growing dimmer, until they are all in pitch black darkness.
As if compelled by something otherworldly (something that delighted Leonard to no end), they continued on, no one speaking a word, the only sound the occasional grunt and drip of water. Eventually, after a minute of walking, a small blue light began to appear at the end. It slowly began to grow larger as they continued forward, stumbling into a small room with various monsters shining all over the walls.
Dave went up to investigate one of them. "What is this place?" he wondered, aloud, noting that the screens were showing various areas on the island including the junk pile where they had had their recent challenge take place.
"Who cares?" Topher grumbled, scanning the room. "Let's just find the grub and get out of here."
"Excuse me... Who are you?" A sudden unknown voice spoke up. Everyone whirled around to face the entrance, to find a young woman standing there, wearing a button down t-shirt and jeans with a wool jacket in her arms. She had short-cropped blonde hair and square glasses over her eyes.
Ella quickly pried her hands away from the console and blushed. "I didn't touch anything!"
"I did," Max proudly stated. "Because it was the evil thing to do."
The woman looked over the contestants, some looking guilty others looks suspicious, with a weary smile. "Well we certainly have a colorful cast this season," she remarked, cheerfully.
"Who are you?" Scarlett asked. "What's this room for?"
The woman sat down in nearby swivel chair with a huff. "My name's Toriel,"
Leonard gasped. "That sounds like a name an elf would have."
Toriel laughed. "It certainly is."
"And this?" Sky gestured to their surroundings.
"Cameras," Toriel replied, simply. "It's used to monitor things on the island and find any more footage of you all that we can use on the show." She winced and apologized, "Sorry."
"No food?" Shawn asked.
She shook her head, looking mystified.
They all groaned.
Toriel just frowned. "In any case, since you're all here, would you care to play a game?"
"A game?" Rodney perked up. "What kind of game?"
She gestured to a small black object with a metal stem and base with what looked like a black piece of armor on the top, in the middle in the room, that none of them had noticed before she had pointed it out. "I'm using this place as inspiration," she said. "The premise is that 15 alien enemies are going to attack this planet. You control a giant mech that is used to defeat these enemies and save the world."
Seeing their confused faces, she was prompted to explain further. "Um... I've always wanted to be a video game designer." She blushed. "I'm hoping I can release this to get out of this shitty job with Chris.."
"Not exactly original, isn't it?" Dave commented.
Toriel shrugged. "Would you all like to try it out?" she asked, gesturing again to the small object in the middle of the room. "Just place your hand on that. It's kinda like a entrance for the chosen heroes." She chuckled dryly at that.
"Sure!" Without a second thought, Leonard placed his hand on the plate. A small beep was heard on a nearby monster where it displayed his name.
Both Beardo and Ella followed suit quickly, placing their hands on the small plate. Sugar did so herself, after muttering something about Ella, underneath her breath.
"Um…" Rodney scratched the back of his neck. "Are you going to be playing?" When Toriel nodded, he blushed and placed his hand onto the plate.
"Can I play as the bad guy?" Max questioned.
"I don't see why not."
Max grinned and placed his hand, signing himself into the game.
Scarlett watched looking a bit apprehensive, as both Topher and Shawn placed their hands. "How are we exactly are we going to play when we competing in challenges?" she asked.
Toriel shrugged. "It's only for now. I might be able to convince Chris. It won't hurt to have some game testers prior. Besides what else are you going to in between challenges?"
"Challenges? Maybe plan ahead for the future?" Scarlett pointed out, watching Dave and Sky join in on the fun.
Toriel smiled sincerely. "It's just a game. What's the worst that could happen?"
Scarlett sighed, placing her hand on the plate soon followed by Jasmine. "I guess you have a good point," she muttered, seeing their names flash onto the screen.
Amy and Samey were the last ones up. Amy put her hand on the plate immediately, smirking as she saw her name turn up with a small ding! Samey hesitated, her hand wavering above the plate.
"What's wrong, Samey?" Amy asked, her voice dripping with malice.
"I don't know," she said in a small voice. "I… I just have a bad feeling about this."
Amy rolled her eyes, forcing Samey's hand to touch the plate. "Don't be such a wimp," she scolded, as Samey flinched.
Toriel smiled softly, as she scrolled down the list of names. Fourteen in all. "Thank you," she whispered, looking up at the ceiling with a satisfied look.
"What?" Jasmine frowned.
"Nothing." Toriel stretched, before laying her gaze on everyone, suddenly looking more serious. "The enemies will appear one after another," she explained. "I'll defeat the first one in order to show you how the controls work. After that… It'll be your turn." She glanced at her monitor. "It's almost time for elimination ceremony."
"It is?!" Dave cried. He hadn't realized it had been that long.
"You should go," Toriel insisted. "You guys can always come back later to play, if you want."
Sky hesitated, but figured that she was right. "Come on guys," she said, taking the leadership role. "We better get out of here, before Chris penalizes us or something." Everyone on the same team as her nodded, following her out of the cave.
"What about us?" Samey asked.
Toriel frowned. "We can't play the game without the others," she explained. "You are all better off going to your shelter for tonight."
Jasmine nodded and drafted to head out of the cave with her own team following. However Scarlett stayed behind, glancing around at the small mysterious room before leaving, muttering various things underneath her breath.
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"The last marshmallow goes to…" Chris paused letting the drama slowly build up, laughing internally as Leonard and Beardo grow more and more frightened. "Leonard," he finally said, tossing the fake wizard the treat.
"Ah!" cheered Leonard, catching it in his hands. "Marvelous."
Beards made a small imitation of a certain video game character losing a life, to which Dave contentedly sighed, "Game Over," with a peaceful smile.
"This island is named Pahkitew, which is the Cree word for 'exploded,'" Chris explained, speaking more to the camera than the contestants. "So we thought it fitting that this season's mode of transportation should be something with a bang."
A crappy transition later, the contestants and Chris stood on a cliff in front of an object that was covered with a white cloth. "Without further ado, I give you," Chris announced as Chef pulled off the cloth to reveal a giant black and white cannon. "The Cannon of Shame!"
Everyone gasped dramatically, as Beardo popped out the other end. "Any last words?" Chris asked the newly eliminated. Beards just shook his head. "Well then, So long Beardo," the host cheered, pressing a red button he had in his hand.
Boom!
Beardo went flying across the ocean, his body growing smaller and smaller as he flew away. As he flew, the rest of the Maskwaks could hear him yell, "It was really nice to meet all of you!" Soon he disappeared across the horizon.
"You know what's weird?" Chris said, turning to the camera, before grinning and shrugging his shoulders. "I already don't miss him!" He snickered. "Well… that's one down and thirteen to go! Who's the next human cannonball?! There are just too many good choices! Tune in and find out yourself here on Total. Drama. PAAAHKITEW ISLAND!" After a few minutes on holding his pose, Chris paused and coughed lightly into his hand. "How was that?"
"Perfect," drawled Dave.
"No one asked you," Chris shot back, before refocusing his attention on the cameraman, as he gave the host a thumbs up. "All right!" Chris said, stretching. "Maskwaks! You're welcome to sleep anywhere on the island, since you don't really have a shelter anymore. Me? I'm going to hit the hay. G'night!" Chris walked off, his crew following close behind.
Maskwaks stood in silence for a few moments before Leonard broke it by saying in a quiet voice, "I don't really want to get shot out of a cannon."
Sky frowned. "I'm sure there's something Chris set up to catch them at the very end," she said, reasonably. "There's no way that he would injure. I'm sure he's gotten enough lawsuits."
"Welp," Shawn said, yawning. "I think I'm going to find a nice tree to sleep in for tonight." He began to turn around but stopped dead in his tracks.
Dave caught this. "What's wrong?" he asked.
Shawn was silent, before pointing up past the cannon. With a tiny voice he asked, "What's that?"
The entire team looked up to where he was pointing, their eyes widening. Materializing in front of them was a giant black robot, with its triangular-looking head have a singular point of light, on what would look like its face.
They watched on in a stunned silence, as the rest of the robot began to materialize downward. First it's bulbous chest appeared, followed by a pair of spindly arms, with them ending at a sharp tip. Soon after, the waist and legs appeared, both just as thin as the arms, with the feet akin to high heels. Now that it had fully appeared, it hung in the air for a few moments, before falling into the ocean with a splash.
Finally, it was Shawn who spoke up. "What is that?" he squeaked.
"A giant robot..." Leonard gasped in awe. "This is greatest day of my life."
"You mean... from the game?" Ella asked in a small voice.
"Duh!" Sugar grinned stupidly. "It's gotta be! It's big, black... big."
"Big, huh...?" Shawn looked it over, his eyes between it and the trees on the island. "It looks about 500 meters tall."
"How do you know?" Leonard asked, with wide eyes.
"I just do." There was a reason, but Shawn figured it would take too long to explain.
A sudden thought occurred to Dave and he began to look around wildly. "Then where's enemy?! She said that enemies would appear for us to fight!"
"Um..." Sky said in a shaky voice. "It's probably that." She pointed past the robot to point at an empty piece of sea.
Only it wasn't so empty anymore. Another giant robot, with the same color scheme as the other, stood there. This one looked nothing like another, instead looking more like a spider, with four legs splayed out, two on each side, and a small diamond-shaped head with a giant oval abdomen. The head had a small blue plate where the forehead would be and quite a few shining lights when compared to the other giant black robot. Just as Sky had pointed it out, it raised its "head" up and screeched, the noise sounding like nails being dragged across a chalkboard.
Dave took a step back, his hands shaking and his eyes wide. "Holy shi-!"
They disappeared.
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Deep within the tunnels of Pahkitew's underbelly of machinery, a lone man wearing a grey security uniform sat in front of several monitors, leaning back in a leather office chair. He yawned, as his eyes began to flutter shut, his entire body relaxing so he could have some decent sleep.
"You'd better not be sleeping on the job, Daniel." The man, who was apparently called Daniel, sat up quickly, his hands fumbling in the air.
"I'm up! I'm up! Please don't kill me!" He shouted, looking wildly around. "I'm not that tasty!"
Chef, who was standing behind him, raised an eyebrow. "Calm down," he said. "I ain't gonna hurt you." He held up a small bag. "I just came to drop off yer lunch."
"Oh." Daniel blinked and took bag. "Thanks."
"I also came by to make sure you were doing your job," Chef added, satisfied by look of worry on Daniel's face.
He hesitated. "Which was... what again?"
"Looking after the teenagers," Chef growled.
"Oh, that?" Daniel waved his hand. "They're fine!" He typed a few things into a keyboard, bringing up a feed from a camera on the screen in front of him. "See?"
Chef examined the video. "What am I supposed to be looking at?"
"The Kinosewaks…?" Daniel scanned the video with his eyes and gaped. "They were just in there a few minutes, ago! Where'd they go?"
"Well go find them!" Chef growled. "What are you waiting for?!"
"I am!" Daniel protested, flipping through the various cameras. "I can't find them! I can't even find the Maskwaks. They've all disappeared." He paused at a certain image and his mouth dropped open. "What… what the hell is this thing?!"
"What?!" Looking over the guard's shoulder, Chef found himself staring at a video feed from one of the cameras that pointed out into the ocean. It was only supposed a camera that was set up in order the crew to record wide shots of the sea in case they needed it in post-production. Unless something was right in front of it, all it would show is the never-ending expanse of the ocean.
However, now, there was something in front of it. Two somethings in fact.
Chef stared as the two giant monstrosities squared off, one looking like a spider and the other having a humanoid form. They wren't moving, instead opting to stare each down.
"I think I drank too much this morning," said Daniel in a weak tone.
"I'll call Chris," Chef said calmly, reaching for the phone in his apron pocket. "This might be just a challenge or something he's cooked up for the next challenge."
"Really?"
Chef shrugged. "Only one way to find out," he said, getting ready to make the call.
All of a sudden, one of them moved forward.
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Clank… Clank… Clank…
Literally a second ago, Dave had been standing on the island. And now he was standing inside a small room with an orange tint for its walls and a bright light shining from the ceiling, facing a random assortment of chairs that were arranged in a circle and floating in the fucking air. Inside that the circle, on the floor, was a mess of lines somewhat resembling a four-legged creature that he couldn't identify. He blinked unable to take in his setting, his eyes focusing on someone sitting in a chair, an armless pink swivel seat, right in front of him, and he recognized her immediately. "Toriel?!" he spluttered out, unable to believe his eyes.
She had changed clothes and lost the glasses. She was now wearing a skintight black bodysuit with no shoes. She also had a new scar down the side of her face.
She turned around, giving Dave a relieved smile. "You're all here?"
Dave glanced behind him, noticing that the rest of the Pahkitew Island contestants were there, wherever they were, with him. Even Beardo, who was sopping wet, was looking around transfixed by his surroundings.
"Where is here?" Jasmine asked. "One minute we were looking at the giant monster and the next we're in here!"
"You all saw the giant monster?" Toriel asked. "Well… welcome to its cockpit."
"Cockpit?" Amy repeated. "We're inside that thing?" She scoffed. "That's impossible."
"Teleportation?" murmured Scarlett. "But that's impossible…"
"See for yourself." Toriel waved her hand, and all of a sudden, the walls disappeared, revealing an helicopter view of the ocean and the island below them. With a yelp, Ella jumped back, staring as the floor disappeared to, revealing nothing but the ocean floor beneath them. A ways away was the other robot, the one shaped like a spider. It seemed to be staring at them. Waiting.
"You're kidding me," muttered Sky. "This isn't really…"
"The inside of that mech!" Leonard gaped, enthralled by the setting.
"I can't believe this…" Rodney gasped. "How…?"
"Believe it," Toriel told them. "It's all real. You'd best just accept it now." She turned her head, facing forward, looking towards the other robot with a determined look. "It's coming."
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Clank… Clank… Clank…
Chef ran outside, with one of the male interns named Billy, followed him outside with a pair of binoculars. Already at the beach due to the island's quick transportation system, Chef stared at the two robots with wide eyes. "They're real?"
"Shouldn't we tell someone?!" Billy the intern shouted at him, unable to hide the fear in his voice.
"Who else can we tell?!" Chef snapped, over the loud sound of the gears, which he assumed was coming from the robots themselves. "There's only two crew members, you interns, Daniel, Chris and me."
"Call the army!" screamed Billy.
"I would if I had their number!" Chef yelled back, angrily, before noticing something happening to the crawler robot. Grabbing the binoculars out of the intern's hands, he pointed them at the robot in question, noticing that the plate on its forehead began to glow slightly blue.
Chef did the first thing that came to his mind. He slid into the ground and covered his ears. "Get down!" he yelled at the intern. The intern immediately complied, copying Chef's actions.
A both of lightning erupted from the robot's forehead striking the humanoid one right in the chest! A large clap of thunder soon followed, nearly destroying Chef's ears. The bolt continued striking its adversary for several seconds, before dissipating entirely, leaving both unharmed.
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Clank… Clank… Clank…
For a while no one spoke up. Finally it was Beardo who asked, "Are we okay?"
"How did we survive that?!" growled Scarlett. "Wasn't that lightning?!"
Toriel nodded. "It was," she answered, not bothering to elaborate. Instead she said, "Make sure you watch how I fight while you have the chance. I'm not going to be able to show you again."
Topher and Rodney exchanged a confused look.
"Hey!" Amy snapped, tapping her foot. "I thought this was a game you made up?! What's going on here?!"
"Sorry," apologized Toriel. "I'm just another pawn like you guys." She leaned forward expectantly. "Now stay silent and watch."
Their robot leaned forward, a blue glow coming off of its chest, as if it were charging something up. Immediately, a barrage of light blue thin lasers flew at the opposing robot, striking it in the head causing it to shutter back a few steps.
"That was amazing…" Max said, gasping.
However, Toriel seemed displeased. "Not enough damage," she muttered. "So I'll just have to…" She leaned forward again and the robot began to move forward taking one slow step after another.
"We're moving…" Samey said.
"This thing moves with the power of thought," explained Toriel. "As long as you will it and it is physically possible, then it can be done."
The other robot began to move forward to meet them, its four legs crawling across the water with ease.
As the two got closer to each other, Sky said, "You're pretty used to driving this thing, aren't you?"
Toriel giggled. "Actually it's my first time."
Jasmine blinked. "It is?"
"Yep."
The two robots met in the middle. Their robot drew its arm back and flung it at the abdomen of the other striking it right in the middle. It retaliated by slamming its front legs into their's shoulder. Toriel made it move back a couple a steps in order to regain its footing and struck again, this time with a leg. It slammed into its legs, making it trip onto itself and fall down to its side.
The contestants screamed as they were flung around violently during the ensuing fight.
"Don't worry," Toriel tried to assure them, with her attention on making her robot close the gap between the two. "Impacts from the outside are dampened, so it won't be that huge of a whiplash. You're all completely see inside the cockpit." The spider-like robot tried to trust them back by using its hind legs and pushing them against itself. "And these things are strong."
Their robot raised both of its arm and slammed them down onto the hind legs, detaching them completely from the main body. "Got it," she murmured.
"So take them down!" Leonard said, with some decent gusto.
"Right." Their robot knelt down in front of the other and raised its arm up. The pointed end, suddenly transformed turning into a three-pronged claw. Using the newly formed claw, she grabbed the underbelly of the robot and began to pull. "First you have to use your strength to take away its armor. Just don't pause. They have the power to regenerate," she instructed, doing just that, revealing a mess of wires and circuitry underneath, along with a small circular white ball, that looked somewhat like a closed flower, right smack in the middle of it.
"That's the weak point," she said. "Each one has one and it all looks like that. The location may vary, though so be very careful. Most of the time, it's deep inside the body and protected by several layers of armor. Getting to it is no easy task." Using the claw, she picked up the weak point and pulled it out of the enemy bringing a small length of wiring with it. "When you find it…" She being to put pressure on the ball with her claw, as the object began to make an eerie creaking noise.
"Crush it."
The ball collapsed inward due to the pressure, electricity sparking around it and smoke rising from the holes.
Toriel glanced at her defeated opponent, watching as the lights faded from its "face."
She let go of the crushed weak point and let it fall to the sea with a splash, as the chairs that were floating above the ground began their descent. "It's over." She let out a sigh, looking over the rest of the seats. "Protecting this Earth is now in your hands."
Clank… Clank… Cla…
They all stared at her, unable to say a single word.
"I'm so-" She started to say.
Again, they disappeared.
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They were all back on the island near the Cannon of Shame, with most of them falling too the ground at the suddenness of the teleportation. Scarlett, one of the few that didn't fall, glanced around at the ocean. "Where'd they go?" she asked no one in particular.
Everyone else followed her example trying to find the two robots. However, they seemed to have vanished into thin air.
"That…" Ella faltered, "That wasn't a dream was it?"
"Um…" Rodney rubbed the back of his neck. "I don't think we could all have the same dream."
"So, it's not a game?" Sugar asked.
"At the end," Jasmine said. "she started to say something, right? Did anyone else here it?"
No one said anything.
"I think…" Jasmine swallowed. "I think she was going to say sorry."
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Welcome to my new fic. I won't lie this is an idea I've only had going in my brain for around a week, but hey! I figured that this would be a pretty fun idea to do! And it kinda was to be honest.
Reviews and constructive criticism would be GREATLY GREATLY appreciated for this. The main reason being that this is the first time I've ever actually written a fight scene like the one at the end. I'm not sure how I did so any tips/criticism is much needed because there are going to be quite a few fight scenes in this story.
