Hi guys, what's up?

I'm AZTHEBEST1 and this is the first fanfiction that i write in and also in English, cause I live in Italy now(and I was in an asian country before I was 7 years old), so don't have a fit when you saw how many grammatic and orthographic errors I made Lol.

So I've read fanfiction in for more than a year, and I've read at least 500 fanfic( I know maybe it's too much, it's just I love reading )

I love reading fanfiction about:

The vampire Diares

Harry Potter

True Blood

Ugly Betty

Merlin

Ouran host club

Vampire knight

Hana yori dango

One tree hill

The big ben theory

Buffy, the vampire slayer

Chronicles of Narnia

Gossip girl

H2O:just add water

NCIS

Supernatural

X-Men

...

So here is a little part of my Fan fiction, I hope u guys can help me with some advice, because I know I would need them :D


My name is Angeline and this is my story...

You guys now obviously are asking yourselves who the heck I am, well you see, I'm just an ordinary girl, or so I thought to be before I found out one of my family's secret,by my mother side's family.

Ops, I think that I forgot to introduce myself properly, so ok let's start again.

Hi everyone, I'm Angeline Gilbert, probably you are thinking Gilbert?! Like Elene Gilbert? yup, like Elena Gilbert. You see we are "sisters". Now you are questioning why I said "sisters",well you see, we are actually cousins, not sisters.(I think most or all of you already know who Elena's real parents and their history is so I'm gonna skip that).

I'm Grayson and Miranda daughter, and Jeremy Gilbert's twin.

So back to what I was saying before introducing myself: my mom came from the Sommers family, who have a dark secret that I found out when i was 15.

The Sommers family's secret was that they had the werewolf gens in their genealogy tree, but this gens skip generation sometime so my mother or aunt weren't affected, but I didn't have the same fortune, cause I had unintentionally triggered my curse by killing, and before you go thinking the worst of me, I didn't kill a person, no, i wouldn't do that, yeah I killed but not a human being person, no I killed an animal, more precisely my twin's cat, Randolph, with my bike, I felt really guilty, cause i knew how much that cat meant to my brother, but I felt worse when i told him that maybe Randolph ran away with some girl cat, even now that annoying cat haunts me in my sleep.

So this is a small bite of what is gonna be in this story even thought I didn't write some important thing in this 1st part, but they are gonna be in the next part that I'm hopping to put in this weekend(hopping that I don't have too much homework, oh I hate homework!)