Betrayal

Chapter 1

New Story! New monsters! But one person goes bad! You might know from the title! At the end of this chapter, all of you have to guess who is it going to be and who you want it to be! You'll never know untill the next chapter!


Cassandra and Than's master was not too happy after their very first failure. They were very afraid of what Hadrian was going to do them.

"Hadrian does not look too happy. What should we do?" Than said

"We can't confront him! He has a very short temper." Cassandra said. They looked at Hadrian once again. He had something in his hand and he was waiting for his two servants to come forward.

"He's waiting for us. We can't hide from him now." Cassandra explained

"You're right. Come on." Than said. They both walked up to than and fell on their knees and started confessing what went wrong with their plan.

"Shut up. Both of you. I have a new plan but I expect it to work this time!" Hadrian said

"Yes Master. What do you want us to do?" Cassandra asked

"The E.D, stands for the Elemental Detectives, is unbeatable when they fight as one. What happens if you take a certain part away? The one who keeps everything together?" Hadrian asked

"Then the E.D will fall apart! That's brilliant! What do you want us to do about it?"

"I want you to kidnap the one that all of the E.D will do anything to protect. Not even hurt! But do it during battle."

"Yes master." Both Cassandra and Than said as they both disappear in thin air. Hadrian knew that his plan is just going to work.


Elliot, Olivia, John, Fin, and Cragen were all in court to hear the verdict for the sexual abuse of a 5 year old girl. They worked on this case for months to catch the abuser and now they hope that he will be found guilty

"Has the jury reached the verdict?" the judge said

"We have your honor." The juror said

"On the sole count of the indictment, count one of aggravated sexual abuse in the 2nd degree, how do you find?"

"We find the defendant, guilty." The juror announced

"Ladies and gentlemen of the juror, thank you for your time. The defendant will be remanded untill sentencing. Court is ajurned." The judne said as she banged her gavel

"A guilty verdict's is worth it." Elliot said

"At least he won't abuse more girls again." Olivia mentioned

"Well detectives, we all needed a break from this case. We'll get back to work tomorrow." Cragen said

"Thanks captain." John said as all four of them left the courtroom.

Then Olivia's blue phone vibrated in her pocket. She called the guys over and showed her what was happening in the Bronx. They all quickly ran out of the courtroom to the scene.


My first chapter is completed. You might have an idea on who the kidnap victim is going to be. I know who it is but you can review and tell me who you THINK it's going to be!

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