MUAHAHA…I shall DESTROY THE MARY SUES!! Anywho, I hate Mary Sues so I decided to make a story with a Mary Sue that gets burned time and time again. Don't ask how I got the idea, I don't really know. By the way J.K. Rowling owns most of the characters except for my Mary Sue (I shall not tell you her name yet…I'm trying to make it stupid so don't bother flaming). I will also have stupid little notes in the story so don't flame about that either.
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It was the first of September and Hogwarts students were milling around Platform 9 and ¾, some looking for old friends, some just looking for an empty compartment.
One person in particular stood out in the crowd, a Beautiful young woman with Golden hair FLOWING in the wind, Shocking blue eyes, Plump lips so red she looked like she had been drinking kool-aid, she was wearing a black mini skirt, a blood red tube top, black thigh high boots, pulling off this look without looking like a slut. The reason she stood out in the crowd was she was screaming about the bug on the ground. After this tragic incident with the bug (A/N: told ya it was weird) she boarded the train and went to find an empty compartment, sadly none were left so she would have to find a half empty one.
After searching for a whole fourteen seconds she found one with only three people in it.
Opening the door of the compartment she struck a beautiful pose and said, sounding amazingly intelligent, "hi".
"Uhhh hi?" one boy said, he looked shockingly tall even though he was sitting down, he had ebony hair, and eyes greener than the grass (A/N :HAHAHA I read this somewhere).
"Do you mind if I sit with you?" the creature sent from…somewhere, asked still standing in the same position that she had opened the door with.
"I guess not" said the girl sitting in the compartment, she was ugly. But the boy she was cuddling with was cute!! He looked tall even though he was sitting down (A/N: I'm mocking other suethors here), he had Handsomly awesome red hair (A/N : not my words), and really cute freckles!
"My name is Alice Trista Marie Pearl Noella Jade Dumbledore!" the blonde girl told them saying her name beautifully.
"umm…I'm Ron" the red haired boy said "this is Hermione" he indicated the girl "and this is Harry" the black haired boy.
"wonderful!" Alice clapped her hands together excitedly "I just KNOW we'll be friends, OH MY GOSH! This is so exciting!!" she said while glaring at Hermione.
"Um I was just wondering…" Harry said slowly "what are you doing starting Hogwarts so late, your obviously not eleven"
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Yes rather stupid isn't it? she's going to start getting snubbed next chapter. I felt like being stupid so I wrote this. –smiles- you know you want to review!
