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"Where are you going?"I half-screamed at my brother as I watched him walk towards the street lights, away from the forest; our home.

"I told you, Serena." Tristen turned around, I could hear the frustration in his voice. "I'll come back, I promise."

Let me take a second to explain about myself and my family and home.

My brother was older than me-actually mostly everybody in my family was older than me. I have three sisters and one brother-including me-that equals five Yep, there are five of us. My brother was the oldest and I was the second youngest. Pretty big gap but nonetheless I was closer to him than any of my sisters. And I'm royalty. Well my whole family is actually. Maybe I should be more specific, I'm an elfin princess. WAIT! Don't leave, just keep reading, my story gets pretty cool. I'm not human even though I may look it, well mostly all the way. We lived deep in the forest, hidden. Our kingdom was made out of trees, so we blended in quite nicely. No elf has ever left the forest, except now, the most valuable elf in our kingdom; my brother.

Tristen started to walk away again, I knew that I was not going to win this fight, he was too stubborn.

"Fine, im coming with you." That did it. He stopped walking and whirled around, his blue eyes glaring at me.

"No." he commanded. The authority in his voice made me a little perturbed; I hate being told what to do. I glared right back with my violet eyes. Mine I must confess, a little bit more striking than his.

"You can't boss me around."I stated.

"Oh, can't I?"sarcasticness ringed throughout each word.

"No, you can't." I said sternly. "I'm coming." He looked like he was actually thinking about it, so I hurried and said something else. "Please," I begged. "I promise I won't be a nuisance." He laughed.

"Like that's possible."

"So, I can come?"Not that his answer mattered.

"I can't believe im saying this but, yea. But promise me you'll leave if I want you to."

"I can't make that promise till I know where we're going."He starred at me , annoyed. Than he turned around and started walking again. After a few strides, he turned only his head to the side.

"Are you coming?"he asked. I ran to catch up, as he started walking again.

"So?"

"So." His face was obviously annoyed that his younger sister was tailing along on his adventure.

"So?" I said a little more firmly. "Where are we going?"I asked for the third time.

"To La Push." by the tone in his voice, I knew that was all he was going to tell me. I started to notice it was really cold. The wind made my long-natural-curls flow everywhere.

Oh. Sorry stop again in the story. Well not really but let me tell you a description of myself, so your imagination will have something to work with: I'm short. Probably like 5'3. Sucks I know. My sisters are a little bit taller than me, but still I feel ridiculous. Tristen and I were both brunettes. Given to us by my father, he passed away a few years ago. Now it was only my mother ruling, which means my brother is soon to be King -which worried me a little. My father also had green eyes. My mother has blue eyes and cotton-white hair, which to my siblings dismay-no one got. To me, my mom was most beautiful creature in the world. Sometimes, I think she was born to be Queen. When she smiled, it would light up the whole kingdom. I haven't seen my mom smile since Dad died. She puts on a brave face, but we all know she is suffering inside. Danielle, my oldest sister, has reddish-brown hair (My family still wonders how she got that color hair) and green eyes. Emma, my other older sister, has dirty blonde hair (She was born with my mother's hair but as she got older my father's genes started to kick in. Poor her.) And green eyes. And last is my younger sister, Kay. Her hair was exactly the same as Danielle's(We still wonder.) And green eyes. My eyes are violet. My Dad use to tease my Mom and say she must have cheated on him with a red/brown haired, violet eyed woman. I am known in the kingdom as the oddball. I'm not as graceful as everybody else, I 'm quite clumsy. I'm plain-looking too, not ugly just plain. Well at least compared to my beautiful siblings. Another reason for oddity is when I was little, I never stayed home with my sisters. I always went with Tristen everywhere. I was always by his side, clinging to his arm. Even though we got strange looks at meetings and other royalty matters, my mother never complained, neither did Tristen, but my Dad had issues with the matter. He would always complain I was too young to be listening to all their conversations, but my mom told him I would grow out of it.

Of course I did, eventually.

I'am also gifted with magic, like the rest of my family, but my magic and power is greater than all of theirs put together. My brother was special at healing things mostly. Like scars, cuts, broke bones, etc.

"Serena?"Tristan's voice broke through my thoughts. I looked up at him, but he was no longer next to me. I turned around and he was standing five feet away in front of a house. I than realized we were in some sort of sub-division. "Where are you going?"he asked me, starring at me idiotically.

"Well, you could have stopped me." I pointed out to him.

"Nah, I wanted to see how far you would've gone without noticing, but you got too far." He said as I walked slowly back to him. I looked at the house we were standing in front of. It was big, blue house, with one big window covering the whole left side of the house. Even though I asked like a million times already, I had to ask again.

"What are we doing?"I had no hope of him giving me a straight answer, but than he didn't answer at all. I looked up at him again, his face was full of confusion. "Tristen?" He looked down at me.

"Okay. I'll tell you something that. . . . .well I've been. . . okay first you promise not to tell anybody. Not even mom, especially not mom. Okay?"

"Sure."

"Promise me." Again, it was a command.

"Fine, I promise." He grabbed me by the elbow and pulled me to the house right next door. We crouched down behind a bush, whcih I did not understand why this was necessary. "Tristen, what the-"

"Shh."He paused for a few seconds than started talking. "Do you know where I've been going these last few weeks?" I shook my head, a little hurt that he'd been keeping secrets from me. "Well, I've been coming here."

"You've been ditching me to hang out behind a bush!?!?"

"No, Serena. I mean to La Push."

"But why-" He put his hand out to stop me. I stared at him.

"Let me finish, than you can bombard me with questions. Okay? Now I've been coming to see someone. I don't know why, I kind of can't stay away from her." Tristen looked embarrassed at this, but I was too shocked at the key word 'her' to notice or care. "And I guess tonight, you are going to meet her." He stated while rolling his eyes. I was still unable to speak, the only words in my mind were not that nice, but it didn't matter when I opened my mouth.

"Are you insane! Tristen!" he didn't look shocked at my response. "She's human!"

"Actually, I never said she was human." I stared at him blankly.

What is he playing at? Not human.

"What is she, Tristen? A werewolf? I hissed, sarcastically. Tristen did not answer, he just smiled a guilty smile. "Tristen!" I shrieked. "I was joking!"

"You're a good joker." I glared at him. "Okay. She kind of knows everything about us too." he mumbled, guilty again. I sighed in frustration.

"Wait, till I tell-"

"You promised."He said firmly, seriousness etched perfectly on his face. Crap! I did promise. I was going to complain some more, but than I saw the seriousness and went in a different direction.

"What's her name?" I asked, a little shocked at my calm voice. Tristen was shocked too, but still had a mask-like face on.

"Leah." He said through clenched teeth.

"Okay." I said as I hopped up. "Let's go see her." I climbed out of the bush and walked slowly away. I was, again, surprised at myself for how calm I was being. Well, it's not like this was love or anything, just a crush. He would get over it pretty soon. I told myself. It did not take Tristen long before he was in front of me , leading the way back to the blue house. We walked all the way to the door this time. Tristen looked at me with his eyebrows raised, than rang the doorbell. The door opened instantly, a tall-no!-huge boy with sandy blonde hair, stood before me. Tristen nudged me, I realized I was starring at the sandy-haired boy with my mouth hanging open. I hurried-up and closed my mouth.

"Yes?" the boy asked, looking slightly annoyed at our presence. His annoyance made me more annoyed about this whole situation. I looked up at my brother, who was smiling.

"I came to see Leah." He said.

"May I tell her who is here?"the boy asked, again sounding annoyed. I was about to say something, but-

"Tristen and his sister, Serena." My brother replied curtly.

"Fine." He walked away from the door and yelled up the stairs as me and my brother walked into the house. "LEAH! Someone is here for you!" The boy glanced at Tristen one more time than walked into another room. I heard footsteps coming from the stairs, a girl, beautiful girl, ran down the stairs. Her eyes were hazel, her hair long and blonde. She skipped up to Tristen, stood on her tiptoes, and pecked him on the cheek. I turned to see my brother's expression. His eyes were locked on her only, he did not seem to notice I was there, neither did Leah. I was starting to rethink this whole crush thing. While they continued to stare at each other, I cleared my throat. Leah snapped out of it, her eyes flew to mine. Her face went from confusion to embarrassment. She blushed. I stepped up to her and smiled.

"Hello, I'm Serena. Tristen's sister." She smiled back.

"Hi, I'm Leah."

"I know." I pointed out. My brother was still looking at her, his eyes swimming with adoration. Maybe it was time for me to leave. "Well, I guess I'm going to go, I met you." I said nodding to Leah with a smile. " I'm sure I'll probably see you again. And maybe I'll come back alone."I continued nodding my head up at my brother. Leah followed my gaze and laughed. Tristen turned to me while I was stepping towards the street.

"You could stay for a while."

"Yea." Leah chimed in, looking truly genuine.

"Nah, I'm going hiking with Emma anyway. Nice to meet you, Leah."

"Yea, me too." Leah said, still embarrassed. I smiled than waved. I turned back around and started walking home. My mind was filled with one fact: My brother had fallen in love with a human.


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