a piece about what's going through luffy's mind when zoro disappears in the fight with kuma. its from luffy's POV as the thought enter his mind,

edited version! (sorry for any mistakes, i suck at grammar :()

Too weak to protect anyone.

Man that fat guy is strong. His punches hurt. Like gramps. I'm hardly keeping myself up. I'm looking down, my hands on the ground coz I'm finding it hard to stay up right, to stay awake.

...What's this horrible feeling? I REALLY don't like it.

...Hm?

Why has everything gone still, the air, it's heavy.

I look up.

Why's Usopp yelling like that?

To the war lord too, but isn't he supposed to be a coward?

But he's screaming his heart out!

...Wait something wrong, really, REALLY wrong.

Where's Zoro?

Why's there a cloud of dust in his place? Zoro. He isn't there any more.

Where is he? Why is Usopp yelling so much? Why is everything so still, so heavy?

He was right there, right? Why is he not anymore?

Usopp's screaming SO much, and the war lord, he's...

It's starting to dawn on me

That bear guy did something.

He made Zoro go far, far away.

I've lost a nakama.

...My first friend. I-it can't be true (...but...it is isn't it?)

My worst nightmare... just became reality.

My heart has never been ripped from my chest, but I'm certain this is how it feels like. Coz I can't breathe, I can't think it's too much, just too much... pain.

THIS CAN NOT BE HAPPENING!(.. but it is...)

"Zoro?" I ask

"...Zoro?

...ZORO?

...ZORO?"

Zoro... disappeared...he...just like that... he's gone.

...I was...too weak...to protect him.


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