16/7/14 Update: Complete re-write of original chapters still the same ideas but re-written because well I didn't like the way it was written, I don't know but here.

Also 'Black Rose thinking', "Bloody Ruby thinking" and also for this story Ruby is 16 like the rest of the students her year but Yang and Blake are 17 for reasons I will explain in the story later.

Last add-on look at the link in my profile for Ruby's look in this story. (It's the CLICK ME!)


It was a dark and dull night, clear skies, broken moon visible and the howls of the beowolves on the night winds and the smell of dust in the air.

Over all it was a boring night if anyone asked Ruby which no one would because most who ever talked to her ended up missing and not found, which was her plan here kill the clerk take all the dust she and take the body somewhere to dispose of it. Simple, right?

Well clearly not considering while she was casing out the place and attempting to the another exit someone else had the idea of robbing the place.

"Do you know how hard it is to find a dust shop open at this hour on such short notice?" One of the people who were interfering on her attempted robbery getting one of his goons to point a modified dust pistol which made the poor clerk piss himself very violently that even if Ruby didn't have her enhanced senses could smell it from the back of the shop and him start to plead for his life and the other thief start to take his dust.

'Damn, he's taking my dust.' The more humane part of her mind started while the darker, less humane more animalistic part of her mind said "let's kill them and take them and enjoy our selves with them."

So listening to the more enjoyable part of her mind she started up the isles taking out her back up knife and killing one of the goons that was filling up a vial of thunder dust by cutting his throat and then literally ripping out his heart through his back with his claw then letting him fall where she killed him with a thud and licked her claw clean, moving on.

"What was that?" The thief asked looking for the source of the thud.

"I don't know." A different goon stated still pointing his gun at the clerk.

"Then go find out." A sigh, "it's so hard to find good help these days." The thief then said to the clerk as if he wasn't robbing the man.

"Who are yo-" one of the goons started but quickly stopped and stumbled back when he saw a short girl with blood stains down her front and up her left arm over a metal claw and even on her face though it was blood-red already it was clear there was fresh blood on it. It also didn't help there was a dead body of one of his fellow gang members on the ground with a cut throat and a hole in his chest where his heart was.

"What are you..." He tried before he found a scythe embedded in his chest with the same girl flinging him out of the window, the last thing he saw before his heart was ripped out of his chest was insane yellow eyes peeking out from under the blood-red hood.

"Well that was interesting. Get her." The thief said gesturing to the girl who now stood in a growing pool of blood that was one of his goons.

The goons started to surround the girl in red and aimed their modified pistols and their swords, what they saw made some of them fall back in disgust of what they saw.

The girl in red was straddling the corpse of the dead goon and was making in internal organs into external ones and taking bites of his insides, but the worst part for some of them was not that she was eating the organs but the fact she was licking up the blood as if it was water.

"HEY YOU!" One of the goons yelled and was met by an insane yellow and before any of them could even plan to attack the girl she was gone in a flurry of rose petals.

What some of them felt was a breeze before some of them fell over now missing their head or with a large hole in their chest and one of them gone in another flurry of rose petals only to re-appear half in a wall.

"Wha... WHAT IS SHE!?" One of the remaining goons screamed out holding out his blade like it would be able to stop whatever this monster was. "Quickly guys get back to back and see if we can take it out!" Another shouted trying to come up with a plan and getting the remaining three goons together to attempt to survive the massacre.

While all this was happening the thief was busy looting the shop trying to get all the dust he could carry while his men provided a distraction because after watching the first few of his men get utterly destroyed he decided it would be best to make a quick and hasty escape before what ever that monster was decided to get him.

"Thanks for the dust friend, but I'll be heading off now." The thief said to the clerk who was cowering behind the counter trying to call the police or the hunter and huntress.

When he was finally able to get through to the Hunters Corps he was never able to put in a request for aid as the girl in red had finished having fun with the goons and was now getting rid of loose ends like the clerk and the camera footage.

"Shhhh, don't worry it will all be over soon little one." The girl in red said in a soft but slightly crazed voice, "don't worry you'll find peace." The voice said before he felt his chest become numb and the alien feel of a hand in his chest and then nothing but darkness.


Ozpin watched the live feed from the camera with extreme interest, when he got the silent alarm from his friend at the dust shop he assumed it was nothing of note.

Till he saw the live feed of a red blur destroy a group of over ten armed goons without breaking at sweat or even stopping.

It was a beautiful sight.

Not the carnage of watching fellow humans being dismembered live in front of him or that the blur which in some moments he could make out to be a girl eating parts of the killed goons or drinking up their blood all that was disturbing.

No, he found her raw talent and potential and general strength to be beautiful.

"Gylnda go to down town Vale and intercept this person," Ozpin said pulling up a blurry image of the girl in red. "Bring her in to my personal house in the city, if you would."

After grabbing the image she left with a stiff nod.

"This will prove to be interesting if things go as planned."


The thief was running as fast as he could but it still didn't feel fast enough, he saw the way it tore through his men and even killed the clerk and stole more dust than then it seemed any one person should need alone.

After running for nearly ten minutes he arrived at the spot where his men would be waiting for him in one of his carriers.

"I'm here get your ass here ASAP there's something coming aft-" but was cut off by a shocking in his left leg which caused him to fall to the ground paralysed from the round, not the pain but from the actual round.

"Electric rounds, they paralyse the target for a short amount of time with a major surge of electricity that attack the nerves but not the actual target." A voice said but the thief couldn't see.

It was that monster.

"Don't worry it will be over soon." The voice said in a sweet manner that made his skin crawl and suddenly there was a swift kick to his abdomen and he rag dolled over the roof his body slightly more awake now but still unable to fully move. He could see a figure walking towards him then straddle him but he still couldn't see a face.

"What's your name?" The figure he could clearly see was a female now.

A grunt.

"I said What. Is. Your. Name?" The girl said and with each word poked one of her claws into his stomach region till she had five claws in his stomach region in what could be described as a grabbing motion.

"ARGH, ROMAN TORCHWICK! IT'S ROMAN TORCHWICK!" He yelled in pain as he started very quickly regaining use of his body.

"Well Roman I guess this is good-bye." The voice said in a child like tone that made Roman try to look under the hood and see just how old this person was.

That was until she was violently thrown off him by a powerful fire dust spell and Roman felt himself being pulled up by a couple of his goons and dragged into the carrier he didn't even hear arrive while bleeding very badly from his stomach region and leg.

"HOW DARE YOU HE WAS MY KILL!" The girl exclaimed pulling out a very large scythe and folding it up into a rifle and letting out a barrage of high calibre fire dust rounds that started denting the ship and one even hitting one of his goons completely destroying his upper half and shooting blood and internal parts all over Romans face.

"God." He whispered, "what is that monster? Cinder kill that thing!" Roman yelled through the pain.

Cinder replied only with a grin and began firing of fire dust rounds at the girl.

Who was completely unfazed by any of the attacks hitting her even the ones that hit her and burned her on any part of her body, this made Cinder start to worry when the carrier started to strain from all the damage it had taken so she made a choice and put as much into an attack as she could and unleashed a massive column of fire where the girl was standing.

Only for to be knocked back by a different person who appeared up the side of the building at the right time to push the girl back and out of the column of fire saving her in Cinders mind.

In this time Roman had managed to half drag himself with the help of a random goon and get to the cockpit and fly them away from that monster.

Back at the roof top the girl and Gylnda were cleaning off the regular dust from the damage done to the roof.

"Let me guess your a huntress?" The girl asked her voice trying to stay 'sane'.

"Yep, and your in trouble little lady." Gylnda said trying to pull off the hood of the girls head.

"NO DON'T TOUCH MY HOOD!" The girl exclaimed pulling out her scythe and falling into combat stance ready to attack if she tried to touch her hood again.

"Ok, ok I won't touch your hood by my boss wants to meet you. Now." Gylnda said in a voice that left no room for interpretation.

"And if I don't want to?" The girl asked her voice starting to get dangerous.

"Then I get the authorities in the area and have you arrested then do it the hard way." Gylnda replied calmly.

"Fine, but any funny shit and you die. Got it bitch?" The girl said putting away her weapon which made Gylnda let out a breath she hadn't realised she was holding.

"Ok." Gylnda replied simply.


When Ozpin watched the girl in red walking into his private house followed by Gylnda he let a grin spread on his face due to the fact she had actually managed to get the girl to come and not kill Gylnda.

'Ozpin were coming into the dining hall and are awaiting you, should I get the servants to get her something to eat?' Gylnda asked through the com-system.

"No, let me come down and ask her." Ozpin said as he started downloading all the information he had collected on the girl in red to his tablet and made his way down stairs.

"So who is your boss then?" The girl asked after a moment and entered the dining hall.

"You will see in a moment." Gylnda said not even looking at the girl and just looking at the stairs.

"Fine but I'm gonna go sit down." The girl said taking a seat in a comfy looking chair at a table filled with food which none of it she held any liking for.

"So girl in red we can finally meet or should I call you Bloody Rose or Black Rose or how about Ruby Rose, that's your name right?" A commanding voice said which belonged to a tall man wearing a green pinstripe suit with white hair a cane and black tinted glasses.

"How do you know that name?!" The girl in red aka Ruby asked fury in her voice.

"Dig deep enough and look through the data and you can find anything Miss Rose." Ozpin said taking a seat on the other side of the table where Ruby was sitting with Gylnda sitting next to him.

"Do you want anything to eat Miss Rose or are you full from your feast earlier?" Ozpin asked taking a sip from his mug labelled 'Beacon Academy'.

"Yes I'm still hungry got any raw Grimm flesh in this place?" Ruby asked with a feral grin visible under her hood.

"Yes I do, I had some brought in just for you I believe you prefer the raw King Taijitu flesh judging by what records say?" Ozpin asked looking at the tablet as if reading more about her as he went along.

"Yes, how did you know?" She asked mouth watering at the idea of King Taijitu flesh.

"Have Miss Roses meal brought in please!" Ozpin called out and immediately two serving girls came out with a plate of King Taijitu flesh and a cup filled with a red liquid, "sadly I couldn't get any blood for you Miss Rose so I hope you find a cup of red wine to be ok?" Ozpin asked curious as to what her response would be.

"Yes red wine would be fine." Ruby said after swallowing a mouthful of King Taijitu flesh taking a large gulp of the wine finishing nearly three quarters of the glass in one gulp.

"So I didn't call you here to have dinner, I called you here to offer you a simple choice. Come to my school or I give this information to the police and Hunters Corps (HC), now before you decide here are the stipulations for each choice. Come to the school and I teach you to be a Huntress I don't interfere with your hunting of people or whatever while at the school but you follow my instructions directly and I destroy this information." He said gesturing to the tablet, "because at current time neither Police or HC know your identity due to your style. Or I hand over the information, let you leave this once but everyone in Remnant knows who you are and you get no moments rest. The choice is up to you." Ozpin finished meeting her yellow eyes that were visible from under the hood.

"So my choices help you and get away scot-free for now and the near future or become Remnant wanted number 1, well I guess there's no choice there but there are some things I need before I say yes fully. One: Don't get in my way when it comes to hunting Grimm or people. Two: I wear this not any uniform. This, and no one touches the hood. Three: Keep a supply of this delicious King Taijitu flesh ready and available and finally I need to keep a supply of my special rounds on hand so I'm gonna need access to a forge with a set of expert tools." Ruby finished eyes meeting Ozpins in a staring contest to see who would break first.

"Ok, your terms are met just sign this and the data is destroyed from this but a back up is stored on my personal that only I have access to, you know just in case." Ozpin said passing the tablet with a simple document on it.

"Fine." Ruby said signing the document which immediately disappeared along with everything on the tablet except for two things. "What's this?" Ruby asked pointing to the two things on the screen.

"My contact number for when I need you and you need me. The second one is a music app loaded with songs I found you to like, the tablet is yours now." Ozpin said pointing to said items on the screen.

"Ok, fine." Ruby said putting the tablet in her pocket.

"Welcome to Beacon Miss Rose." Ozpin said holding out a hand.

"Call me Ruby." Ruby said shaking the hands.


Gonna end it there they should be an update soon but who knows I say that all the time and never follow through (I know I'm terrible) but this is the updated/new version of A Bloody RWBY if you want the original just ask in the review section and I'll post the original four chapters as a completed story.

OYL Signing off.