Title: The Particulars
Disclaimer: I STILL don't own any characters or any rights or anything…at all
Note: Originally this was just one chapter. The one about Sara. The second one was added as an afterthought really because my friend told me it would balance it out. I'm not crazy about is so you can skip that one.
She's not what the typical male would describe as their perfect woman. She's not particularly curvy. Her hair is not particularly shiny or straight or curly for that matter. She has teeth that aren't particularly straight, bisected by that gap. Her eyes aren't particularly large or unique colored, just a brown color that millions of others have.
Her breasts, while not terribly small, like those anorexic looking starlets today, weren't particularly large either. Even the way she speaks isn't particularly normal. Her patterns of speech are halted and peppered with odd inflections. Her lips are not full or particularly large in any manner.
And while to any other man this may make her less appealing, it's just these things that make her all the more spectacular. It's because he takes the time to appreciate these little imperfections that he is able to notice and appreciate the particulars few else saw.
To start with the most obvious, she has particularly long legs. While that is a distinguishing feature in itself there is more to it. The fact that her legs add to her height makes another particularly nice effect. While being much taller than a woman may make most men feel strong and protective, it takes a toll. Having to bend over to kiss a woman makes surprise and impromptu kisses much harder, plus it hurts the neck…
…neck. Hers is particularly long which allows for a veritable endless set of possibilities of lip destinations. Her voice is particularly rich and when she gets emotional it gains a sexy rasp that lures him further in. Her intellect is particularly vast and matched only by her compassion and her ability to empathize with others.
But more than anything else, her smile is particularly… particular. It encompasses her whole face. A person can't not smile. The fact that it is so rare makes it all the more breathtaking. When she smiles she is open, letting the lucky recipient see her without guile. She may not be every man's perfect woman, she is his. Sara is, after all, so much more than the sum of her parts.
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That's it- there's another part that really has nothing to do with this- but I don't like it as much so you don't hafta read it hope yopu liked this though. PLEASE review!
