.hackInsane

My first fic... please no flames if you don't like, try to say it in a way that'll help me make something that will appeal to all who read. Thanks!

' is thoughts '

Slllliisssssh. Kite grinned slighty, watching the last enemy in the dugeon die.

" Alright, Moonstone, that good enough for you? "

" ....indeed. "

" Alright, I've got to go now. "

" ....farewell. "

2:35 PM, ( put in your own town name, I don't really care. )

" Yay, YAY!"

A hyper kid ran into his house, holding a box under his right arm. The box had two words and a huge sword on it. The words being " The World ".

" Yay, YAY, YAYYYYY! "

" Urusai! "

" Sorry, Onni-Chan! "

Skidding into a closet door, the kid got back up and barged into a room with a bed, table, and computer. On the table was a TV atop of the computer with many things such as game manuals littered around it. Opening the disc drive, he quickly ripped the box open, put in the disc for " The World " and grinned. " YAAY! "

" URUSAI! "

Ten Mintues later.

' Now... time to get serious.. character class? Hm... I'll try Heavy Blade... name....... hm... I know, Balmung.. damn, in use... I'll use Braxs, I guess. '

Clicking on a button labeled next, he looked at what appeared on the monitor.

' Cool, character customizer. Let's see.. mm....yeah, that looks cool... that wing looks too weird...... Perfect! '

Standing on the screen before him, a tall Heavy Blade stood. Orange hair... a red cloth scraf around his neck... green steel armor with orange cloth for arms, orange cloth pants, sandals... and, of course, a Starting Blade in his hand. Pressing enter and putting on the headset, he grinned once again.

" YAAAAYYYY, YAAAAAAYYYY, YA---- "

" URUSAI, URUSAI, URUSAI! "

" Sorry, Onni-chan! "

'Alrighty! This is gonna be fun!'

A black screen appeared with the Mac Anu symbol on it, seconds later, he was in Mac Anu.

" So this is The World... "

Countless players ran around. The town, due to the huge amount of players, was incresed vastly in size. Now, there was two of each shop and 4 Chaos gates in every town.

Wandering forward, he sighed.

" Well.... I have no idea what to do... I could go warp to a dudgeon, but that's no fun without friends... "

Wandering into a allyway, he sighed and leaned on a crate, sitting.

Anyways, that's just the first chapter I ever posted on the net.. Anyways!

I need some characters. Why? I'm very unoriginal. So, if you'd email me a character modelled after you, a tree... anything, I might input it. I'd need a Username, Characters real name, country they live in, personaitly, and how they're character's dressed. If they have some rare item that changes there design, put that in. That's all! Thanks for reading.