Ok so this isnt my first Fanfic... but I'm really new to the whole writeing thing...and i know that this story probably has alot of mistakes and grammar issues and stuff...but this was just a idea i had in study hall... so i just thought that i would get it out now.
Disclaimer: yea before i didnt know that we needed to put these on here...but i dont own Teen Titans...so yea...you get my point
ON WITH THE STORY!!!!
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I looked at the girl in the mirror, who was she? Purple long hair is diarry, eyes and cheeks red and puffy from crying. In truth, this girl looked broken, scared, frightened, beaten, and a loss for hope.
But seriously who was she? This couldnt be me, not Raven Roth. Raven Roth was intelligent, strong, and most of all independent, but then looking at the girl in the mirror, she didnt look like me at all.
"I'm a mess, a complete, and total mess. UGH!"
Picking up a toothbrush holder next to the withe sink, I held it tightly in my hands, and then threw it at the mirror. Now the mirror cracked not completely broken still showed her face. It still showed her tears running down her cheeks.
" I just want to die."
Looking up toward the ceiling, I felt as if these were the only words that I could say.
"I JUST WANT TO DIE!"
Now sobbing, I fell to the ground slowly, no not me, but her. Because I am not weak, nothing like it. Only in this world do the strong survive. I cant afford to be weak. Not now, and not ever.
The sobbing turned into what felt like choking, not being able to breathe. The feeling though horrible, felt good.
"RAVEN??" the sound of my mother could be heard from down stairs.
"YES?" was my choked out reply.
"ARE YOU OK?"
"FINE MUM,...(long pause) I'm fine."
yea i know its short ...but i thought of it in study hall so ...yea
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so tell me how i did...and whether or not you think i should continue...and like i said i just thought of this in study hall...so if you want me to continue...can you possibly give me ideas?...O and read and review...and it kinda scared me when i first read this over...cuz this im my case is kinda dark...but next chap should be happy...lol
but seriously review pwease pwease pwease...ok thank you
