Ok, this is my first Gilmore girl fic. And this will NOT be a trory,
before you even start asking. Please tell me what I can do better for the
characters personalities, what I spelled wrong, and so on and so forth.
Happy reading!
Rory glanced around the train station, searching for a familiar face throughout of those hostile stares. "Mom! I haven't seen you in so long!" She ran over to her mom, with welcoming arms.
"Hi honey! Guess what I have? The best coffee in the world, all for you!" Lorelai exclaimed, as she produced another cup, "And of course, one for your caring, sweet mother, who so thoughtfully got some for you."
Rory took a sip of her coffee and sighed. "I feel like I'm in heaven, this coffee is way too good."
"C'mon Rory! We have to get home, there's a surprise for you there!" Lorelai said, and then before she said anymore, she groaned, and quickly added, "I have to go to the bathroom. Meet you out at the car!!"
Before Rory could respond, her mom rushed over to the bathroom, covering her mouth with her hands. Rory pondered for a moment, 'I wonder what's wrong with Mom? She isn't usually sick; I hope she's ok. It's probably just a bug. oh well; better go out to the car and wait there for her.'
As Rory strode quickly to the car in the vast parking lot, someone came up and tapped hard on her shoulder. Rory turned and covered her mouth with her hand "Oh my gosh! What are you doing here?"
Who is it??? I guess you'll have to wait to find out! And what is wrong w/ Lorelai? Is she just sick. or is it something else. hmm, review and tell me what you think.
Rory glanced around the train station, searching for a familiar face throughout of those hostile stares. "Mom! I haven't seen you in so long!" She ran over to her mom, with welcoming arms.
"Hi honey! Guess what I have? The best coffee in the world, all for you!" Lorelai exclaimed, as she produced another cup, "And of course, one for your caring, sweet mother, who so thoughtfully got some for you."
Rory took a sip of her coffee and sighed. "I feel like I'm in heaven, this coffee is way too good."
"C'mon Rory! We have to get home, there's a surprise for you there!" Lorelai said, and then before she said anymore, she groaned, and quickly added, "I have to go to the bathroom. Meet you out at the car!!"
Before Rory could respond, her mom rushed over to the bathroom, covering her mouth with her hands. Rory pondered for a moment, 'I wonder what's wrong with Mom? She isn't usually sick; I hope she's ok. It's probably just a bug. oh well; better go out to the car and wait there for her.'
As Rory strode quickly to the car in the vast parking lot, someone came up and tapped hard on her shoulder. Rory turned and covered her mouth with her hand "Oh my gosh! What are you doing here?"
Who is it??? I guess you'll have to wait to find out! And what is wrong w/ Lorelai? Is she just sick. or is it something else. hmm, review and tell me what you think.
