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Chapter one-
Help
I was falling. I knew this as my hair streamed towards the sky, and I screamed. I screamed with everything I had, until I was dizzy. Then I gathered up my breath and screamed again. I landed with a painful thud and a sickening CRACK!. I screamed as loud as I could, even if it was painful. I needed some one to find me. Anyone.
Everything was going blurry and I stopped screaming. I was bleeding and broken. I was going to die. I saw white.
'Wait...white? I thought it was supposed to be black?' I thought. When I turned around, everything became more clear, with more color. I saw a teenager with white hair. "Who are you?" he asked.
Allen's pov
"Who are you?" I asked the girl. 'She doesn't seem to be threatening, and she's hurt. How could she be a threat?' I thought.
"H-help...me" the girl croaked. She was broken and bleeding, I could see bones sticking out of her legs. The girl was transparent, and looked as though she were made of mist, but colored.
"Were are you?" I asked.
The girl closed her blue eyes and then opened them, replying, "A...m-man...with l-long...red hair...a girl w-with-" she coughed and fell to her knees. Blood caked her lips and leaked out of the corners of her mouth. I was by her side at an instant and when I tried to put a cloth to her lips, it went right though. "A-a girl w-with...green hair..." she finished. "H-help...me..." and she faded away...
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