Okay, so I know this is the same title as my other one, and the same idea, but after looking back, I've decided I'm not happy with how it turned out so I'm going to go back and rewrite it. Parts you'll probably recognize, but as I get past the middle of the first chapter, it's all completely new. I'm not planning on taking down the old version only because of all the great feedback I got on it and the fact that I did put so much work into it, no matter whether or not I lik it. I hope you guys enjoy this version, and that you'll feel that it's a major upgrade from the last one. Please let me know what you think, your opinions all matter.
Disclaimer: I only nothing but the plot.
Prologue
Her eyes wide and breathing furious she sped around the corner, heart beating out of her chest. The only thought on her mind was to get as far away as she could. Her brunette hair plastered to her face, her clothes drenched and her make-up streaming down her face, the raindrops forming almost a whole new layer on her face, she fumbled with her car keys as in her hurry to open the door to her car.
Shooting a quick over her shoulder as it unlocked she threw herself into the car and jammed the keys into the ignition before gunning it, not even bothering to look at where she was headed. Her only thought was to get as far away as possible as her blue-eyes kept straying back to the rearview mirror in hopes that pouring rain would remain the only image she saw. She didn't stop until she found herself somewhere in the middle of an abandoned road.
Shaking uncontrollably she sobbed as the full reality of what she had just witnessed sunk in. Everything was as sharp and vivid in her mind as if she were still living the scene. Fumbling around her car she finally managed to find her phone and dial it through the stream of tears falling down her face.
"Hello?"
"…" She gave a loud sob before covering her mouth, shoulders visibly heaving up and down with her cries.
"Mitchie? Mitchie? Are you there?"
"I'm in trouble." She finally gasped into the phone.
"What do you mean Mitchie? What's going on!?"
"I-I-I saw a murder Jonathan." She whispered.
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