Leon here...
This is my first fanfic so...ah what the heck just give me your true honest
opinion...
Prologue
They were in the forest of soon to be Inuyasha.
"What is this all about Sutakira?"
"Hehehe..."
"What do you find so funny, my son?"
The Great Dog Youkai was staring intently at his firstborn son.
"You really wish to know why I am laughing? Fine then, I shall tell you...
You know how you intrusted Tetsussaiga to the newborn and
Tensaiga to Sesshomaru? That proves only one thing..."
He now knew what this was all about.
"Sounga...is...MINE!"
Sutakira charged his father, with his sword (Chi no Kiba), drawn and ready to kill.
InuTaicho was anticipating this and quickly countered his attacks.
"What is it you hope to achieve with power...? I cannot intrust Sounga to
one with a heart that longs for power to kill!"
"Who says that is why I need it! I feel left out...hahahaha!"
InuTaicho was looking at his son like he had finally lost it...
"I just need power!"
Sutakira started pushing him back! InuTaicho knew he had to do something fast when
he remembered a certain swordsmith's words...
Flashback
"If a time ever comes when your son, Sutakira becomes to strong to supress...given
your current injuries...you may want to use this."
Tessai pulled a small dagger out of his robe. It had Ancient Runes incarved in it.
"What is it...?"
"This here dagger is no ordinary dagger. It holds a seal that binds the soul that is
stabbed for approximately 1,000 years. It should at least bind that son of yours
until he can be stopped."
InuTaicho looked at the dagger, it had special engravings on it. They said, "Binder of
spirits".
End of flashback
"Caught in a daydream old man?! Ha! You should know better than to take
your mind off the battle, more than anyone!"
Sutakira then grazed InuTaicho's arm with the sword which opened up a wound from
the fight with Ryukotsusei.
"Nguh...!"
"Chi no Kiba likes your blood!"
InuTaicho was now angry! He kicked Sutakira into a tree and then threw the dagger.
The dagger impaled Sutakira to the tree!
"?!"
Sutakira opened his mouth but the only thing to come out was blood...
There was a moment of silence before InuTaicho turned his back to Sutakira...
He then spoke...
"Your lust for power is why I cannot give you Sounga..."
"...!"
InuTaicho had used the dagger to seal Sutakira away for 1,000 years. Sutakira's eyes were losing the light they once held...
End of Prologue
So what did ya think of chapter one, does it hold potential?
I would like your opinions...the actual chapters will be longer...It will be a lot better when Inuyasha and the gang come into it...
-Leon
