First re-written Chapter of Vocaloid's Adolescence! I won't be changing much like I said, but I'm just fixing the awful amount of mistakes.
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My name is Kagamine Rin, and I am Kagamine Len's twin sister. Identical, too. Even though we were born together, I was born 3 seconds before Len. That's what my mother says anyway. Len and I are practically glued together. We spend all our time together. We always have. Len would do anything for me, and I'd do anything for him. Right now, we're both 12. And today is our birthday!
"Happy birthday dear Rin and Len... Happy birthday to you," my parents sang together. Len and I blew out the candles together, holding hands. It was a special moment for us, our 13th birthday. "Remember to make your wish!" my father laughed. I wish Len-kun and I will be together forever, I thought. I wish Rin-chan and I will be together forever, Len thought. Len and I were special in a way... We could share thoughts, and hear what we were thinking. I glanced at Len, and smiled at him. We had wished for the same things. However, I only found this out when Len and I were both 8. It was an accident, really. I was just thinking to myself, but suddenly, I could hear Len's thoughts. How strange is that?
Anyway... After we opened presents, my parents bought out some party stuff. They were going out: They had work arrangements, but they could trust us. As soon as our friends came, they just left, without really saying anything. I don't suppose it was very fair how they just breezed out of the house like that, though. But then again, they are parents. What will you ever do..?
"Happy birthday, Rin-chan! Len-kun!" Miku exclaimed, bringing in her cards, and presents for the both of us.
"Thank you, Miku-chan!" I replied, smiling. Kaito, Neru, Teto, Haku, Luka, Miki, Gumi, Dell, Nero, Mikuo, Ted and Meiko entered.
"So, who's going to do what first?" Meiko asked.
"Len-kun... Do you want to show them our dance?" I asked, my cheeks turning pink. Len looked confused, because he didn't know why I'd went pink.
"Sure. It'll be awesome to finally show somebody," he replied. I nodded. That felt dumb. Congratulations, Rin, you're officially an idiot for turning pink, when asking your brother to dance. Len found the song music, and got prepared. Everybody else sat down, to watch us, in our Dance Studio. I felt a little nervous: Scared, infact. I might mess up infront of my friends and disappoint Len. Len's hand took mine. It felt weird, really. What was actually weird is that I'm focusing on how weird it feels... Len smiled at me, and nodded. He was leading first.
We started to dance. It was a quite complicated dance, to be honest. I looked at Len while we were dancing, and noticed something in his eyes that I hadn't noticed up until now. Was it just me? This caused me to step out of turn. Be careful, Len thought. I looked at him, with a fairly upset look on my face. What just caused me to be distracted right now? I felt Len's hand nudge against mine. I was now leading. I couldn't help but think of what had distracted me. Was it just my own stupidity, or was it that new look in my brother's eyes? Whatever it was, it didn't feel right. It felt... Odd.
After we finished our dance, our friends clapped loudly. "That was absolutely amazing!" Miku laughed.
"Yeah, how did you learn to dance that way?" Gumi asked. I glanced at Len, as I didn't exactly know the answer. I did know, but I felt embarrassed to say so.
"We've been taking dancing classes ever since we were 6," Len said.
"That's awesome! You've really stuck to it for 6 years?" Kaito asked. Len nodded, smiling.
I don't know why I was all suddenly so weirded out by what I saw in my brother. It wasn't like what I saw in his eyes was bad, but... Ever since I've been a little older, I've started to notice these things more easily. That's what's just stupid about the whole thing. Is it my body telling me something...?
Later on, it was starting to get much darker, so we all headed up into the spare bedroom of the house. In that room, there were quite a lot of spare beds, so we decided it'd be the best way, instead of fighting over a bed. It was 10:21PM. "Do you think we should go to bed yet?" Teto asked.
"Yeah, if that's ok. I'm tired!" Luka exclaimed, yawning.
"Oyasumi... Everybody..." I smiled. Neru put the lights out. I was next to Len, in our shared bed. We've always shared beds. That's another thing which sort of bugged me lately. But, oh well... We always have. And there's nothing wrong with that, is there? Nope. But there was one thing I couldn't tell anybody, but... The dark terrifies me! I'm so scared of it. I haven't even told Len, my own brother! Len put his hand on top of mine, underneath the covers, and felt it. It was cold, and I was shivering. "Rin-chan, what's wrong? Your hands are freezing, and you're shaking!" Len whispered.
I can't tell anybody... But.. I'm afraid of the dark. I haven't even told you before, I thought. I didn't want to say it out loud. I'm such a coward.
"Why haven't you told me? Rin-chan, you mustn't be so childish," Len laughed, keeping his voice low. Len hugged me, warming my body. I put my arms around him too, blushing. Why do I feel so strange? What is with me lately? I closed my eyes, and slowly fell asleep...
I was sitting on my bed. A stranger with a masked face came to me. W-Who are you? I tried to ask, but it only came out as thoughts.
A person who will be able to help you, said the masked stranger.
How can you do that...? I asked.
I will grant you access to princess clothes, and a fortune, however... Only until midnight. Then, you must kill the person who you meet, the masked stranger said.
I... I suppose I could... I mumbled. And it was arranged.
At the Ball, I was dressed with a long, pink dress, only fit for a princess, with a golden crown, and glass slippers. The spell would run out by midnight, however. Meaning I'd have to kill the person I meet... A mysterious boy, who was tall, and had golden blonde hair, stopped his talking, and his eyes fell upon me. He smiled at me. I felt myself blush. He seemed familiar, but how... I didn't know how. He came up to me, and took my hand. My dream wasn't letting me speak... As we started to dance, I recognised this pattern. Was this mine and Len's dance? His touch was so soft, and so gentle. So familiar...But how?
The clock drew closer to midnight. My glass slippers started to fade. I rushed him to the balcony. What is it, mysterious maiden? he asked.
I... Have to... I started. I looked up at him. Our eyes met, as if it just connected us; Something which could warm two lonely souls. Tears formed in my eyes. He tried to stop them from falling. I grabbed my sharp knife. I went to stab the mystery boy...
I jolted awake! "Hey Rin-chan! Are you ok?" Len yelled. I looked out the window. It was morning...?
"I-I just had a bad dream..." I stammered.
"Are you ok, though?" Len asked.
"Yeah, I should be fine..." I lied. But my feelings were anything but fine. What is with me lately? Maybe I'm just far too focused on everything...
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Ok, that's over and done with. XD Seeyou next time!
