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She slid on the only dress she owned that still fit her.
It was white.

It only reached her knees.
She had had it for over 5 years, and when you live on a ship long skirts get in your way.

The sleeves where hacked off except for two inch straps that held the dress up.
She tied the laces in the back together and smoothed it out the best she could.

It was the eve of her sixteenth birthday.

She plopped her feet into her knee high brown leather boots and combed through the knots in her messy auburn hair.

Destiny Sparrow was about to escape.

Escape from what you might ask?

Evil pirates after a hidden map only she possesed?
No.

Tradesmen ready to sell her as a slave?
No.

Destiny was escaping from The Black Pearl.

The ship she had grown up on.
The only place she had ever called home.
And her prison.

If you haven't guessed by now.
Destiny Sparrow was the daughter of Captain Jack Sparrow.

Also the first in a line of four other children.

There was Ruby, Jack jr, Emerald(emma), and Benjamin.

Destiny loved her family dearly.
She loved her mother and her father more than anything.

The only thing standing between them was the one thing she had in common with her father.

She needed freedom.
Her own freedom.

Mum and Daddy,
I love you both so much.
I'm not doing this out of spite, or anger.
Daddy, I'm too much like you.
I need to find my own way.
Mum, you taught me how to stand up for myself.
I want to use what I've learned.
Tell the children I send Love and Kisses.
With all my Love and Devotion,

Destiny

She folded the note in half and kissed it ,then weighted it down outside her parents door with a rock.

Destiny crept to the lifeboat and jumped in as quietly as possible.
She took her backpack off and started lowering herself into the water.

When she felt the boat start to sway she cut the ropes off and started rowing.
"Bye daddy." She whispered sadly.


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