A/N: Hi! this is my first fanfic. so, don't be to harsh. reviews are welcome, just no flamers please! i will update when i can!

Disclaimer: i don't own, unfortunately.

Anne: of course u don't! if u did, i would really exist!

Me: WHAT THE MERLIN! WHERE THE HECK DID U COME FROM! U R NOT REAL!

Anne: well, duh! ur have lost it my dear creator.

Me: just get back in the story...

Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone: Rewrite

By

PheonixRose92

Chapter 1: Halloween Nightmare

All along the quiet street, Halloween was in full swing. The yards had plastic skeletons, carved pumpkins, fake ghosts. In the morning light, a man with shoulder long jet-black hair, grey eyes, dressed in worn, faded AC/DC t-shirt, black leather jacket, and dark blue jeans was walking down the street. In his arms was a toddler with short curly flame-like red hair and sapphire eyes. She was wearing blue jacket and jeans. He kept walking until he seemed to disappear. What most didn't see was enter a home under the Fidelius Charm. The cottage was small, but perfect. The yard had many different flowers. The man walked up the short walk and knocked on the door.

A beautiful woman with long dark red hair and emerald green eyes wearing jeans and a plum sweater opened the door. "Hey, Sirius, come on in. Where's Hermione?" The man called Sirius stepped in the house.

"Hermione's sick. We left her with Kathy." Sirius said walking over the couch and sitting down.

"Oh. Is Anna sick? I don't want Harry getting sick." The redhead said.

"No, thank Merlin. So, where is that little Marauder?"

"James is feeding him." She laughed.

A man with jet-black messy hair and hazel eyes wearing a red t-shirt and gray sweatpants came in. In his arms was a toddler that looked exactly like him but with emerald eyes. The boy was wearing a light blue one-piece. "Hey, Padfoot! How are you guys doing?"

"Well, 'Mione's sick. Remus dropped her off at his Mum's. Anna hasn't been sleeping well lately. Me and Remus are thinking of going into hiding."

"Anne-na-beth!" The little boy exclaimed, with his arms extended towards the little girl, making grabbing movements.

"Hawwy!" The little girl exclaimed, copy Harry.

James and Sirius chuckled. "We should put them in the playpen for awhile."

"Yeah, Lily." James and Sirius put Harry and Anne into the playpen. James sighed. "I wish me and Tiger could join you and Moony tonight."

"Prongs, I know, but we just want to keep you alive. Has Dumbledore given back your cloak yet?"

"Nope. Personally I don't know why he wanted to see it in the first place."

"Yeah, it is weird. Tomorrow, I'm going to check on Petey." Sirius said.

"How's Snivelleus (sp?) doing?" James asked.

"Severus has "turned" to the Light side."

"So, Sev convinced Dumbles that he was on Moldy's side and switched?" Lily said.

"Yup. Told Dumbles that he overheard the Prophecy and told Old Moldy. He said that when he found out Moldy was coming after you and co. he went to Dumbles and begged for forgiveness. Listen, I have to go. I'll pick up Anna Monday."

"Okay Padfoot. Be careful." Lily said and rose to hug him good-bye. James patted Sirius on the back. Sirius went over and ruffled Harry's hair. He picked up Anne gave her a hug and told her he loved her. Sirius walked out of the comfort of the wards and Apparated.

As the day continued, nothing much happened. James and Lily played with Anne and Harry; talked about the people they lost; shared ideas on where Lily's twin sister, Rose, was. It was now after dinner.


"Come on, Lils, if I put some glamour charms on me and the kids, no one will recognize us!" James begged.

"No, James! It's too dangerous!"

James sighed in defeat. "Fine, Lily, but I'm still dressing them up."

"Ok, love. Good luck with that."

Three Hours Later

"Good Lord, James, did you really have to make Harry a pumpkin? I don't think he liked that very much."

"I don't think that was good idea to dress Anne as a fairy princess either."

"Yeah, especially since she set it on fire. But did she have to set Harry's on fire too?"

"Well, she is a pyrokenetic (sp?), she probably didn't mean to."

"Bull, Prongs, you didn't see that smile. She meant to do that." They looked at the two giggling toddlers playing with a pile of blocks on the floor. "I'm going to talk to Reg on the mirrors. Make sure he's doing ok." She kissed James' forehead and headed upstairs.

"Tell him I said hi!" James shouted. James picked up Harry and Anne put them on the couch. He made puffs of colored smoke come out of his wand. Harry kept trying to grab the smoke. Anne just giggled and clapped her hands. Lily walked down the stairs and watched the scene for a few minutes.

"Regulus said hi. He's doing ok. Had a little accident. Not feeling well, but says a few more days of bed rest and he'll be fine and dandy again."

"At least he'll be ok. I wonder what happened. He was fine yesterday when I talked to him. Did he say what happened?"

"No, unfortunately. It's time for the kids to go to bed." Lily picked the toddlers up and headed upstairs. James stood up and stretched. The door banged open and a person who look related to serpent entered the cottage.

"LILY! TAKE THE KIDS AND RUN! I'LL HOLD HIM OFF!" James hollered up the stairs.

"Silly Gryffindor, how are you going to hold me off without a wand? AVADA KEDARVA!" The snake man hissed. James fell to the ground, his eyes open and lifeless. Scrapping of furniture could be heard upstairs. The snake man evilly smirked and headed upstairs. He blasted the door open and saw Lily place herself in front the crib.

"Please have mercy! Not them! Please not them!" Lily cried.

"Stand aside, girl, you need not to die."

"No! Take me instead! Please don't kill them! Take me! Leave them alone!"

"Stand aside, you silly girl!"

"No! Not them! Take me!"

"Your choice. AVADA KEDARVA!" The toddlers started crying as Lily fell to ground lifeless. "AVADA KEDARVA! AVADA KEDARVA!" Two jets of green light flew out of the wand, each one hitting one of the toddlers. But as soon as it hit them, a white light filled the whole room and the snake man screamed in pain and dropped to the floor. Harry and Anna passed out.