This is my first story so please feel free to give me reviews on what I need to change and improve, even suggestions for future chapters are welcoming. I take no offence in getting criticized for work because I know I'm not even good and I would love know people's opinions of my story. I welcome your opinions whole heatedly.
I do hope you all at least enjoy reading it for the fun of it.
I own nothing of this story. The characters, place, everything goes to Higuchi Tachibana, the original creator.
I'm shy, especially around people I don't know, so that basically everyone except my parents, best friend, and grandpa. I'm not a very people's person as you might be able to tell just from that statement. People don't really like me and call me a loner. I don't mind though, I like being alone anyway.
I like drawing a lot so I usually carry a drawing book with me where I go. I like drawing a lot of things, I can draw anything. You name it, I got it. A lot of regular people around often ask me to draw them things. Scenery, family, and for the hell of it even fruit. Although my favorite things to draw are things I like, I don't have any pictures of people in their besides who I mentioned earlier.
One of my favorite free time activities to do also is typing. I just love writing stories and I often write articles for the year book. I'm even working on a book now, although I'm too shy to show it to people. Not even Hotaru knows about it, which surprises me because she's a genius.
Hotaru is my best friend. Although she's stoic and seems heartless she shows her love in complicated ways. She's been there for me since we were about six. She moved around a lot until her family decided to stay here for a while. She never told me why she moved though, but I decided not to push it since she doesn't like it.
I live in a house with my mom, dad, and grandpa. My mom has brown hair brown eyes while my dad has light blonde hair with blue eyes. My hair is down to my waist. I have bangs that reach right above my eyes though. I got my light brunette hair though they have slivers of blonde in them as it reaches to my waist. My eyes are from my mom though my eyes are tinted with blue from my dad. I'm also very short. The average height of a ten-year old is about four feet or fifty-one inches exactly… Well I'm just a couple of inches shorter than that. I guess you could say about 3'6" or 3'7"… Yeah I'm really short.
I typically wear dark or sporty clothes. Basketball shorts or baggy jeans with t-shirts and just some regular sneakers. I hate those tight-fitting clothes with make-up and useless stuff. I just like being myself. Natural is the best is what I always say.
This is just the first chapter which introduces the Mikan in my story. I did change her looks and personality a little... Well a lot, but please review still.
I will update another chapter or two but if it doesn't get enough fans then... I'll just see what happens.
Thank you to those who read and even review. Please give me your opinion on this story.
