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I write in script form it's just what I do. If you don't like it I can try to do it a different way but I don't know how it's going to work out. This is my very first story so please only give constructive criticism. The brackets are actions.
Puck: And done [with one last brush stroke he stepped back to admire his work] what do you think?
Rachel: [kisses him] It looks great. We make a great team
Puck: I told you this color would be great for the nursery
Rachel:[smiles] If memory serves correctly you wanted that atrocious green color that looked like vomit. I chose the yellow; I told you it'd be perfect.
Puck: Yeah well I agreed with you so [shrugs his shoulders and wraps his arms around her baby bump] only five months left.
Rachel: [squeals] I know I'm so excited!
Puck: [Laughs at her excitement] me too baby, me too.
R: We need to agree on names.
P: I think Daniel would be cute for a boy.
R: I like that. How about Sofia for a girl?
P: I love it [kisses her] see no big deal there.
R: [smiles] so what would you like for dinner?
P: Hmmm we should order pizza
R: okay. Do you want the usual?
P: yes. [The doorbell rings] I'll get that you go order dinner. [They go their separate ways and he opens the door] Can I help you?
Woman: I'm Belinda James with social services, are you by any chance Noah Puckerman?
P: I am. How can I help you?
Belinda: Mr. Puckerman are you aware that you have a son?
P: [Stunned silence] I'm sorry what?
Belinda: Do you know a woman named Laura Sanders?
P: I-I-I yes?
Belinda: Ms. Sanders passed away a few weeks ago and since you're her sons biological father he is now under your care.
R: [comes up behind him] oh Noah what did you do/
B: I'm sorry who are you?
R: I'm Rachel, Noah's wife. Would you like to come in?
