This I my very first story I have ever written that's hasn't been forced through my brain as homework. So please review. If you must flame tell me what you hate about this story so I may improve (constructive criticism)

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, Stargate or any other television shows :'( there said it and now its outa the way. Suck on that lawyers.


Many years ago -possibly in the millions- a faction of ascended beings called the Ori started to seed life into a new galaxy, a new place to control and gain power from. Another faction of ascended beings -called the ancients by many- found out of this planet and the plans to expand in this galaxy. The Ori were stopped, but not before a battle between these two factions was waged. The plan was stopped and not another planet was seeded in the galaxy, just the one lonely planet in the big, big galaxy. The planet was left to be, as it and the creatures on it had caused no harm to the ancients.

Eventually this single battle between 2 factions of ascended beings was forgotten and cast aside never to be thought of again, but in this place that the Ori started to seed, humans survived along with the many other plants and animals there. But they changed, for a great war had taken place there, just in a higher plain of existence.

So much power was used here during the clash of the ascended beings that a minute amount leaked into the lower plains of existence, into the world the battle had been waged over. The creatures here changed. They gained a minute link to this power the universe had to give. But they couldn't contain the power by it self. No, rather their bodies changed it, diluted it to become what would later be known as chakra by the human populace. This energy was used to fuel their bodies, used as a life source.

The many animals also got this power, some gained intelligence, gained wisdom how ever slight it may have been back then. They developed and grew. But the humans had not been lax in these years, they had found a way to use this energy, to twist it and change it by force of will and seals of hand and paint. The origins of ninja were born

The few animals that managed to evolve and grow ended up spreading and increasing in population. They fought each other and the humans. Great battles were waged, great enemies and allies were forged and many lives were lost. Great warriors and techniques of legend were made in these wars, many of which died with history. Only few myths and techniques survived through the ages from the times of great battle

The wars were finally stopped when the humans sealed away the evolved animals away from sight, away from mind. The only times they came back was when they were summoned by humans for help in wars between themselves.

Eventually the land was as it was, divided into nations. Many of these nations had villages of ninja, a resource and a vocal point of the wars that still waged between the villages. This is the world which out story begins.


It was before the dawn of the day. The sun wasn't quite up, leaving the village in the pre-dawn shadows of Hokage Mountain. The clouds were still sleeping beyond sight and dew was settling on the grass. The city was still sleeping except for the animal masked shadows gliding from place to place.

A light was on in only one building symbolizing the only resident awake at the early hour. The light came from a red and white building with a sign with the kanji for fire printed upon its surface. Sighs would occasionally escape the building to be heard by the shadows, along with the sound of papers being rustled and written on. This building was the hokage tower. The only person awake in the village was the hokage himself, looking over the mountains of paper placed on his desk and writing his signature over and over upon those papers.

Within this desk is where our story starts. The story starts with a simple picture, a picture of a single boy with yellow hair, blue eyes, whisker marks and an ugly orange jumpsuit. You could see the significance of this simple picture by the way it seemed so worn down, the corners seemed to have been creased and folded. What could be so significant about this picture though? Well it was the picture of the vessel of the demon Kyuubi no Kitsune, the bane of konoha. This was the boy that the leader of the village looked after since his birth, a boy, who just learned the truth of his life. One who also just recently learned one of the greatest secrets of the village as a consequence.

This boy was currently in the bed of a one person flat, uncomfortably sleeping with the thoughts of the demon going through his subconscious, and memories of being shunned, memories of tears, loneliness and abuse. All the while a fox stirred in its sleep.

When the blond-haired Naruto finally awoke he could hear snores- Great, loud snores- almost as if coming from a giant. The type of snores the shake the ground and make water ripple from the enormous sound produced.

Within his first groggy thought, the loud snores registered something in his brain. "Stu…id…al…rmmm." his first words of the day echoed slightly through the fairly dark rocky cavern he lay in. The sound of the giant could be heard, rolling over to its other side.

As he said this his hand shot upwards and curled into a fist. His fist dropped half a meter away from him making a sharp crack as it hit the hard, rocky ground. There was silence for a second. "Stup…id…clo…rrr…k." his jumbled thoughts managed to force through his mouth, the pain in his hand apparently un-noticed.

His body stirred for a second before he decided to sit up. "No bed," was what his sleep muddled brain managed to come up with. The thought was forgotten nearly as soon as it was thought of. "Hard floor." was also thrown away just as easily.

The young whisker marked boy stood up with his crusty eyes still clamped shut with sleep. A large yawn managed to escape his mouth. His feet took him two steps forward through the rocky cavern before he stopped and thought "Hmm. Cold floor." He continued on, it wasn't that un-usual.

A dark, rocky cavern wall loomed ahead of him as he walked closer and closer towards it. His feet seemed to stop just as he was about to walk into the wall. It seemed he was debating over something in his head, as he just stood there. Almost as if wondering if he should walk into the wall or not. If you were to look into his head, you would see that he was wondering what to eat, last nights Raman or glass of milk and some toast. He ended up deciding on both.

Suddenly he turned to his right and walked onward his mind still not registering the non-familiar place. His hand reached out to open a nonexistent door in front of him. Reaching no resistance his hand went back down to his side as he stumbled on. His mind was still slowly waking up as he reached where the fridge usually was.

In front of him were large metal bars as thick as his fist. Big looming bars the size-and strength- which could keep the giant behind them captive. His fingers brushed by it when he reached for his imaginary fridge. His hand froze "fridge is gone," he thought. His eyes opened -fighting off the crustiness they contained- to slowly see this disastrous scene.

A black wall with grayish blue stripes filled the scene in front of him. "Did I get new wall paper?" he stupidly asked himself looking at the bars in front of him. His hand went out and touched the 'wallpaper' only for it to touch a cold metal bar. His hand stayed there for a few moments.

A loud snore suddenly erupted, shaking the bar slightly in front of him. One thought briefly went through his head as he heard it "stupid alarm clo…" The vocalized thought suddenly stopped when he realized it wasn't his alarm clock. He suddenly turned around, but the room he expected wasn't there. Instead behind him was a hazy brown of the cavern. "No bed," and "Cold, hard floor." These thoughts suddenly flew through his brain throwing off what was left of the drowsiness. "Now that's weird. How did I get here?" with that thought he slowly turned around, taking in the views of this fairly impressive cavern.

The cavern seemed to have housed many floods if the markings on the walls were anything to go by. Pipes which seemed to contain water ran along both walls. Even more pipes ran along the ceiling, spidering across the ceiling almost like a web hoping to catch a fly. The ceiling was over 20 meters high.

A bar from the cage suddenly reflected non-existent light upon him, catching his attention. Turning around fully to face the cage he noticed the snores seemed to originate from in there. The shadow of a sleeping giant seemed to capture his eyes away from the fancy gate. The shadow had a slight reddish tinge. He looked at it for a second before he decided to turn around and explore some of the large cave.

As he took a step backwards the snoring seemed to stop, so did Naruto. A slight muttering was heard coming from the shadow. It seemed to shift before a red light seemed to turn on. It got slowly got bigger and brighter until you could tell it was an eye. A big red eye. A big red eye, that seemed to be groggy, as if just waking up. A big red groggy eye that belonged to the giant red tinted shadow, behind the massive cage.

It seemed to linger half shut as it lazily swept upon its domain. Sweeping past Naruto it continued to take in its surroundings. The eye slightly narrowed as it came once more back to Naruto, who was standing rigid and still confused.

The other eye opened as the first stayed fixed upon the boy. Twin beacons of light seemed to be considering what was in front of him before they moved. In fact the whole shadow seemed to move. The giant stood up. As it stood the light of the cavern seemed to shift and showed the Kyuubi no Kitsune in all of its glory, stretching and arching it back, like a cat… Sitting back down, the Kyuubi placed its paws comfortably underneath its chin and just looked at Naruto.

Naruto on the other hand pondered deeply about the situation he was in. When he emerged from his thoughts he stated "You are Kyuubi no Kitsune" he paused and thought for a second "Kyuubi no Kitsune is sealed in me" he stated again. He paused and thought for another second and asked "am I sealed in me too?" this random comment almost seemed to be expected to have come out of the blonde haired kid's mouth.

The Kyuubi just stared at Naruto with a blank look. Naruto, confused, stared back and pondered. "Where are we?" suddenly asked bouncing around slightly and fidgeting with his hands. He looked around the cavern again as if it would tell him where he was by just looking at it. The walls told him nothing but that he was underground somewhere. Looking back at the fox he looked waiting for an answer.

He waited. He waited and waited. He waited for what felt like an eternity - but was really just one minute- before he questioned the fox "Are you going to answer me or not?" the fox, well the fox started to smile. His teeth started to show in what-to many other people- would be considered a sinister smile that showed his teeth but Naruto held his ground, unknowing what the word sinister even meant.

"No," was the simple statement that seemed to echo from the fox. It also made Naruto's jaw drop unbelievingly. The fox just continued smiling in an almost sinister way as if it had some perverse pleasure by the lack of knowledge the boy had. Naruto sputtered incomprehensively due to the utter lack of response he could think of.

Once Naruto regained his thoughts he decided to go about it in a different way. "Why?" he said in a child like fashion, hoping that the fox would tell him why he wouldn't answer him. The fox remained silent with the smile falling away to form a maniacal smirk

Due to the lack of answers Naruto decided to find the answer in his own way. He decided to check this place out more thoroughly. He walked to the rough centre of the room to take it in properly. The walls were marked from previous flood. The dirt floor was dry and hard. The pipes seemed to be slightly tinged as if color once graced their surfaces. A dark tunnel seemed to lead away from the cavern. There were no sources of light and yet the place seemed to be lit. Almost as if the objects themselves radiated the light the light he saw.

That was when he got back to the cage. There was one little thing that he had missed earlier. The giant gates had a piece of paper stuck to the centre. On it was the kanji for seal. An idea suddenly came to him which he voiced "That's the seal?" A look of amazement crossed his mind before he looked confused once more.

"Have any idea why I'm here fox?" Naruto asked after thinking the situation through. Kyuubi seemed to think for a moment. That was before that annoying smirk showed up once more.

"Yes," the answer seemed to hold as if he was going to continue. He didn't and Naruto shot him a dark glare. This set of a sequence of events; Kyuubi laughed; the cavern shook; Naruto fell to the ground; Naruto hit his head and further laughing from the fox.

The laughing eventually stopped and Naruto rose from the ground with further mutterings and dark glares. "Can you tell me tell me oh great Kyuubi-sama" Naruto asked sarcastically due to his annoyance with the fox.

This proved to be the correct thing to say as the fox replied with a satisfied and slightly sarcastic tone "Aaah great to be treated with proper respect. Anyway if you must know then you somehow brought yourself here. This place is the way your mind interprets this seal, this cave's your body bla bla bla and some stuff you wouldn't understand. There answer all your questions?" the fox almost seemed non-caring and bored about what he was saying by the end of his speech. Very different from what you would expect from a caged demon-furious and egotistic.

Naruto seemed surprised that the fox actually answered. What was even more surprising was the attitude it had. The fox had 9 tails, red fur, was really big, had sharp teeth, but where was the killer intent it was famous for? Naruto of course didn't think about this and was only surprised that it answered his questions.

"Umm, yes that did answer them." Naruto said slowly, as if he was wondering the same thing. He paused, wondering how on earth he managed to bring himself here. He didn't really understand where he was, all he knew was that he was at the seal somehow.

"How did I bring myself here?" Naruto half questioned himself, half questioned the fox. The fox obviously wasn't going to answer if the annoying smile on his face was anything to go by, so Naruto thought. And he thought. He thought some more. He thought so hard that when he stopped he had to stop from the headache he hade made. He decided that he didn't want to know.

A thought suddenly came through the pain in his head and he decided to act upon it. "Train me!" is what he exclaimed to the fox, hoping that this big powerful being could make him stronger. The fox looked at the boy in a questioning manner before it shrugged its' shoulders.

"Why not, ill help you a little. I've got nothing better to do anyway. You'll need to get your brain working first though. Wont be able to do anything without smarts." The fox said as a mischievous smile placed itself upon its face. A look of horror plastered itself upon Naruto's 3 seconds after the foxes voice was spoken, his brain taking that long to work out the implications of the words.

Scenes of books, papers, and head-aches bounced his head once the full implications hit. A scene of him in his bed with books and pieces of paper surrounding him with no where to escape, was most prominent of these horrors.

His eyes seemed to open. For a second saw all he saw was his most terrifying vision. After the second passed, the horror seemed to melt away, leaving him sitting upright in his bed. His room was as usual with no mountains of paperbacked books and notes on them, rather there were a few clothes strung around his room.

Looking at his cupboard he saw the books he had been given in the ninja academy. They were still all in prime condition and couldn't have been read more than once or possibly just skimmed through- the second being much more likely. He groaned at the thought of having to read them.

Putting the horrific though away for later he looked at his bedside table and at the time the alarm clock showed, very early. The alarm clock had obviously seen better days as it had scratches, nicks, cracks and other numerous sign of damage- a kunai stuck in it being one. On the floor to the side of it was a small pile of the same alarm clock. They also showed the same signs of abuse, only they were much more severe. Many of the alarm clocks weren't even in one piece any more, but rather they were broken in two.

One of the drawers of the bedside table was open. In it, were a few boxes with unbroken alarm clocks. The clocks breaking wasn't a rare occurrence, no it seemed to be rather expected.

Expecting not to fall back to sleep Naruto got out of bed not paying a single thought about the broken devices right next to his feet. Rather his thoughts were on the pit in his stomach. As pre-decided earlier, he was going to have last nights' ramen, some toast and a glass of milk.

Naruto picked up some of the scattered clothes as he walked across his bedroom, putting them in the laundry basket as he passed it. Opening a door to his right he went onwards to his food, passing through his small hallway and into his main room, he flicked the lights to on and went to the corner with the food.

Picking up the bread in its plastic bag, he un-tied the piece of plastic preventing air from spoiling it too quickly and pulled out 2 pieces of toast. Putting the pieces of slightly stale-but still alright to eat-bread, he looked for the leftovers of last night. A plastic bag sitting on the table answered his question as to where the takeaway ramen from last nights feast with Iruka was.

Going over to the bag he took out the 3 plastic bowls of ramen and poured the contents of all three into a single, slightly larger than normal, bowl from a cupboard under the kitchen bench. After mixing the contents it went straight to the microwave to heat up. While waiting for his food he set the table with a plate and a glass of milk.

The toast popped up at the same time as the chime of the microwave sounded. Both were quickly herded onto the table and eventually into his stomach only to be washed down by the milk.

Now with his stomach filled Naruto thought over what had happened last night; learning about Kyuubi, Mizuki, the forbidden scroll, the awesome new jutsu. He stopped there as he thought about his new jutsu, kage bunshin. It was a jutsu that allowed him to create solid clones. The best thing about it was that he could make healthy them unlike his normal bunshin jutsu-sickly things they ended up being.

The next thought to his mind was that of the conversation he had with Kyuubi in his sleep. The thought of the fox teaching him was a positive one alright and only dampened by the thought of 'smartening up' first. As the two thoughts collided an idea came to him. The clones were him right? And also he could learn. So why didn't he make himself learn so that he could learn! This was the thought-that had no logic- was running through his mind as he made seal for his jutsu.

A small puff of smoke as a clone of Naruto suddenly appeared next to him. The both smiled in a satisfied way as they took off for the books in his bedroom. With a pile of books in their hands, they sat down at the table and read. With enthusiasm they read through the top books of the piles, thoughts of greatness pushing them passed their boredom.


In his office the leader of the village was sitting behind his desk. Of his desk currently were 12 files. Each one of these folders was labeled with names, one of which was Naruto Uzumaki. Another 8 files were labeled with names of the most prominent members of the graduating class, from the ninja academy. The three left over had the names; Kakashi Hatake; Kurenai Yuhi; Asuma Sarutobi.

Currently the Sandaime Hokage was deciding where to put the different files. For where he placed the files depended on who would be on the teams that would be formed. These teams meant how well each gennin would grow through their careers. So it was vital that each team was perfect, or at least as close as it could be.

The first ray of light peeked over the mountain behind him and shone straight onto his desk. It refracted off a glass like ball in one of the partially open drawers and straight into the eyes of hokage. To Sarutobi it was as if a sign from kami to give him inspiration.

The drawer was opened and the glass ball, along with a cloth which it rested upon, was lifted onto the desk. A rainbow of color splashed out against the rooms' walls, as it was settled on the cloth. Sarutobi looked at the refractions in the ball, his hands waving wildly around it slowly with a slight glow of blue.

A flash of yellow pierced the surface of the glass, but it was gone and could be mistaken for a trick of the eyes. Another came, this time with a mix of orange on it. The next time when the flash came, a blurry picture of a room appeared. The picture didn't flash by this time, but rather started to sharpen onto the yellow and orange scene in it.

By the time the scene was full you could see 2 identical people studying books on top of a table. This was Naruto and his clone. Sarutobi looked at the scene with a look of surprise. As the surprise flashed over his face the image wavered with it. The image fell apart leaving just a rainbow of color.

Sarutobi continued looking at the ball even as the picture was gone. A curiosity welled within him as he wondered how Naruto figured out the secret of the kage bunshin. His gaze sharpened as he picked four folders up and looked at them. Naruto Uzumaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Shino Aburame and Kurenai Yuhi were the names printed upon the 4 folders.


White eyes -belonging to a girl of around 12- fluttered open. If you looked at them you would immediately notice that they were not normal. In fact they had no irises and had lavender tint to them. These eyes were the pride of the Hyuuga clan, they were the Byakugan. The girl that belonged to these eyes was named Hinata.

Hinata looked at her ceiling for a second before releasing a heart felt sigh. She had just awakened from a dream involving her secret crush, Naruto. She had just been about to kiss him after confessing her feeling for him, when she woke up. The dreams always ended at the same place, just as the kiss was about to happen. It sometimes ended even earlier. They were always her favorite dreams, until she woke up that is.

Hinata was a timid individual for as long as she could remember. Unlike the majority of the main family, she wasn't prideful and egotistic, thinking themselves above the general populace. Rather, she was a shy, kind, nervous, withdrawn and very and very compassionate young lady. These characteristics are what shined through when forced to fight, especially shown when called to a spar.

She disliked the Hyuuga style of taijutsu, the 'gentle fist'. For you see even though it was called the 'gentle fist', it was anything but gentle. The gentle fist, being a brutal form of taijutsu, could be used to cripple the chakra system. The user just has to expel chakra into the opponents' chakra system. This disrupts the natural chakra flow maybe even rupturing parts of it. The internal organs can also be attacked in this way, the organs being closely integrated into the chakra system. This would allow a brutal death, as internal organs can't be trained and strengthened. Even the strongest could die from a single, forceful, touch. All this could possibly be done without a single sign on the outside, until they cough up blood or drop to the ground that is.

Hinata hated pain. This was fairly plain and simple. She hated inflicting pain on others; rather she preferred taking that pain away. Even simpler. The Hyuuga clan, being a prominent part of Konoha, thought fairly high of themselves. They like inflicting pain much, much more than poor Hinata. This was where the friction was between Hinata and her father was. Her father was the leader of this prominent clan, thus she was expected to be the best in the Hyuuga style. Hinata wasn't the best at the style.

Hinata was an academy student and had just recently passed the test to become gennin. Her crush had failed and in her mind so had her chances for her dreams to become true. It was at the academy where all the new gennin were gathering to be placed into teams, with people they would both learn and grow with. Hinata had hoped to be in a team with Naruto. She knew it wouldn't happen though and now even that small chance of them being in the same team was crushed.

It had been a week since she last saw Naruto. She had tried going to his favorite places just to get a glimpse of her crush, but not hide or hair had been spotted. She wouldn't have found him either, as he was not any usual spot he would normally be found at. In fact it was a place of the unknown territory for him, for he was in front of a book reading.

Today was actually the day that she would become a part of a team of gennin and one Jonin. She desperately wanted to not bring her team down; she didn't want to be their cause of failure. Currently she was at the door of the classroom where she would be assigned to her team.

As she opened the door at first she thought she was -as usual- the first one there. But she wasn't though, and boy would she be surprised when she noticed the other person there.


Well… there goes my first ever chapter I've written of fan faction. Took me a while but here it is. Now where to go from here so many gaps in my plan. Oh well ill write it as it comes. Plz review.