Free Falling
This is my first Fanfic so it's probably going to be weird. Tell me if I should continue. And if I don't get any reviews it will definitely tell me something. All right!!!!!!!!!!! On with the Story (author turns pale).
[""] – Start and end of thoughts
Wake up!
A large oak door silently opened, and a small head with an unruly hair peeked in. The small body slowly tiptoed its way into the room, making sure to leave the door wide open.
It made its way carefully over to the bed. The little boy carefully took the ladder to the upper bunk and, with a look of slight concentration, moved it to the other end of the bunk beds.
He tiptoed back to the space previously occupied by the ladder. He watched the bed for a moment, as it rose and fell in even spaces.
The large lump that was in the bed moved sluggishly as it rolled onto its other side, which now had it facing the young boy.
Seeing a chance he couldn't miss, the young boy gathered his breath. And with a great puffed up chest, he let it loose as loud as he could.
"Gohan, WAKE UP!!!!!''
The figure barely moved.
"Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh," Gohan moaned so quietly that not even Goten's saiyan hearing could hear him.
Seeing no change in the figure, the young boy started to puff up his chest again, trying to take a bigger breath than last time.
He never got the chance.
An arm wiped out from under the blue covers on the bed, and grabbed his small arm.
Before the child could do anything he found himself airborne. Speeding through the air only to come to an abrupt halt when his back hit the deep blue walls.
He had hit the wall with his feet up, and a pout painted across his tiny face.
He slowly slid down the wall to land on his head, and slowly rolled to finally come to a stop sitting down, facing the wall.
The pout was still at full power.
"Awe... I really wanted to scream again," he whined in a clearly audible voice.
The lump on the bed spoke, "Sorry to ruin your day, but you pretty much ruined mine. What time is it?"
A head emerged from under the covers and looked at a clock with glowing red numbers, "Why did you have to wake me up so early?"
"I don't know, mom just told me to get you up, and ...well ...I did!"
Goten was smiling happily.
A vague thought crossed Gohan's tired mind.
["Hmm...I guess I'll just have to ask mom later"]
Gohan's very sleep mind soon forgot that he was supposed to be getting up, and it was very quickly running off, back into the realms of sleep. Those late night spars with Vegeta really didn't do him any good in the morning.
Goten, who had started to leave the room, took a look back at his brothers bed.
Noticing that he had fallen back to sleep he thought, ["Finally, my chance!"]
He once again slowly tiptoed back to the bed, and at the perfect moment...
"GOHAN WAKE UP!!!!!"
End
Well there you have it....I know what you're thinking ...WAY to short chapter. Well the next one's going to be pretty long so don't worry. Thanks and Review.
Edited on July 9th '04 by: Aragorn566
This is my first Fanfic so it's probably going to be weird. Tell me if I should continue. And if I don't get any reviews it will definitely tell me something. All right!!!!!!!!!!! On with the Story (author turns pale).
[""] – Start and end of thoughts
Wake up!
A large oak door silently opened, and a small head with an unruly hair peeked in. The small body slowly tiptoed its way into the room, making sure to leave the door wide open.
It made its way carefully over to the bed. The little boy carefully took the ladder to the upper bunk and, with a look of slight concentration, moved it to the other end of the bunk beds.
He tiptoed back to the space previously occupied by the ladder. He watched the bed for a moment, as it rose and fell in even spaces.
The large lump that was in the bed moved sluggishly as it rolled onto its other side, which now had it facing the young boy.
Seeing a chance he couldn't miss, the young boy gathered his breath. And with a great puffed up chest, he let it loose as loud as he could.
"Gohan, WAKE UP!!!!!''
The figure barely moved.
"Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh," Gohan moaned so quietly that not even Goten's saiyan hearing could hear him.
Seeing no change in the figure, the young boy started to puff up his chest again, trying to take a bigger breath than last time.
He never got the chance.
An arm wiped out from under the blue covers on the bed, and grabbed his small arm.
Before the child could do anything he found himself airborne. Speeding through the air only to come to an abrupt halt when his back hit the deep blue walls.
He had hit the wall with his feet up, and a pout painted across his tiny face.
He slowly slid down the wall to land on his head, and slowly rolled to finally come to a stop sitting down, facing the wall.
The pout was still at full power.
"Awe... I really wanted to scream again," he whined in a clearly audible voice.
The lump on the bed spoke, "Sorry to ruin your day, but you pretty much ruined mine. What time is it?"
A head emerged from under the covers and looked at a clock with glowing red numbers, "Why did you have to wake me up so early?"
"I don't know, mom just told me to get you up, and ...well ...I did!"
Goten was smiling happily.
A vague thought crossed Gohan's tired mind.
["Hmm...I guess I'll just have to ask mom later"]
Gohan's very sleep mind soon forgot that he was supposed to be getting up, and it was very quickly running off, back into the realms of sleep. Those late night spars with Vegeta really didn't do him any good in the morning.
Goten, who had started to leave the room, took a look back at his brothers bed.
Noticing that he had fallen back to sleep he thought, ["Finally, my chance!"]
He once again slowly tiptoed back to the bed, and at the perfect moment...
"GOHAN WAKE UP!!!!!"
End
Well there you have it....I know what you're thinking ...WAY to short chapter. Well the next one's going to be pretty long so don't worry. Thanks and Review.
Edited on July 9th '04 by: Aragorn566
