I decided to restart the story over, and add some scenes, that were originally going to be told in later chapters, but at the end I decided to include them on the beginning. Oh well, as I said before, this is a crossover, of Naruto and the Ouran High school host club; and I don't have any rights toward anything in both of those series.
Up with the story:
-a-
"Complete exile!"
"What?!" jumped a teen-age girl from her seat. "What do you mean with complete exile?"
"Complete exile dear. This is the sentence for those how dare to get themselves involved with one of my cases." Said the queen from her thrown, as she was looking at girl's face; who was been force to be seated on a seat in front of her, by too guards in both of her sides. The queen, while still looking at the girl, could only increase her fury toward her, will only make her remember the moment she sentence her. That girl, the one who dare to make reclaims and demands toward her, in one of her precious cases of the court. Well as the royal queen, she couldn't leave the things like this no, no, no. She immediately raced her hand, and ordered an arrest, against the teenager, taking her by some guards to be sentence on a private court. This explaining why the presence of the girl, in front of the queen, in a room surrounded by guards everywhere. "This means that by royal decree, you will no longer be able to place one foot, in my territory for the rest of your life.
'I don't really need to come here again; this was my very first visit at least…and what a great welcome did I receive. Just because I try to help somebody, now they are forcing me away.' Though the girl as she smiled too her self. 'This really isn't going to be so much of a punishment, since making no longer able to enter this place, isn't going to affect me by anything.' Continue too thought, while now taking a look at the queen's eyes. 'If only the mighty QuE-eN knows.'
"Do you thing that I don't know, what you're thinking, dear."
This declaration, really took by surprise at the girl. 'Is impossible, that she already knows, that I'm not really form this place, if not, she would have giving me another type of sentence, like long time imprisonment or something…(Serious)this really looks strange.' "What are trying to say by that?"
(Smiles) "Dear, I really have to admit that you of stupid, you don't have a single hair, you're even giving me pity." With her sarcastic, but lovely voice…she stood up from her thrown and walked to the girl, until she was facing the girl's ear. "Don't you ever think that I'm not informed…I already know, that you're not from this places, and that this your first arrival, by the fault of one of my servants, who allow itself to be fallowed by you, to this place." As she stopped whispering, as she forcefully took the girl by her cheeks, making her look to her eyes. "So this was why you where partying inside of you, because you thought that the sentence was not going to affect you in any way.
The girl just look at her with cold eyes, and with great desire too make some punches into that beauty face of the queen, but she was still been force back by those two idiotic bodyguards of her sides. "You are STUPID!" yelled the queen, as she slapped the girl on her face. This as result, increasing more the teenager's fury, making her able too stand up from her seat through shouts, but this really didn't last long, as she was immediately calmed, by receiving a punch on her stomach, by one of the guards, causing her too fall unconscious.
--1hour--
(Sarcastically crying) "Oh dear, I really didn't wanted to hurt you this way, but you were the one that force me. Those last seconds of yours, where you where going over me…did you really think that a mediocre like you could go, and surpass me."
The girl that was still waking up, from her unconsciousness, noticed that she was still on the same room, of a few moments ago, and that the only thinks that had change was that she was now tied up to her seat, and the queen was back to her thrown, but with another glance you could see that there was another difference in her. And it was that she was now holding a staff on her left hand. The staff was really strange looking, with a giant, transparent sphere on the top, and on its designs you could see a giant fox with nine tails all over it, and the tails in one point you can see that it comes out from the drawings and starts too encircle the sphere all the way too the top. "You're a monster."
"This isn't really something to be taken to that level, dear, and with so many things, I had forgotten to tell the most important thing."
"And what is it that you forgot, your HiGhn-eSs?"
"When I told, that your sentence was a complete exile, I really mean it, since it isn't only an exile for this place." Continue the queen, ignoring completely the mockery that the girl had made her question.
After the queen said that, it instantly caused the girl too paralyzed herself, making a stop of all those failed tries, of trying too get herself loose. "What do you mean by that?" Nervously she manage too ask.
The queen just started to laugh, as she heard her. "Now you're nervous, dear?" Making an demonic smile. "That's how I like too see you're type, crying on my feet, especially, when the existence of that person in this world is about to end."
"So you're going to kill me?" The girl asked her, as she looked at her staff.
"No dear, what will I win by just killing you, everyone can do that…and nevertheless you will not suffer at all, in what I have in mind." Said the queen as she looked at the staff for a second, like she knew what the girl's was thinking at that moment…if only the girl knew that in some way, she was right.
"What are you talking about?"
"What I have in mind is…an eternal exile."
"An eternal exile?"
"Yes, an exile that will not put on doubt the fulfillment of my charges toward you, an exile toward time."
"What are you talking about? What do you mean by an exile toward time?" Manage to ask the girl very nervously, wishing inside, that the thing that she had in mind was not the thing that the queen had in mind.
"What I mean, dear, is that the life you used to know, you should start to say bye-bye to it." Sarcastically laugh the queen, as she rose once again from her thrown.
The girl was immediately infuriated again, and completely forgetting that she was tied up to her chair, she force herself up…ending only, at the floor, with the chair on top, and some small bruises. "How daar-e yoU say soomEt-hInng like Thha-t, you m-ighht be thee Quuueeen over he-ree but thiis does-n't giive yOu thee RighT to Step oveer peoplee's livees likees ttthaat." Manage to say the girl, as she was still feeling the hurt of the impact, when she receive the chair on her back, and not even counting that, she was still having that chair on her back, with a couple of bruises in some parts of her body.
"That's how I like it, thrown in the floor in pleading for your life. Why is it that I will not be able to see the moment when you take the life of another?" Continue sarcastically, as it made a sign to the guards, telling them to place the girl the way she was before.
"WHAT? What do you mean by that? Immediately asked the teenager, as she was been, placed to her original position, by the guards.
"Oh please, dear, don't act like your stupid now." Said the queen a little bit disappointed. "You know really well, that you're now been force out of this world." Continue the queen, as she trough her diabolic laughter again. "Why do you think that you would be taking the life of another, when start to live in another time?
The girl already knew the answer to that, and already in her mind she knew that it was something impossible, but as she kept watching the queen's staff; she is started to felt a strange, but gigantic, power coming out of it that was causing some doubts about it…but she will not let the queen notice this. "I imagine that as a result, of the spell, I would have taken his live, on his time, and he would have taken mine, on mine time, (Laughing) but obviously we already know that this is something impossible.
"Well dear, we will see about that." Laughing to herself. 'I think I had sufficient time to have fun with her, I guess is about time that I fulfill her sentence and get rid of her, either way, she is just only a key to my true…(Contemplating her staff) desire. "I admit that you're a girl with a lot of courage. First, with the court, and know with all the several insults that you made throughout this meeting; never before as anyone manage to go this far, but…" Continue the queen, this time completely serious, as she stood up once again from her thrown. "I think is time that I fulfill your sentence." Then standing up her staff to the front, and declaring a series of words, the sphere of the staff immediately started too bright, as it started to loose its transparence, and adopt a new dark green color.
The girl was already dyeing of fright, she was completely paralyze by the intense power that the staff was releasing, but her fears of it where only increase, as soon as she saw the release of horrible looking shadows, in sequence of green rays, that then started to roam all over the room. "WHAT ARE THOSE THINGS?"
"This shadows,dear?" Asked mockingly. "These are going to be the once in charge of fulfilling your sentence."
"What?" yelled the girl, at the same time as all the dark shadows randomly stopped roaming in the room, too go directly to her; this causing even more stress and terror to her, and simultaneously more desire to free herself of those guards, and ropes that were keeping her all this time in that horrible chair. "WHAT THE HELL ARE THESE THINGS?" Screamed again the teenager, after more than a hundred hands started to appear, at the bottom of her seat, and claiming her legs they began to pull her down, all with the chair, and as more as they pull, more was she sunken to them; this was all after the strange shadows began too encircle her, until they made a central point at the bottom of her seat. Then they made their disappearance, as they entered simultaneously underneath the earth. Then as result, in just seconds, these green dark liquid hands started to appear. "You are the most vulgar and detestable queen that I have ever met, and besides that you can't do this! You might be the queen over here, but that doesn't give you the right to decide what to do with my life, like that, and even more, I didn't do anything wrong, I just did what I think was right, and defended that poor girl." Answered back, the teenager, as she continues to fight back with those ugly liquid hands, which were still in a powdery fight, to overpower her, and then claim her.
The queen just smirked after hearing her. She had to admit that the moment was entering, into one of her favorite parts, the part when the victim starts to beg for his dear life. "In something you're quite mistaken, dear, because in the site that you are now, I really do have the right to claim and do whatever I want…(Changing her look direction from the girl's, to the liquids hands) my babies, don't you thing you have played long enough? GET RID OF HER ALREADY!"
Immediately, as they received their order, more hands started too appear, and to attack her more, taking her more down to them. (Serious, and looking at the floor) No your highness, I would be the one that would put an end to you, RIGHT KNOW!" yelled the girl, as she received another attack of fury in her insides, increasing the sufficient amount of desire, to do a final try of escaping.
"You do have a lot of spirit in you, but you would have to calm down for now. You should know by now that all your efforts would be useless." Said the queen in her sweet, sarcastic, voice, as she saw the girl falling down to the floor once again, with the seat…this time with more velocity. Even thought, she did get herself loose, it was with a high cost, because now her arms and legs were all in a extremely high pain, and now once again her back felt the pain of the chair falling over her…but that's nothing compared to those disgusting liquid hands who where now taking the best of the moment, and had clamed her all over from her chest to her feet.
"Get off, of me! Leave me the hell alone!" Screamed the teenager hysterically, as she continue to fight back to the hundreds of hands who where now covering now attacking her face.
"I already told you, that it is useless dear, you can't escape now. You are now condemned to live the life of another, as the other would be living yours, and that is all because of you! (Smirks) I can't wait for the other person, to start developing killer intents, toward you. That's all when he finds out that you were responsible, for taking him out of his dear live."
As the minute's pass, the girl and the chair were fully covered by this hands, by the exception of some parts of the girl's face. "I swear that one day; I will make you pay for all of this." These were the last words that she managed to say before she was completely claimed by the liquids hands.
The queen just hysterically laughed after hearing that, as she saw that the first part of her enchantment had began. 'Child, I must admit that I would have loved to fulfill your desires of vengeance, but is really awful that you will not remember a think of what happened in here'…(Faking tears) "Well now, now that I have taken care of that girl, is time to enter the most important part…Usagi!"
"Yes, Akurei-sama." one of her most trusted servants rapidly responded, as it entered the room, through the principal door.
"Second phase, Usagi, you know what to do."
"It would be done." Immediately responded as it bowed to the queen, and soon made it's disappearance to fulfill its task.
"Usagi?" Do you think, that she would be able to fulfill this really important task?" Asked a voice, as it suddenly, came out of the queen's back.
"Don't you worry my dear, Usagi has never failed me before, I'm really sure she will not failed me now."
"But you know how crucial it is this missi-"
"I already told you, that she will not failed me…(Interrupting him) she already knows the consequences if that ever happens…especially in this mission." Looking seriously at the end of the room. "She will not fail me now; by any motive can't she let any other person be taken for the exchange, beside the person we are looking for."
"Soon my queen." Said the creator of the voice, as it took one of her hands, and kiss it. "Soon we will have all the power, which we have long desired."
-b-
"What was that? A young man named Naruto, asked himself, as he was forced to wake up, in the dark hours of the night, as he suddenly heard a big noise coming from downstairs. (Yawn) "I better check it o-…huh?" As he was stretching, and rubbing himself on his face to force himself to wake up more; he couldn't failed to notice the sound of many yells and shouts coming form outside.
As he stood up from his bed, he immediately ran too the nearest window to take a look to the outside, out of curiosity…but he was completely surprise of what he saw. "Kill him…kill the demon! Exterminate him! Don't let him escape!" This were some of the many yells that he manage to catch, from some of the many villagers that were now surrounding his apartment, accompanied by their flaming logs, and arms.
"I can't believe this, I thought this had already stopped along time ago, but looking at this I guess I was wrong." Said Naruto disappointed, as he looked more into the villagers and noticed, in the looks, that the big noise from before was, actually, the main door, entrance, that was suffering from continues damage by the villagers, with the help of a log that they, themselves, had brought. The villagers with the continues pull to the door, you could see on their faces their eagerness to enter already…a desire that was fulfill in some minutes as the door was finally broken in two, and in just seconds, they started too enter like beasts…too start the search of the 'demon's room'.
"Look up there, that's the demon." One of the villagers screamed, as she noticed Naruto's presence in one of the top floors windows, and immediately pointed at him. "Yeah, that's him, that's the nine tail fox, kill him!" yelled another, as all the villagers that were still outside began to throw things, at close as they can, to Naruto's window.
Naruto just signed, as he looked back into the room. "Some things just never change. Even thought I train a lot, and show them a million times how loyal I am to them…(Letting himself fall to the floor, and the started to cry) I guess these things are going to stay as they are, and they will never stop hating me, but…(cleaning out his face) I am Uzumaki Naruto, and I will never give up, because that's my true nindo, dattebayo."
"Your true nindo…yeah right…don't flatter yourself, demon, as we will make sure that you will not survive this night."
"Huh?" Naruto looked back to the direction of the voice, only to find a bunch of the villagers shouting at him, that just seconds before had broken down his door. "Don't you ever give up, huh?" Naruto rapidly asked, to the one that talked before, that seems to be the leader of the group.
"Never, not until we put at end to you creature of the devil."
"How many times, and ways, do I have to tell you that I'm not the nine tail fox, that I am just the jailor."
"Lies, lies, those are just big fucking lies to confuse us…(Looking back to the rest of the villagers) the demon only wants to trick us make us think that it is only a boy, so it can then once again reappear in its full power, when we had leave are guard down, and kill us all!" The leader yelled, as he pulled up his log, fully inflames, as a signal to kill the demon. "But we are not going to let ourselves be tricked that easily, No…(Cries of No, came out of all the villagers) I say kill the demon!" letting then all of the villagers that were behind him, to pass.
"You won't be able to catch me this time, dattebayo."
"Don't let him escape" yelled the leader once again, as he watch Naruto jumping out of the window and casting his favorite jutsu while escaping.
"Kage Bushin No Jutsu" Naruto shouted as he instantly made a thousand clones of himself floating in the air, while the other villagers that were waiting for him outside, incase that he made an escaped, were now confusedly attacking all the Naruto's that appear on sight, since they could not see who truly was the real one.
"This is the demon!" Screamed a villager. "No, this is the real demon!" yelled another. This was happening, with all of the villagers, as they couldn't tell who the real one was, and now they were divided by groups searching and destroying all the near false clones, that they could find, until they find the real one.
Back at Naruto's apartment, the leader of the villagers was smirking, while looking at the village, by the same window that Naruto had used to escape a few minutes before. While he continue to contemplate it, the man's eyes started to bright as it simultaneously began to turn from his brown eyes into a pink reddish color. This marking the beginning of a mutant process in his body, starting with his ears were it rapidly began to grow, and also turning, this time into a fully pink color; color that, similarly, started to appear in other parts of his body, until it covered it completely. Then he started to shrink, but while he shrank, his feet were growing, with a fluffy cotton tail at his lower back, he was no longer a he, instead an it. As its body now looked the same as common rabbit, only its fur was pink. 'So this are some of the amazing abilities, that a ninja has…I guess I must had underestimated you this time, Uzumaki Naruto, but that doesn't mean that I would not be able to capture you…(smiles) as I already know where you're going.' The rabbit smirked as its eyes started to glow. "Your demon is hiding inside the forest of the Kage's mountains, go there and kill him now!" Ordered the rabbit as it had communicated with the villager's throughout their minds.
"Yes sir!" immediately responded back one of the villagers. "It would be done!" Responded another. "I will crush that demon into pisses!" yelled another villager, as they were all now making their way toward the forest.
The pink rabbit just smiled, as it made its way, to the forest as well.
-c-
Soon after the liquid hands had claimed the teenager, these hands continued to tosh her, and to push her all the way down, in a rhythm that looked like no end, for her.
"Get the hell off of me!" Shouted the girl once again, as she was been dragged down, by this horrible hands as she was getting sick of it, especially with this continues practice of touching and grouping her, this was madness. It was long time, she had been set free of her chair, as one of this hideous hands stupidly, or thankfully, set her free, but that didn't help in anything, as she was still trapped by this hands, and continuously been suffocated by them, as they were always surrounding her at all times.
In a moment when she finally was about to loose it, the area enclosing her with the hands, miraculously began to open, freeing her from the worst torment she have ever had in her life. "Oh thank God, I thought I would have never be able to get out of that horrible place." Said too herself, as she look up, to see were she was. "Where am I? I can't see a damn thing." The girl said as she tried to walk thought the darkness. "What is this?" Asked herself, as she felt something thought her feet. "Is a breeze!" To feel a breeze in this forsaken place, their has to be an exit over here somewhere were the breeze is using it so it can enter to this place…that has to my way to my freedom." Continue the girl, as she blindedly search for away to find this fabulous exit, using the currents of breezes as a backup, but her search didn't last long, as the breeze that was now running in the room, was the one that find her first, as it suddenly turned into a cyclone, blowing her away in the process.
-d-
"What the hell?" Naruto jump back surprise, as he immediately hided behind some bushes. 'What the hell are they doing in here? I though they would have never think of searching for me in here' though Naruto, as he looked from his hidden place, at some of the villagers that were still eagerly searching from him, passing by.
"God damn it, why wouldn't they just give up" said Naruto annoyed as he saw more of them passing, a couple of times.
Naruto's patience was almost about to break out, as he has been kept there for almost an hour, and he could still see some of them passing through, even thought in less quantity. "Rrhh, I can't take this anymore, this is taking me forever…I'm going out!!" Naruto yelled as he then jumped out of his hiding place.
"So you finally decided to show up, Naruto-kun."
"Huh?" Naruto looked back into to the direction, where the sudden voice had appeared, but then as there wasn't anybody from that direction, he started to look from every side. "Show yourself damn it, and tell me already who the hell you are!!!" Naruto yelled back to nowhere as he couldn't find the maker of the voice, but in the process he did noticed something strange. 'What happened to the villagers? Weren't they after for me just seconds before?'
(Laughing) "So you finally notice, my little Naruto-kun." The voice said again, as it suddenly decided to make its appearance.
As Naruto looked to side where the voice had come from, he could finally see the maker of it…fully taking him by surprise, as the maker of the voice was not a 'person' at all, as he had expected, instead it was instead a rabbit, a pink rabbit to be exact. "Who are you calling little, you little shit!" yelled Naruto again, as he pointed a finger at the new arrival.
"Oh my, Naruto, you don't have to be so harsh, I thought you would have known any better. You, the one that is always been treated as trash because of your status, and as a result, you're always wishing for the day that you might actually win their respect; is now treating me as trash as well." Said the rabbit as it suddenly began to cry.
"What do you mean?"
"Oh Naruto, you don't know how long I have waited for this day, to come. The day that we finally meet each other, but now your treating me like trash." Continue the rabbit, as it cries were getting louder.
"Look I'm sorry, just stop crying all ready."
"You don't mean it, you big jerk, you're just wishing for me to get lost."
"I am not ly-." Said Naruto as he felt more annoyed and confused than ever in his life, but two thoughts was still on his mind. 'Why this strange, annoying, rabbit came here anyway? And why was it searching for me, out of all people?' Letting go of an air he was holding. "I'm pretty sure that Sakura-chan, would have loved to be with you."
As suddenly as it began to cry, it stopped, as it was now smirking at him, with no trace of ever been crying at all. "No matter, the manipulated villagers had done their part. Bring the child, with the demon inside of him, to me in an area were no one else can see us."
"What do you mean with manipulated villagers?!" Naruto shouted back at it.
"Oh, of course you didn't know. (Smiling) Can you believe that I manipulated some of the villagers, so they would have attack you. Seriously, I'm not lying, at the beginning I thought that it was going to be hard, but in the process I find out that it was rather easy…it was like if they really wanted to attack you in the first place, but that's not surprising at the end, with your current status." Continued the rabbit, while Naruto was now forcing himself not too look at it, since he was at almost at thee very near to wanting to see a certain rabbit, squash.
"What's the matter Naruto-kun? Why do you look so harsh? Is the truth anyway" The rabbit said as it started to laugh, while it got closer to Naruto, to see his face, and as a result, when Naruto saw it's face, it made him loose the little patience, that he had left. He had to kill a certain beast, with large ears, and he will do it now. "No Naruto, what are you doing??" said the rabbit as it was force to immediately jump out of there, by a sudden attack, that Naruto had made to it.
"I don't care who the hell you are, but you have dared to control other people's lives for your own gainfulness. You're going down!!" Shot back Naruto at the rabbit, as he started to run after it.
'Oh Naruto-kun, I would have never believe that the jailor of the nine tail fox could be this stupid. I thought that with your status as a ninja and, obviously, as a demon jailor you would have entertain me more…but since the very beginning you have not been able to find out that all of this was already part of the plan. Oh well, keep going after me like this, as I'm going to be the one to claim you for, Akurei-sama, when you have fallen right in to my trap.'Smiled the rabbit as it continued to run throughout the forest, with Naruto following it.
-e-
"Where the hell did that fucking rabbit went?" yelled Naruto as he had suddenly lost track of it. "But most importantly where the hell am I? I could have sworn that I have seeing all the parts of this forest by now; and this place weren't in it." He continued, as looked at his surroundings, where he find some differences with the other parts of the forest. One of them was on the trees, where he wouldn't have find out much, if it wasn't by its terrible smell that it let go out from its porous. The other difference, that was the reason that he had lost sight of that damn rabbit several moments ago, was the presence of a fog that occupied the entire area; Something that was strange, because fogs in this areas, only appeared when it had rained, and it hasn't. The main and final reason was based on that this part of the forest looked like it was already in the morning, but he could have sworn that it was still the other way around. "This is really strange, but I have too find that damn rabbit soon, and that is NOW!" Exclaimed, as he made use of his favorite jutsu, once again. Making twelve copies of himself.
"Clones!" Instantly all of his copies, turned to look at him, firmly. "I want you all to help me on a search of this 'pink' fur rabbit, if one of you ever finds him, I want this clone to capture it, and bring it to me… understand."
"Yes, Sir!" Answered immediately the clones to Naruto, as they then began their search, taking different directions as they went; leaving their leader behind.
Naruto just signed, as he was now loosing sight of them, while he stayed behind a little longer. 'This rabbit business, is really pissing me off, I hope some of the clones will catch him soon, so I can go back home soon.' Though Naruto, as he also joined the search; missing the set of eyes that had been watching him all this time from top of a tree.
'Good Naruto-kun, so you're not as stupid as though you were. So you really are going to give me the challenge that I wanted before I finally capture you, and put an end to my mission. (Laughing) Well, I only have one thing to say, I will gladly accept.'
-f-
"Were would I be, if I was a rabbit?" asked himself one of the clones as he was searching behind some woods, with still no luck. "What was that?" Ask himself, as he was push back to the floor, as a strange shadow pass in front him, from the woods that he was looking for, on extremely high speeds, continuing its road as it pass him.
"That was the prey that we were ordered to capture…Naruto 5." Said another clone that had randomly appeared from nowhere.
"What?! So that shadow that pass over me, was that rabbit that we have been looking for the pass two hours."
"Yeah…I was originally following it, with three more clones. We were following it, for quite a while, until we saw that randomly divided itself in two, and in seconds, we weren't just following one rabbit, we were following two.
"So then why are you here, Naruto 3? What happened to rest of the clones?!" Asked 5, nervously, as it shaked number 3, for answers.
"They are no longer here, Naruto 5. To at least be able to destroy one of them, since we weren't able to capture it, was with the sacrifice of most of us, making me the only one to have survive it."
"So…tell me! Who are the clones that we are not going to see again?" Asked the clone, while lamenting the news.
"Those were the clones that were chosen to replace the second, the forth, and the seventh positions."
"I understand…(Drying off his tears, and changing his face into a more serious one) so I guess this is not common rabbit as we thought…could it be a summon?"
"It could be, that is one of our suspects, but if it was; it has then being controlled by a person, or another village…but either way, we have to capture that rat now!"
"Who are you calling a rat? RAT!" Answered back a voice, from their backs. As they looked back, they were surprised to see that 'lovely' pink rabbit.
"I can't believe this, is that pink furball, and is right in our noses." Murmured 5, too number 3.
"Yes, I guess I have a second change to try to capture it, once again." Answered 3, as it place himself into an attack position.
"So you're the famous pink rabbit, which has been molesting our Naruto-sama, and not only that…destroying several of our colleagues as well, for the past few hours." Exclaimed number 5, as it took his attack position as well.
"What if I am? What are two pathetic clones like yourselves are going to do about it?
"Why are you so sure that none of use isn't our real one? Because I could be the real Naruto Uzumaki." Exclaimed once again, number 5, as it made mocking movements with his body.
"Stop already, number 5…it is the truth what she is saying. In the last fight, we did the same thing, and ended with only me as the only survival, because we didn't knew that she could sense the clones to the real ones.
"She?"
"Yes, during our fight, we were able to discover, that she was actually female."
"Oh please Sir, tell me what more have you discovered." Said the clone in a mocking way. In that moment if the clone, wouldn't have distracted himself, with making the mocking; he would have had sufficient time to dodge this powerful headed attack, were the rabbit had thrown itself with all its body, making a hit on the clone's stomach. This as result pulled back the clone to a tree, breaking it in half, and then causing the clone to blow up.
"How dare you attack us, this way? We weren't even looking at you?! Yelled number 3, as it made a last time look, to the tree, were number 5 had disappeared.
"Who told you two that I had to wait for both of you to begin a fight." (Laughing) And anyway, if I remember correctly, one of your rules, as a ninja, is to always use all the opportunities that come up.
This only increase the clone's irritation toward the rabbit. As with this last clone, that the rabbit killed, increasing it to another clone that he had to make revenge for, as well. He couldn't capture it any longer, since he only had one though on his mind about the rabbit. "I will kill you!" Claimed the clone, as he made the signal to the beginning of his fight.
---5min---
"That was easy, don't you think?" Asked the rabbit, in a mocking way, as it looked at the clone; who was now dropped on the floor.
"Is that was all, that you had to offer me? Sorry, but if that's the case, I think it would have been better for you and your friend to pretend that I was not here…don't you think? That way, maybe your friend would have been still a live."
"Go to hell!" answered back, number 3, very weakly.
The rabbit just smiled, as it closed its eyes, and then making a sudden turn giving the clone's, its back. Then bringing up, one of its hands, it let produce a sudden noise, coming from its fingers, as it crossed them. This causing the clone, to be blown up on fire, making it disappear instantly. "Oh well, this makes seven on my list, so this makes four that I still have to destroy, before I get to meet with my real prize." Said the rabbit, as it continued on its way.
-g-
"I can't take this anymore. How much longer are they planning on keeping me here, blowing up, and still going up and up, with no planning's of going down." 'It must have passed like two hours already, and I'm still on this position.' Thought the girl, as she was trying to keep her dress down, as the air, was pushing it up, what was left of it really, since because of the strong currents, most of her dress was already badly damage.
Continuing on her endless going up cycle, she didn't failed to notice the new presence at her other side, coming at her direction and really fast. "Who is that? I can't believe this…is…is a boy."
-h-
---30min---
"I can't believe that rabbit has already destroyed eleven of my clones, with just leaving me one clone left to help me around, and I still haven't found out a clue, of where would that stupid rabbit might actually be…this really is getting a little depressing." Naruto signed, as he kept walking forward, with less spirit on him than before.
"Naruto-kun, don't tell me you have given up already."
"Not in a million years, you furball, Uzumaki Naruto never gives up, dattebayo." Naruto immediately answered back as he immediately looked back, making face to the rabbit.
"So we meet again, Naruto-kun, I have to say that your clones, truly were something; but at the end they were just some second-rate clones. We can never compare their power, with the power of their creator; so…(Demonic eyes) GIVE ME THE BATTLE, THAT I HAVE LONG WISH FOR!"
"What?" Was the only thing that manage to say Naruto, as he was instantly punch on his face, making him roll over the floor several times, by its power.
"How disappointing, my little Naruto-kun. Is this, the only thing you are going to offer me…I have to admit that even the clones did manage to offer a much better fight, than this; but you with just one punch, you're already on the floor. I'm really disappointed."
"You old hag, how dare you insult me like that! You wish for me to give you a real fight, then you will have it, because you are going down! Naruto shouted, as he threw himself to the rabbit, with several kicks and punches at it.
"Oh Naruto-kun, you really do have your ways to make a woman laugh, but enough…Is already time to put an end to this mission." The rabbit trough laughs, as it easily manage to avoid all of Naruto's attacks, and in occasions making its own attacks as well.
"How dare you laugh to me like that? Now, I'm really mad!" Naruto screamed, as made a large jump to the sky, and then in the air, he gave life to his most powerful attack. "RASENGAN!" A cape of smoke, now occupied the area, as it left Naruto with the incapability to see, for a few seconds. Then as it left the area, Naruto noticed that he had made a giant hole on the earth's floor with his attack…but as he looked more he also noticed that the rabbit was nowhere to be seen. "Did I do it? Did I finally put an end to that annoying rabbit?"
"Wrong as always, Naruto-kun." Said the rabbit as it suddenly took Naruto by surprise, as it had given him, once again, another punch on his face; but this time after it had surprisingly appeared from the earth below, where Naruto stood. "I said enough Naruto-kun, I must say that this last attack was really brilliant, and did take me by surprise, but I have too put an end on this mission already." Said the rabbit, as a pink wand, with a red face rabbit on the top, appeared out of nowhere, on its right hand.
"How did you do that?" Naruto asked, surprised as he pointed at the wand.
"That is not of your concern. The real question is how much damage can it do to you? Don't you think?"
"I don't care if you had a billion of those things in your hands, right now. I will make you pay, for all of this!" Naruto answered back, as he went to start over his hands signs again.
"But Naruto-kun, you're already too late."
"Huh?"
"You have already fallen right into my trap."
"What do you mean?"
The rabbit just laugh as it raised its wand up. "Takame Kurayami Keiji's!" The rabbit proclaimed, as then the red rabbit face, from the wand, began to glow; slowly opening its little mouth…liberating a black smoke, that in second's began to take the form a falcon.
"What kind of jutsu is this?" Naruto asked, as he watched how the falcon turned everything around him in complete darkness, as it flew around them, until he was just surrounded by darkness with only the rabbit and the falcon as the only things that he could still see.
Well, now that he is trapped inside. Spirit, finish it already!" Commanded the rabbit, as the falcon, as an answer, began to make circles around Naruto, really fast. As a minute pass, the ground started to glow in the form of an eye.
"What the hell?!" Was the only thing that he managed to say, as he was now falling into a deep giant hole, after in just seconds before the ground around him, miraculously disappeared, after that strange falcon and the giant eye, had dissolved.
"So I guess we will meet again in the future, my little Naruto-kun. WHAT?"
As he was about to fall down into the bottom, he manage to accomplish his favorite jutsu. "Kage Bushi no jutsu!" Making forty clones of himself, with the first, trying as hard as it could to keep hold of the cliff, while the other clones, where holding each other feats, one behind the other, creating this sort of live line, until it reach Naruto, who was the last one in them. 'That was close.'
"So you're still here, Naruto-kun, now I am certainly impressed, but this is as far as you go." the rabbit said, as it raised its wand once again.
"What the fuck do you want with me; just live me the hell alone!"
The rabbit just ignored him as it continued with one of it spells. "Monoshiru no hono'o-sen!" Making its red rabbit, from its wand, to glow once again, but with this time, as it opened its mouth, a humongous amount of fire began to be brought out of it. "Let see if your clones are resistant to fire, my little Naruto-kun." Launching its powerful burning spell to the clones, causing each clone to blow up, as it burned them; disappearing, one by one, until it finally reach the last one of them, leaving Naruto with nothing to grab himself into.
The rabbit just laugh as it stood there. "Good bye, my little Naruto-kun…I guess I will just see you on the future where you belong." Said the rabbit as it was currently looking down at the bottom, were Naruto had just disappear into. "I hope you don't mind, my status." Said the rabbit once again, as it slowly began to take the form of a woman.
-i-
'I can't believe this, I Uzumaki Naruto, was awfully beaten by a mere rabbit. This is really getting on my nerves.' Naruto thought, as he was still falling and falling into an endless vacuum. 'But why am I still falling? I should have already been dead by now. Why haven't I been squashed and broken to pieces already? It has already passed, like fifteen minutes.' Naruto asked himself as he continued to fall, in his sitting position.
An hour had pass and he was still on the same situation, but as Naruto thought, and thought he couldn't get himself on thinking of another solution, of getting out of this mess…he was getting sick of it. "I can't take this anymore, if this endless falling was design for the users to oblige them on making them decide a sudden suicide before they arrive at the bottom, I must say, they are highly successful, this really is making me nuts." As he was saying that, far away in the bottom another person was currently passing through the same problem, the only difference was that this person was going up, instead of down.
Another hour had pass, and this time Naruto was already thinking on ways of how to kill himself, he had already decided a long time ago, that the test has won. Then taking a kunai out, he pointed it, as his neck.
'What is that?' Thought Naruto as he noticed something coming toward him, from the bottom; this, in away, saving him from committing a crazy action. "It's coming here…is a…..is a…….is a GIRL!!??" scream by surprise as he could now see the new stranger, who was still coming at his direction, and so was he with her. Minutes has passed, and they where now close to one another, making both able to se each others faces clearly. He could see that the girl was beautiful, with her long brown hair and eyes, she was really a dream come true, wearing a blue dress, with a red ribbon on her blouse. "Wait a second, why is she here and, going up? Does she have a jutsu for flying? And why is she keeps coming toward me, is she an enemy, that has come to eliminate me? Naruto was filling his mind with a lot of questions, as the girl was now just almost in front him; keeping his kunai out, just in case…but as she kept going on his way, he made a stop to his questions, since they were about to crash.
"What the hell was that?!" Naruto asked himself, completely surprise, as he saw how she kept going up, after she had pass through him. As he left his state of shock, he then looked down once more; only to be welcomed by a sudden brightness that captured him completely.
-j-
'Where am I? What is this place?' asked himself Naruto, after he had woken up from his unconsciousness, and had slowly started to pick himself up from the floor, to then notice his surroundings. His surroundings were rather odd to him at first, as he noticed that the walls, the floor, and even the ceiling of the room, were all painted in pink; and most of the walls were holding some weird looking paintings, of enormous sizes, that he had never in his dear life, had seeing before. Another weird thing that he noticed, were the composure of the furniture, as it was composed of some random tables, holding some, really expensive looking, jars at the first glance. The only things that not seem to be repeated on the room, as he look more, was some sort of plant, on a base; which was located near some sort of a black machinery, that he had also haven't seeing before, but he noticed that it needed a chair to operate or something, since on the front side of the machine, which was opposite to him, was a small black chair. As he looked back to the strange plant, once again, he noticed that it was holding some strange kind of yellow fruit. If he hadn't felt the doors of the room opening, he would have gladly taken, and eat some of it.
"Haruhi-chan!! Haruhi-chan!! We were all been looking for you for ages, Haruhi-chan!! Where have you been? Said the boy that had entered the room, as he was jumping all over him, with a pink rabbit doll on his hands, which sadly brought Naruto back some bad memories.
"Haruhi-chan? I'm not Haruhi-chan…I'm Uzumaki Naruto."
"Sure you are." (Turning his eyes, for a moment) "But first things first, Haruhi-chan, when did you let your hair grow back again? Are you using another of those wigs again? Asked the boy, as he pointed at his hair.
"Huh?" Naruto answered confused, as he began to touch his hair, only to feel something strange. 'This is strange, my hair feels like it has grown a mile'. Naruto thought as he took some of his hair, so he could see it, with his eyes. "Brown? Why is it brown?"
"Haruhi-chan it has always been brown, like mine has always being blond, and my dear Usa-chan has always being pink." Responded the boy, as he was now hugging his rabbit doll even more.
Naruto as he heard what the boy said, immediately closed his eyes, he didn't wanted to look down at his body, he was afraid of what he might encounter at looking at it. "Please don't, please don't." He slowly opened his eyes and looked down at his body, only to look on what he was afraid of.
"Haruhi-chan, where are you going?" the boy asked as he saw Naruto going out of the room without a word.
-f-
As Naruto exit the room, he immediately started to run as if the creeper himself was after him. As he ran, he entered every single room, that he pass by, as he searched for a mirror or something that he could use to look at his face. As he was entering yet another room, he noticed a pair of two boys on it, but he immediately pass them by, completely ignoring there presence, as in front of him, was finally the one thing he was looking for.
"Haruhi-chan what are you doing in here?" both boys asked at the same time, but Naruto ignored them, yet another time, as he slowly walk forward into the mirror.
"WHY THE HELL I'M IN THAT FUCKING GIRL'S BODY?!" Scream again, as he lost his consciousness.
-g-
(At another place, in another time)
"Naruto….Naruto…..Naruto are you alright?"
"Who are you, and why are you calling me Naruto? I'm not Naruto, I'm Haruhi." Haruhi weakly answered back, as she lost her consciousness.
-h-
(1) In this story when a clone gets exploded, and it wasn't caused by its master, or by himself; then it is considered dead, since at the exact moment it was exploded it is immediately replace by another clone.
Another note: For those who had actually watch or read, Ouran High school host club, then I will have to say that in this story I had made it with Haruhi going to underground court after meeting all of her friends at the club, not before.
There you have it, my new rewritten version of this story. Oh well, I hope you like the new changes and additions, and even though is still needs some big corrections, I still hope to see more than one review on this new rewritten story.
