Disclaimer: well,this is my first fanfic EVER! And well, I alppriciate if you give me kind reviews, and if you didn't like it, don't say anything at all. Well, I do not own Love Hina, but the words are MINE:D (and this is how I think the story should go..:D)

The promis..

Two kids were playing in the sand castle, as the little girl that was their said to a young boy, around the age of five, "Did you know, if two people go to Tokyo University together, they live happily ever after?"

The boy shook his head. "No, I never knew that.." and without warning, the girl leans over and says, "When we grow up, lets go to Tokyo University together!" with a peck on the cheek.

The boy froze, as he nodded. "Sure. It's a promise then." He said smiling.
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Chapter one; The Sudden Appearance..

It was a long morning for a young boy, around the age of nineteen, named Keitaro Urashima. He walked around the street, searching franticly for a Hotel called The Hinta House. He walked up a flight of stared, as he said to himself, "Mad, I thought that the Hinta House was here somewhere.." and he was right. There was the hotel, clear out of the blue, as he smiled wide, and he walked in.

. "I hope she lets me stay for a few days to study." He walked in, as he called out, "Hello! Grandma? Anyone!" He looked around, and he sighed. "Well, I should wait for her in her room.." So he walked down the hall way, and into a random room, which was a BIG mistake.

There was a girl, naked as a pair of panties were by her legs, as Keitaro blushed, and he screamed out, "Sorry! Didn't mean to intrude or anything!" and the girl just staired.

"Hi!" she said, as she looked at him. "I never saw you here before. Well, let me introduce myself, but first let me put some cloths on."

and she did, as he stood there, looking very confused.

Minutes later, she came back out. "Well, my name is Koalla Su! But call me Su." She said, smiling. He just sort of stared at her.

"Erm..hi Koa—I mean Su. My name is Keitaro Urashima. I was just looking for my Grandma..she runs this place." He said, looking at her.

"Oh, her? She left a wile ago. If you want someone to help you, try going five doors to the left.." she said with a smirk.

"Um..ok, thanks." He said, as he said good-bye and he opened the door five doors to the right, seeing some girls in there in the nude. "Oh crap!" he yelled, as the girls sworm around him and knocked him out.

Hours past as he woke up, and he looked around, seeing the girls around him. "I'm sooo sorry!" he said, as he got to his knees. "Please don't kill me!" he pleaded, as one of the girls laughed.

"Well, well, well.. If it isn't my nephew, Keitaro." Hakura spoke. Keitaro had a glimps of her gace, as his face lit up.

"HAKURA!" He said in excitement, as he hugged her. "I am soo sorry for walking in there. That Koalla Su person told me to walk in their so I could see where Grandma went.."

Everybody stared at su, as she sweatdropped. "It was just a joke.." she said, rubbing the back of her head. "But I thought it was kind of funny."

Everybody still glared at her. A Swordswoman grabbed her sword and held it by Keitaro's neck. "What is your purpose here?" she said in a cool voice, as she held it closer.

"I just came to visit my grandma to see if I can study! I still failed to get into Tokyo U!" He said, pleeding again.

Everybody stared. "Your aiming for Tokyo U? A older girl asked, much like him.

"Well, yeah. But my grades are pretty ba—" but he was cut off, as everybody exept a blondey circled her. "Your going to Tokyo u!" they said in a group.

He nodded, as one person said, "Well, then, you can stay in her room. By the way, my name is Kitsune." She said in a pretty voice.

The blond girl stood up, as she said, "WAIT JUST A DAMN MINUTE! We can't just let a perverty boy walts in here and let him stay! This is a Girls dorm for crying out loud! WE can't just change it on a whim!"

Shinbou, a blue haired girl went to her with su on her side, and she said, "Don't be mean, Naru Narusaguwa." And the girl next to her said, "Meanie." And she added, "Old hag."

Naru looked shocked, as she looked at them all, her beautiful hair in her face, and she said, "Fine..We shall welcome him in..for now."

Everybody gathered around him said united, "Welcome to the Hinta House!"

Keitaro had waterfalls out of his eyes, as he prayed in his head, "Thank you, God, For letting me stay in a hotel filled with girls! This is the nicest thing you have every done for me!"
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Well, I hope you enjoyed my first fan-fic. Please put nice R&Rs, nothing mean. I shall make the next chapter on the twelth, hopefully. So I shall write until then. Ja Ne:D

-MeliniumForce389