This is my first story. Please review it. Sorry if it is short or weak.
"Boom!" Fireworks went off. Lights scattered the night sky. Glowing figures fluttered through the blue heavens. Thanks to the work of Fire Fairies. Analisa hid under her big, comfy, pillow covered island, otherwise known as a bed. Long, scraggly finger reached for her small wrist. "Silas! Help!" Suddenly a big white dragon with big blue eyes appeared. It roared a mighty roar. The fingers let go and hinged back. Analisa sprawled out under the bed. "Thank you." She huffed and crawled out from under the big white fluff. The dragon rubbed up against her small body, pushing her back a step. She climbed out of the window and held onto the beast's neck. It drifted into the sky as she closed her eyes. Wind tustled against her brown-auburn hair, making it fly in many directions. She didn't care though. The feel of guide-spirits flowing through her was magical. It made her transparent wings sparkle. Shouts and celebration music filled her ears along with the beat of her Dragon's wings. The moon's glow was all covering the view in her eyes. It was the Sunny Frost Fairy Festival. Groups of colors wiggled and moved across the forest floor below. There was brown, the Devas. And green, the Brownies. Then in blue was the Water Fairies. Even a small group of purple, the close to extinction fairies, Sprites were there. Splashes of orange, pink, white and yellow gathered to join in on the festivities. That means Asrais, Alvens, Faes, and Perris. The winged creature hovered over the purple. Fairies moved along so the dragon could peacefully land. Analisa hopped off her pet as it flew off. Her purple dress flew along in the cold breeze. Music flooded the field and friendly words were exchanged between her and the Devas. Sprites and Devas got along very well together. In fact, her best friend is a Deva. Her name is Lavelle. Lavelle approached Analisa. Her black hair was struggling to stay still as the gentle air pushed it back. Her pixie built like body was standing up straight. You could see her breath in the freezing air as she exhaled. "Lavelle" Analisa whispered. Lavelle coudn't of heard her though. Lavelle was too wrapped up in all the joy of the holiday. Smiles, warmth, and flutters of luminous blazes overwhelmed her friend. "Lavelle" Analisa spoke louder which brought currency to Lavelle. Her attention was pointed towards the short Analisa. "I'm leaving tomorrow. After the festival. I have no reason to stay here. Ranevrak is after me. Before I came one of his followers, Lixifaes I think, tried to capture me." Lavelle had a worried look on her face. She started to speak slowly, and afraid. "Wait, so an evil Elf is after you? Just tell the council. They have defeated him before." Analisa nodded and then sighed. "No, the Stone Prince defeated him. Remember, he died in the progress." Lavelle just looked up at the misty, yet bright spots in the sky. She thought about what Analisa had said a moment ago. "Yes, well the Stone Prince was followed by Ranevrak and his clan once, and then he became a great ruler and hero." Analisa stared at Lavelle like she was stupid. "Seriously? I don't want to die!" Analisa acknowledged. "Well maybe death is the answer to life." Lavelle stated proudly before leaving. Analisa thought about what she said. Maybe she was right. Maybe her sacrifice was the protection to a new generation, but it would take alot. Maybe if she fought hard enough, she could live and be something better in this town.
Her thoughts were rudely interrupted by shouts in her pointy ears. Fingers pointed up at the sky. The Radiant Angel grand finally. Swarms of flames, glossy orbs, celestial bodies, and burnished spheres gathered together in form of the ultimate angel shape. Just to be built of beaming aura. A spectacular combination of dark and light, a murky twilight version in pitch black. It's just a beautiful sight. Maybe the last happy sight that Analisa would see for a while. She looked over at her cheerful friend, Lavelle. Dancing in a crowd of fairies, worry free and as joyful as ever.
So there it is, please review. 33
