Sisters
Intro:
Okay so here you are the very first chapter of Sisters, okay things you might want to know… Naruto is not the main character here… in fact, this is my first attempt at having someone else as the main character who will become glaringly obvious once you get into the chapter. Don't worry though, Naruto will still be very important in this story it's just that none of the characters know that yet -. Below is a full summary.
Summary: Thirteen years ago Kyuubi's daughter's left demon world to live as humans after their mother had been poisoned and disappeared. They vowed they would meet again one day, that day has come. Six sisters bent on finding each other, protecting their precious people, clearing the name of their mother, and killing the one responsible for it all. But it has been thirteen years living as a human, and with the time their memories have dimmed. When they meet will they recognize each other? Or will they wind up killing each other?
Oh and if you were wondering, the voting wound up a tie and I was unable to pick one story over the other so instead I chose to be incredibly cruel to my beta's and put them both out there… so if your interested go look up Konoha the Other Village and please leave me reviews. Arigato. Rating is for mild language and just in case. -
Disclaimer: I own Kyuubi's daughters heritages, sadly I chose not to make a zillion OC's and instead used preexisting characters… the opening should tell you how they can still be normal but also be daughters of Kyuubi.
"Speaking"
Thinking
"Talking to Inner Sakura."
"Inner Sakura talking."
"Remembered dream."
Jutsu
means this part of the conversation is unable to be heard
We will meet again-Chapter One
…somewhere in demon world…
Six figures shrouded in shadows huddled together on a mist covered plain. The only thing that can be made out is that they are all distinctly female and have a multitude of tails swirling behind them.
"I can't believe Okaa-san is really gone." Said a strong voiced female.
"What are we gonna do?!" a hysterical voiced female asked in a panic.
"Calm down onee-chan." Said a soft voiced female.
"Calm down? HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO DO THAT?!" the hysterical voice replied.
"Shut up !" a determined voice said as the sound of someone getting hit over the head was heard.
"Ow! whatya do that for?" the hysterical voice said, now a little calmer.
"Don't we have enough to worry about without us fighting, littermates?" a sad voiced female asked, causing the others to quiet.
"What should we do?" the quiet voice asked.
"We can't stay here, that's for sure." replied the determined voice.
"Let's go to human world." Said a steely voiced female entering the conversation.
"Human world ?" questioned the strong voice.
"What the heck are we supposed to do there?" questioned the hysterical voice.
"The way I figure it, whoever poisoned Okaa-san probably wanted to use her for something in human world," answered the steely voice, getting several gasps at her assumption.
"And if we're in human world when they use Okaa-san then we can find them!" exclaimed the strong voice.
"Yeah but we still can't save Okaa-san," said the sad voice.
"That may be so but we can find out who poisoned her in the first place," said the soft voice with a hint of evil in her voice.
"And then we kill them," replied the sad voice with a sinister laugh.
"That's too good for the bastards," said the hysterical voice with malicious intent.
"Yeah, but how do we get to human world? We're not old enough to just port there," said the strong voice.
"We use Kousei," said the steely voice.
"But that would mean we would each wind up with a different human family," said the soft voice.
"And who knows what we would wind up looking like," said the hysterical voice.
"Not to mention we don't know where we will wind up," said the sad voice.
"We don't have much of a choice now do we ?" said the determined voice.
"Not really, without Okaa-san to protect us we are just too vulnerable to stay in demon world," said the soft voice as they felt several high level demons begin approaching their location.
"We have to do this now !" said the steely voice.
"Will we ever see each other again?" asked the sad voice.
"Definitely !" replied the strong voice.
"It's a promise!" said the hysterical voice.
They formed a circle as a soft glow could be seen through the mist as the promise became a demonic bond.
"Let's do this now!" said the steely voice.
"Okay," said the strong voice.
"I guess," said the sad voice.
"Let's get this over with already!" said the hysterical voice.
Power surged as they channeled their power into what appeared to be seals seen threw the rapidly clearing mist. With a shout of 'Kousei' the mist cleared reviling an empty plain void of any sign that anyone had ever been there.
…thirteen years later, human world…
Sakura sat straight up in her bed, covered in a cold sweat. "What's with that dream?" asked inner Sakura.
"I have no clue, but that's the tenth time this month I've had it, and I still can't hear the names." Sakura thought back.
"Sakura honey, are you okay?" asked Sakura's mother, sticking her pink head into Sakura's room. Looking at her mother Sakura replied.
"I'm okay, thanks Kaa-san."
"Alright dear, breakfast is ready," her mother said leaving.
Crawling out of bed Sakura got dressed, a frown forming on her face. As she brushed her hair a voice echoed from her dream "Will we ever see each other again?" Shaking her head to clear it Sakura left her room and headed to the kitchen.
Sitting down at the table she picked over her breakfast, the dream still haunting her. With a sigh she sat down her chopsticks and stood up. "I have to go now Kaa-san."
Looking up from the sink where she was washing dishes Sakura's mother asked "Mission?"
Nodding Sakura said, "Yeah, but it's probably something stupid."
…one hour later in a forest just outside of Konoha…
"Target in sight," a voice said over the headset.
"Location?" another voice asked.
"East of target, twenty feet."
"West of target, ten feet."
"South of target, five feet," three voices answered.
"I'm going in." said one voice.
"Roger." The others replied.
The sound of rustling bushes filled the air before...
"GOT YOU!" was heard before the same voice yelled out "Owwwwwww!"
"Confirm red bow on ear," came from the headset as Sasuke and Sakura entered the clearing where Naruto was holding a furiously scratching cat.
"Confirmed," said Sakura into the headset.
…Hokage tower some time later…
Naruto sat dejectedly on the floor of the mission room. Sakura and Sasuke to his side with Kakashi standing behind them reading his book: all waiting in dread for their next mission.
"Okay you could weed, baby-sit the fire dynamo's son…" the Hokage started only to get cut off by Naruto yelling.
"NO WAY! Can't we have a cooler mission?"
"Don't be foolish Naruto, you just graduated!" said Iruka from the Hokage's side. Nodding the Hokage began explaining the mission ranking system only to find himself ignored as Naruto chatted with Sasuke and Sakura about ramen.
"DON'T BE SO IMPUTENT!" Iruka yelled in outrage.
Naruto turned and said, "Come on ojii-san, I'm not a little kid anymore."
"I agree with Naruto-kun!" Inner Sakura said.
"Me too," thought Sakura as she looked on with a sigh.
The Hokage smirked and said "Alright then how about a C-rank mission?"
"YATTA!" cheered Naruto. "So what's our mission?" he asked excitedly.
The Hokage smirked again and said "You will be escorting…" he was once again cut off by Naruto.
"A PRINCESS?!"
This caused the Hokage to fall out of his chair laughing which in turn caused Naruto to scowl. Pulling himself together the Hokage got back in his chair and said to the guards at the door "Send him in."
The door opened and out stepped a grisly old man with a large sake bottle in hand. Taking a swig from the bottle with an audible gulp the man looked at the team before him. "You call this an escort team? They look really weak to me, especially the small one." He said with a belch.
As Kakashi restrained Naruto, Sakura scrunched up her face into a frown. 'We're supposed to protect this ingrate?!'
"I ought to kick his butt!" Inner Sakura said in a rage at being called weak.
"I assure you my team is not weak, and you have me, a jounin," Kakashi said to the man.
"Humph," said the man before saying, "I'm Tazuna the world's greatest bridge builder!"
The Hokage looked at team seven and said, "Your mission is to guard Tazuna-san back to Wave," with a chuckle at their expressions.
…later that day at Konoha gate…
As the group set off Naruto chatted on about how it was the first time he'd been out of the village. Normally Sakura would have been fusing at Naruto for being so loud or trying to get a date with Sasuke, but right now her mind was preoccupied.
'What is up with that dream?' She thought to herself going over it once again in her mind. She was so preoccupied that when two ninja jumped out of a puddle on the side of the road she didn't even notice.
As Kakashi was shredded to pieces Naruto froze in shock as the two ambushing ninja targeted Tazuna behind him, intending to go through him. Without thought Sakura sent a fist into the gauntlet inches from Naruto.
Kakashi chose this moment to intervene and knocked the two rogue ninja out. Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, and Tazuna stared at the shattered gauntlet that had resulted from Sakura's punch as Sakura's eyes widened to the size of saucers as she stared at her unmarred hand.
Naruto recovered first and said "That was awesome Sakura-chan!" blinking unexpectedly Sakura nodded dumbly.
'Who taught her that?' Kakashi thought to himself.
'How did she do that?' thought Sasuke.
'This chick's a monster!' Tazuna thought to himself.
Looking at her fist Sakura gaped at the feeling of familiarity punching the gauntlet had brought. "What the heck was that?" Inner Sakura said flabbergasted.
"I'm not sure." Sakura replied.
Shaking his head Kakashi turned to Tazuna "Would you like to tell me why ninja are after you?" he asked causing the other man to gulp. With a sigh Tazuna told them of Gato and of the bridge he was building.
"Alright team I'll let you decide," said Kakashi looking at the three children. Sasuke looked at the other two and said, "Let's continue."
Naruto nodded energetically and said "Heck yeah, we kick the bad guys butts!"
Sakura gathered her courage and with a nod said, "I'm for continuing as well." Kakashi nodded and the group set off once more. Before long they had boarded a small boat and were headed for the Land of Waves through the water way.
Sakura was still looking at her unmarked fist 'That should have hurt… shouldn't it have?' She thought in confusion.
"Sakura," said Kakashi drawing her attention.
"Hai, sensei?" she asked, looking slightly nervous.
"If you don't know where it came from then it must have been there all along waiting for you." The cyclopean shinobi said with an eye smile.
"You think so?" asked Sakura.
"Oh heck yeah! That had to be it!" said Naruto cheerfully.
Sakura nodded and gave a small smile as they left the boat and began their walk to Tazuna's house. When a light mist filed the air Kakashi frowned before he heard a buzzing. His visible eye widened as he shouted "Get down!" He, Naruto, and Sasuke hit the ground and Sakura grabbed Tazuna and shoved him to the ground with her.
As Kakashi and the newcomer, who was now identified as Momochi Zabuza, talked about bingo books, a frown marred Sakura's face. Standing up she looked at a tree behind Zabuza. Sniffing, she once again smelled snow and vanilla. 'What is this scent?' She thought to herself.
"Better yet why do you know it?" asked Inner Sakura.
…in a tree behind Zabuza…
A figure wearing an ANBU mask frowned as the scent of fire and cherries filled their nose. 'What is this feeling?' The figure thought, looking from behind the tree to where Zabuza stood with the others.
The figure's eyes widened as the pink haired kunoichi looked almost directly at them. 'Did she see me?' The figure thought ducking back behind the tree.
Zabuza narrowed his eyes when he noticed the direction of Sakura's gaze. 'Does she know?' He thought to himself as his battle with Copy Cat Kakashi began.
The end:
Okay there you go. Sakura is officially the main character of this story, if you don't like it gomen… but don't read and please don't flame me about how you think Sakura is an evil big headed bitch or something… yeah your opinion…I let you have yours and I don't complain… I have mine I expect the same respect I give you to be given me. That's all I will say but if you rant about this expect to be blocked because I will not stand for it, I mean sure in some of the fanfics I read she really is like that and I hate her just like everyone else reading the story but in others she's nice and I like her in those.
In conclusion I will tell you what I have told many others I love Naruto… therefore I love all Naruto characters, I do not love the direction the author has taken some of them in the original story line, but I do not take that out on the helpless characters… Okay sorry 'bout that just thought I should put it out there.
Okay so what did you think? I kinda liked it yeah it has a certain feel about it that makes me want to write more, that's how I decide which of the crazy ideas in my head to write about so here you go the start of a new story.
Also the whole demon world, human world thing was indeed taken from Yu Yu Hakusho as I could find no better way of describing the worlds and that seemed to fit well.
Just for fun I will give you guys and gals something to think about, there are six sisters. I gave each sister a different style of speaking. The styles are Strong, Hysterical, Soft, Sad, Steely, and Determined. Now the question you have before you is who are the sisters?
Remember because of Kousei they will all look quite different depending on who their human parents turned out to be (for more on Kousei see the Original jutsu corner below).
So go on give it a guess who do you think the sisters are? And if you have a guess which voice they would be -. You don't have to if you don't want to but if you get them right I might try and figure out a prize for you - maybe something in this story maybe in another :P
Original jutsu corner (this is where I will list all of my original jutsu and tell you about them, later on in the story there will be a plain jutsu corner for jutsu not made by me):
Kousei-means rebirth-basically it takes a demon and places them in a human womb where they will then mature until they are born as a part of the human family, this idea was also taken from Yu Yu Hakusho, this jutsu can be used at any time but is mainly used by young demons who no longer have anyone to protect them and can not stay in demon world unless they want to die, or by seriously wounded demons who are desperate.
From my Beta Blue Bunny2: I live:jumps around like a crazy person: I betaed this as soon as I got it! Lovely story, lots of yyh references in here. HNN are you gonna call them the Ningemkai and the Makai too? Loves ya!
HNN: hummmmmm not sure yet maybe -
From my other beta Ataraninja: Yay, my story choice. Atara likey lots! Write more plz.
HNN:…I WILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
